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Made in nl
Pragmatic Primus Commanding Cult Forces






Please pretend this thread does not exist yet, I think it is better to post the story as a whole, so I will just need to have a bit more patience and wait with posting until it is fully finished.

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Made in gb
Thunderhawk Pilot Dropping From Orbit





It's very........short. Not really enough to comment or offer praise and advice if needed. Is there more to this?

Come into my web, said the spider to the fly.
Come rest your wings, and let us talk eye to eye.
For I am a spider, and you are the fly. Now that you are here, let us sit, and say hi.
But I have have no morsel to share, nor anything to eat. But wait, what is that stickiness upon your feet.
Ah now I have you, now I can eat. Now I can enjoy you, or store you as meat.
For I am the spider, and you are the fly. How else could it have gone, between one such as you, and one such as I.
 
   
Made in no
Terrifying Doombull





Hefnaheim

As mentioned above its far too short to really pass any judgement, but I like what I have seen so far
   
Made in nl
Pragmatic Primus Commanding Cult Forces






Yes, it is only the prologue. The rest of the story is being written and will follow shortly.

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