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HQ - 2 aspiring champs: Mark of Khorne, speed, mutation, spiky bitz, powerfist, bolt pistol

156

(these are modelled as centauroid marines, lead the mutant squads)

 

TROOPS

(traitors are ungors, mutants are gors or maybe centigors if I can find a cheapish way to convert them)

2 units of 8 traitors: lascannon, plasma gun

2 units of 8 traitors: autocannon, heavy stubber

366

 

2 units of mutants: daemonic speed, 2 flamers, CCWs

mutant boss w/ powerfist & CCW

516

 

ELITES

Obliterator (wacky cyborg minotaur conversion)

 

FA

2 hellhounds

230

 

HS

2 basilisks with indirect fire

250

 

36 traitors, 30 mutants, 4 guard tanks, 2 marines, 1 morphological freak with a 2+/5++ save

 

Mainly this is a beastmen with lasguns modelling project, but I'm gonna get angry if I can't win any games.  Is it shooty enough?  Choppy enough?  It's got that vaguely unfocused feeling.

 

Drop the mutants flamers you would want to fleet with them every time. I think that the traitor units are too big, make them 5 men each with just a lascannon. And you could definately use some more assaulty stuff.

I agree with most of Banesword's suggestions. In general terms, the list packs a lot of firepower, but not much punch on the assault end. A pack or 2 of demons would definitely make the threat of the leaping mutant mobs more potent. Trimming down the traitor squads (fewer traitors; no special weapons) and the champions (maybe lose the spikey bitz) will buy you enough points for a pack of furies, at least.
You might even want to consider dropping one of the tanks to get enough points for some bloodletters.