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Made in gb
Esteemed Veteran Space Marine






Northumberland

Ok, this is my first foray into writing fluff so bear with me. It's come about as I wanted to write up a bit of a background for a Chaplain kit-bash I created, but kind of grew into a short story the more I got enthused with it. Having said that, this is just a first draft so please feel free to point out any mistakes, canon errors (although it is just fan-fic obviously) and as usual feel free to suggest developments as I don't have the ending completely set in stone... it's more like soupy magma at the moment

Oh, I should also mention that this is a Salamanders short story.

Without further ado then, here's the intro an first section:

The Obsidian Angel

With a roiling burst of purple light and the screaming of hellish warp entities, the hideous nightmare that was the ‘Eternal Damnation’ pulled itself free from the warp and into real space. A horrifying amalgamation of melded ships, their hulls fused together into a crude parody of Imperial Glory, for the past ten millennia it had languished within the corrupting realms of the warp, occasionally returning to haunt Imperial space, but never remaining long enough to be caught. For nigh uncountable centuries many had attempted to purge the monstrosity, only to fall prey to its myriad chambers and the foul denizens that dwelt deep within its darkest reaches...
However, on this occasion of exploration it would be different, for this time it was the visitors were no mere salvagers, chancing their luck for the recovery of arceo-tech. Nor were they simple pirates or Xeno life forms looking for a new home, from which to continue their assault on the ailing Imperium of Man, for this time it was the Fireborn who had come, Astartes of the once-legion Salamanders – and they had come to claim their rightful heritage...

•••

A series of rolling thumps reverberated throughout the battle-scarred hull of the Strike Cruiser ‘Nocturne’s Inferno’ as a slew of runes, scrolling into view upon the many holo-screens clustering the bridge’s command consoles, announced the departure of the boarding party. Glancing down to check the status of each of the 3 torpedoes’ support systems, Techmarine Telamon punched into his console the coordinates for the target situated deep within the hulk’s twisted interior. Following a brief delay the vox burst into life with the crackle of static and a voice, so abyssally deep that it left him in no doubt of whom he was being addressed by, boomed through the speakers ;

++Ark’han to Bridge, coordinates received, closing to target.++

Outside, in the freezing expanse of space, 3 blooms of plasma blossomed as the boarding torpedoes accelerated and roared their way across the void towards the leviathan that was the ‘Eternal Damnation’. Enclosed within the foot thick layers of adamantium, plasteel and ceramite that formed the armoured shell of the torpedo, Chaplain Hyperion Ark’han, a stalwart veteran of countless bloody battles fought in the name of the undying God-Emperor, waited patiently, the armoured digits on his gauntleted hand rapping ceaselessly against the haft of his ancient, but no less deadly, Crozius Arcanum.

“Nervous, Chaplain?”, chuckled an Astartes seated across from Ark’han, his bulk half shrouded by the shadows that lurked in the torpedo’s recesses. Flexing the fingers of his chainfist, Veteran Sergeant Vor’san, a mischievous set to his features, looked up to find the Chaplain staring intently out of the occuliport of the boarding torpedo at the unfathomably large vessel looming into view. Turning to Vor’san, Ark’han sighed patronisingly, the light from his burning red eyes penetrating the lenses of the leering skull-faced helm that was the privilege of only the Chaplaincy to wear, casting an eerie glow over his immense black battle plate. Clad as he was in a suit of the chapter’s revered Terminator armour, specifically designed to survive the harsh conditions, and harsher fighting, that can occur within a space vessel, to any lesser human the Chaplains gesture alone, not to mention his imposing appearance, would usually have intimidated them into silence, however Vor’san was no mere human, nor were any of the torpedo’s other occupants.

“I’m sure, Zarnath,” murmured the Chaplain, “that were I to be nervous you would be the first to recognise it, for I am lead to believe with a nervous disposition comes with a propensity to talk inanely and without intelligence. Perhaps, however, you’ll know more on the matter than I?”

For the briefest of moments, an icy cool pervaded the atmosphere of the torpedo – the Sergeant was known for his quick temper, and the Chaplains acerbic sarcasm was sure to have fired it. A low growl filled the compartment, growing to a hearty laugh as it reached it’s apex. A smile splitting his grizzled, scar-etched face, Vor’san turned to the rest of the squad clustered in the torpedo’s hold. Firedrakes all, veterans of the Salamanders revered 1st Company, the squad knew the value of such joviality in the face of the arduous task ahead;

“By the Emperor he’s quick!” Vor'san announced. Turning back to the Chaplain, Vor’san nodded respectfully, “It’s good to have you with us Hyperion, we will need to gird our souls with faith to survive the trials ahead.”

“Likewise Brother-Sergeant,” replied Ark’han soberly, “this mission promises to be difficult, but the rewards could prove to be of the greatest importance to the Salamanders.”

Glancing up from the maintenance of his weapons, Vor’san’s voice dropped to a more respectful timbre and his face grew sombre as he focused on the task ahead. “Indeed Brother-Chaplain, a vessel from the days of the Legion no less – we can only hope the warp has been kind.”

“It is not warp-damage that I fear Sergeant, but damage of an altogether more mundane nature,” returned the Chaplain, “They tell me it was there...”

Vor’san’s expression grew dark, his eyes downcast, “A world of fire, blood and betrayal...”he whispered, "The sundering of a brotherhood and the fall of a Primarch... Isstvan.”

“Indeed Brother,” replied Ark’han, with a tone that spoke of deep pain and regret, “With the exploration of the ‘Firestorm’, we may gain some insight into the fate of our Primarch.”

“Have you any last changes to the assault plan?” asked Vor’san, checking the magazine of the twin-barreled storm bolter gripped in his other hand.

“No,” Ark’han replied, pointing to the holographic projection set between the harnesses holding the Terminators in place, “We shall breach the ‘Eternal Damnation’ through the upper gun deck of the Lunar Class Cruiser ‘Invictus’. Following consolidation of the extraction point, we will proceed via the hold of this,” he indicated on the hologram, “Galaxy Class freighter – the ‘Sarouter’, to the armoury of the ‘Firestorm’. Once in position, we will form a defensive perimeter around the bulkhead and allow Techmarine Serafino to analyse the contents of the armoury. If anything of worth presents itself, we will load it onto the servitors accompanying Brother Serafino and, once completed, extract back towards the torpedoes. Squad Tul’sa will defend the initial breach whilst we escort the Techmarine and his servitors to secure the armoury.”

“Very well Chaplain,” said Vor’san, his voice taking on a clipped metallic tone as he fitted his helmet, which was cunningly wrought in the form of a snarling reptile. Around him, the rest of Squad Vor’san followed their Sergeant’s lead and made ready for battle.

Mere moments later, across the vox-speakers of all three torpedoes, the automated guidance system chimed the countdown, the arid tones of the servitor slaved to the system filling the torpedoes compartments with a monotonous drawl;

++Impact in Ten seconds... Five... Four... Three... Two... One... Impact.++

With an apocalyptic crash the boarding torpedo slammed into the side of Invictus, tearing through armoured plate as though it were nought but parchment and dismounting enormous weapons batteries with little effort, flinging them down the gun-deck like a child’s forgotten and discarded toys. For a moment the gun-deck was awash in flames as ruptured fuel lines sprayed burning promethium in wild arcs across the cavernous area that made up the deck. A whirlwind of metal tore through the chamber, gutting the deck of anything approaching soft cover, tearing great swathes out of the walls defacing it's once noble lines. An acrid smell spiked through the deck, a mixture of charred metal, stale atmosphere and the burnt flesh of the numerous eviscerated corpses of Invictus' long dead crew. Into this maelstrom of whirling shards and roaring flames, throughout the deck echoed the hiss of pneumatics heralding the opening of the torpedo hatch and, emerging from the mist produced by severed high pressure pipes and the now guttering flames of fuel, the Salamanders strode forward onto the gun-deck.

Ita finis primi pensionem

Bit of a disclaimer here, but if there are any grammatical/spelling mistakes please point them out, I have proof read this numerous times, but a god I am not so there may be some left. Also, I apologise if the dialogue isn't formatted correctly, but it's the best I can do. Anyway, hope you enjoyed it, I look forward to any suggestions!

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This really good, I love the personality of the characters you've chosen!


They/them

 
   
Made in gb
Esteemed Veteran Space Marine






Northumberland

Cheers mate, much appreciated. I'm writing up the second part today, so I'll put it on should sufficient people like this, but that may be in a week or so.

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Made in gb
Esteemed Veteran Space Marine






Northumberland

Ok, I'm not sure if anybody is actually reading this fully, or just passing through, but as I've already finished the 2nd part I may as well stick it on here for those who do want to read a bit more. I've never done an article on here before, but if I manage to get to the end of the story I'll think about compiling all the parts together into one continuos article. Nevermind, here's the second installment.

==Continued==

For millennia it has languished here, this dread tomb of void hardened steel, this crypt of a starship, crewed by corpses long since picked clean of their souls. It was a timeless entity, a being of such age that it had witnessed the fall of a galaxy spanning empire and the birth of a god. It had seen the rise and fall of countless species, watching as they took their first faltering steps into the universe. Yet for all that, there was but one race for which it held particular ire, once race it would have its vengeance upon... Humanity.

•••

Stepping out onto the gun-deck, his sacred Terminator armour’s boots automatically engaging mag-locks to compensate for the lack of gravity caused by the fluctuating power grid in the stricken cruiser, a scene of sheer devastation greeted Ark’han. Power cables, ripped from their mountings, sprayed fat sparks onto the deck plating, threatening to ignite the pools of promethium congealing on the floor. Trails of smoke curled upwards from smashed targeting cogitators and burning apparatus, wafted by the grinding, but surprisingly functional, atmospheric circulation system. Scattered around the cavernous space into which the Astartes had disembarked, vast splinters of metal had pierced and transfixed the walls, the result of the torpedoes violent ingress. However, after further analyses, Ark’han could tell that not all of the damage was the result of the Astartes entry. Underneath the more recent debris, cratered and pitted marks indicated the massive trauma inflicted upon the Invictus by main weapons fire in it’s final moments. The fate of the ship determined, as Ark’hans helmet reticule scanned the vicinity, the more subtle clues such as faded claw gouges on the bulkhead doors, and the wildly placed las-burns around them, hinted at the grim end of the Invictus’ crew. Switching to the external air supply, the Invictus’ atmosphere curled in through his helm’s filters, stagnant and stale yet at the same time his advanced sense of smell could detect a cadaverous sweetness tainting the air. As he breathed in the foul miasma, at his side Vor’san, acting as Ark’han’s second, barked out commands to the strike team;

“Aethon, take the squad and move right to cover the targeting array!”

“Tul’sa, have your squad hold here and consolidate the perimeter!”

“Serafino, find us an access point!”

As the two sergeants set about establishing a beachhead, Ark’han examined the corpses of crewmen strewn about the room. Reaching down, he plucked an object from the lapel of an officer, his arm flash indicating that he had been a 2nd Lieutenant. Straightening up, Ark’han strode over to where Serafino was immersed in freeing up the airlock into a nearby corridor, one holding the great ammunition train that traveled the spine of the ship, servicing all the main weapons with munitions from the magazine;

“Ah, Hyperion,” said the Techmarine, looking up at Ark’han whilst the mechandrites of his servo-harness whirred and probed at the door disconcertingly, as though they possessed a life of their own, “If I can just free up this door, I believe that we can utilise the ammunition thoroughfare to gain access to the Sarouter – was there anything you wanted in particular?”

“Brother,” asked Ark’han somewhat distractedly, “could you run a search on the Inferno’s databases and find out when exactly the Invictus was lost?”

“Certainly,” replied Serafino, “patching through now.”

As Ark’han waited, he mulled over the gravity of his discovery. What implications could this have on the mission? Would the armoury remain intact? Most importantly, in the back of his mind a disconcerting thought manifested itself – how many, if any of them, would survive?

“Brother-Chaplain,” interjected Serafino, dispersing Ark’han’s gloomy thoughts and shaking him from his reverie, “The Inferno has replied to my query. They report that the Invictus was lost in .764 M36. Records show that it was engaged and disabled in the by a Chaos raider – the Styx class Grand Cruiser ‘Doomblade’. Following a refusal to surrender, the last known transmission from Invictus stated they were under main weapons fire with their shields failing. It seems the damage we are witnessing here is pretty concurrent...”

“Hmmm,” rumbled Ark’han, “Interesting...”

“How so Hyperion?” asked Serafino, confusion evident on his expression.

Holding out his hand, Ark’han bade Serafino to look. Peering into his palm, it became clear that, nestled between the huge fingers of Ark’han’s gauntlet, a ting object glimmered – the regimental badge of the 34th Coronian Regiment of Foot.

“Tell me Brother,” posited Ark’han, “How does a guardsman from a regiment formed not 1000 years ago, find his way onto a ship lost at least 6000 years prior?”

“This hulk is a malign monster Chaplain.” Replied Serafino, “The warp engines in contains malfunction and as such its course is random and cannot be plotted. Many ships, both large and small could feasibly be caught unawares by a sudden appearance, giving them no time to react or veer away. Survivors are not completely out of the question, although admittedly in most cases they would not last long past the crash...”

“That may be so Brother,” rejoined the Chaplain, idly turning the badge over in his hands, “But why would the y be in this ship, not the one they were familiar with?”

“Perhaps they moved to find a better air supply?” queried Serafino, “Their own atmosphere may have been breached...”

“Perhaps Serafino, perhaps...” muttered Ark’han, casting his eyes towards the las-burnt airlocks. Stooping as low as his armour would allow beside a corpse, he beckoned Serafino closer and pointed to its visible wounds - deep ragged rents in the chest cavity caused by some sort of barbed appendage or weapon, “Or perhaps they fled here, desperate to seek refuge from an unknown terror...”

With a sharp intake of breath, Serafino stood and stared at Ark’han, “What are you implying Chaplain?” he asked, his voice suddenly tense as stimulants kicked in to put his body at battle readiness.

“Heed my words Techmarine,” said Ark’han looking up at Serafino, “We, are not alone.”

==To be continued==

As before, any suggestions/criticism (or, God forbid, complements ) are welcome, now more than ever as I've got a basic plan, but it needs a little fleshing out (Quite literally ).

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