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Greetings, my fellow Dakkarites and welcome to my attempt at writing an entire 40K novel (gulp)!

I'm throwing this story out there as a bit of an experiment and need your help to spot any problems with plot, characters, dialogue, story flow etc, as well as the usual spelling and grammar issues. Please feel free to PM me with any questions or suggestions, or simply post a reply on this thread. Just be warned that this is an ongoing first draft and you are seeing it quite literally as it falls out of my head and lands (with a splat) on my word processor... I expect to make lots of revisions over the coming months!

If you want a word doc or pdf of the current story, send me a PM and I'll fire something over as soon as I can.

So, without further ado, here it is! I hope you enjoy the story and I look forward to any comments or criticism.

Peace!


James a.k.a the monkey with frozen brains