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this is still a work in progress army and WIP fluff, please read and any and all suggestions will be taken.

System name: ottaro sextus
Army name: Howling Scythes

Fluff.

A star system, in the farthest and darkest reaches of the galaxy the is a planet, a planet with such a strong fighting spirit, that was renowned as one of the greatest
they thought along side many other forces and helped turn the tide of many battles. there military might was formed through hard and constant training as well as being
left alone for a long time to develop there fighting abilities alone, only being contacted for status reports and for weapon supplies and war machine drops.

however one day as massive star ships headed out for a near by ork invasion into there space they became cut of from the rest of the imperiaum of man, for countless
years they continued to raise there children in the way of war, however some where down the line, it was...changed, there way of looking at the emperor shifted.
started to believe that the emperor had abandon or died, leavening them to look after them self's, then just when they thought they was alone a contingent of guardsmen
entered into orbit from the planet, this is the last communication from this contingent.

"We have landed on the planet, there still seems to be a large population of humans here, how did they survive for so long? was they tainted by the warp there is...."

since then they have been removed from the information of the imperium and there name no longer shows in the list of all star systems providing militey might for the
imperioum, how ever this is there story..


although believing that the emperor had abandend them they continued to fight in his name, believing that he would some day return, then one day the high priest of the
planet started hearing a voice, identifying itself as the emperour telling them that they must wait a little longer, the storm of the warp was growing weaker and ships
would be coming soon to make contact, it also told them that there prayers had been hurd but was wrong, he was not a god of peace but a god of war and blood shed..

believing this they started praying of war and blood, feeling something deep inside them, a surge of energy making them feel stronger than before....

one morning the planet felt silent as a world wide message was broadcast by the commander of the planet..

"people of Bessidra, today we have once again received a message from the golden throne, the fleet has broken through however not unscathed, it appers that the gods of
chaos have gained control of the ships personal, we have received orders to destroy everyone and salvage what we can from the ships to use to fight back agenst
the traitors, we can not lot them leave, we must purge chaos from this galaxy we must destroy them.."

the ships entered orbit the troops landed and sent back a communication to there ship, suddenly the comms went offline the ground troops that recently landed was wiped
outand huge ground cannons fired aiming to disable the ships and kill all personnel abored the plants psykers unleashed a massive attack into space ripping the ships crews
minds to shreds. the fight was over before it had begun.

by time night fell the ships had been dismantled and the dead had been brought planet-side and piled up to create a mountain of over one million dead ready to be
read the emperors last rights and be incinerated. at that moment there was a flash of light atop the bodies as the light faded there on top of the mound appered the
emperor and the golden throne and began to talk.

"Come to plague me, rape and take me, Politician, inquisition They're closing in, the iron round. To strangulate your way to live, They promise everything but they betray
And though they crash the hammer down Hold your ground, or tomorrow it will be taken, Hold your ground or it will be taken,"

The Scythes Cheered and bowed down before him looking at the ground bowing no one spotted the pile of bodies turn to skeletons with a river of blood pooling around the base

they no longer worshiped the emperor, they worshiped KHORNE!.

Need a spell check...
And a sense check...

Its barely legible. I genuinely can't quite figure out what is going on and what happened.

This needs some serious spell checking, grammar and punctuation fixes.

all i got from it was something about Khorne and goign pew pew at space ships with big cannons.

otherwise its out of order, broken grammer and all that.

Yeah Y know there is some bad grammar and spellings, as I said it is a WIP plus I don't have word on my computer only notepad.

But yeah, working on grammar and spell check now. Plus I am looking at adding and removing some detail. Also please note this is the first draft that i wrote in half an hour although Ive been thinking about it for a while, so there is bound to be errors.

You can download Open Office for free.
It's basically microsoft office but all the updates are free.

Ah, thanks purplefood i didn't know about that, I will go and download it now, that should make things easier rather than having to use a dictionary most of the time for spell checking.