OK, I like the models, I like the Void civilains you're using, and I see you fixed the early focus issue you were having. But you have to take a second to think about backdrops and about cropping. Busy backdrops like a computer or a workbench distract from the model. And uncropped photos where 99% is backdrop to 1% model just look back. If you work on both your figures will look a lot better.