Not sure what your bits restrictions might be, but if you've got them I'd use some Devastator legs. The up-armoured look would really suit a Techmarine. In fact, up-armoured anything is a good fit, so if you have or can source any mk.III arms to play with, that'd be good.
The hand holding the axe is comically large, I'm afraid and will look silly if it's npt swapped. Where you've tried to scrape away the chaos detail is in need of some serious smoothing, but to be honest I'd go with a regular marine power axe. Again, the Devastator kit is your friend here.
There are a few companies who do servo-harnesses, I think this one from Anvil Industry is the best: