I did take a look at it, and it pretty much confirmed that Age of Sigmar Black Library isn't going to be for me. The rest of Black Library was on the fence - you had some absolute gems (
Skarsnik,
Gaunt's Ghosts, and so forth), and then you had the rest, which was...okay, and exhibit some of the qualities that bug me about
GW's new direction for their writers. The excerpt felt very much like it was being rushed from quick fight scene to quick fight scene; a brief bit of conversation and exposition, then jumpcut to killing skaven. A bit more conversation, then cut to a a setup for another brief battle. Almost like
GW insists on a quota of fight scenes per publication, actually...it's a problem that I have with a lot of licensed fiction, in fairness. I thought
The Brother's War was captivating, but, say,
Odyssey was...the opposite, and I think the main reason for that was the amount of leeway allowed by the company responsible. The former felt like I was diving into a world of epic fantasy, whereas the latter read more like a checklist of cards interspersed with fights, and I think the biggest problem was a shift in management style and an insistence on more solidarity with the 'brand'.
4. It features Orruks - and it is good to see that whether he is in the MOrtal Realms, the World-That-Was or the 41st Millennium, an Orc will always be an Orc (or an Ork, or an Orruk).
Still disagree on that - they're similar, but hardly the same thing

This lot didn't even have any gobbos to kick around! Who's gonna dig out da drops, eh? Maybe that's why they wanted the 'umies so bad! They seemed vaguely black-orc-ish, but didn't stick around long enough for the quirky bits you can expect from orcs and goblins or orks.
I did like a few bits - nice to see regular humans, of course, and I thought the scene with Thostos realizing he was wounded was well done. Evidence that the local orcs - or orruks, if you insist - fight Chaos was expected but also fun. I like how the author was teasing a possible greenskin/sigmarine teamup. Surely they could find a local warband who didn't much care for Drekka's lot!