Beastman 40k Codex

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**Rainthezangoose**

This is somthing that i threw together a couple of years back. just done like 2-3 edits for this edition. and then i thought why not share it.
its pretty much based of the Renegades and Heretics armies, and is sorta like an extension of one of them (in the sense of servents of slaughter or decay)

feel free to post both positive and negative feedback, just be relevant and don't be a nob :3

**Blackhoof**

Hmmmm there are a few things wrong with it. For instance, the language you use as author is far too informal- a little bit here and there is ok, but you are not having a conversation with the reader, you are telling them who is who and what is what.

Also, i dont like the name changes. Keep names the same- if you have a centigor ported to 40k, call it a centigor.

**Micah da ork**

That looks great. Be careful with some typos. I found that often you use the word "till" which I find unprofessional. Try changing it to "until". Overall it looks great, I can tell you put a lot of work into it.

**Bloodhorror**

Its the Guard Codex... With some Different Names...

**Rainthezangoose**

Thanks for the feedback (yes including you Bloodhorror) will make some changes when i get the chance.

yes i apologies for the "informal feel" and the "till" issue. Dyslexic so not the best writer, but that's why you throw your "work ;P" on the web. ^ ^