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[edit 2/16/12] -this has story has been edited and re-posted below, please compare and leave feedback!-

Vengeance Chapter
"Repaying the blood deficit"

The Emperor commands us. Dorn guides us. Honour shields us. Fear our name, for it is vengeance. -Rhetoricus

Also Known As:
Vengeance Marines, Fists of Vengeance

Established:
958.M40

Progenitor:
Rogal Dorn, Patriarch of the Imperial Fists Chapter
-as Imperial Fist successors, the Betcher's Gland and Sus-an Membrane organs have been lost

Patriarch:
Darnath Lysander, 1st Company Captain of the Imperial Fists Chapter
I have traveled far and seen much. Yet nothing warms my heart so much as the sight of a gun so massive that its fury makes the very world tremble. - Darnath Lysander 1st Company Captain, Imperial Fists (attr.)

Chapter Master:
Ilden Arctos
Bigger guns make bigger holes, but I keep my knife sharp. - Ilden Arctos, Master, Vengeance Chapter

System:
Ultima Segmentum, the Eastern Fringe, Grendl Stars (Wings of Sanguinius)

World:
Salusa Secundus

History:
From their fortified base on the Iron Moon of Salusa Secundus, Vengeance marines strike against the foes of the Imperium. Born from the gene-seed of the Imperial Fists chapter, they claim the living legend Darnath Lysander as patriarch. The famous Captain's own gene seed was used to culture the Vengeance Marines' gene stock shortly after he was lost in his famous millennium-long warp mishap. The tragic event actually sparked the decision to found the new Chapter, if indirectly. Grief stricken and enraged, a faction among the Imperial Fists, largely members of Lysander's First Company, wished to take ship and seek their lost First Captain, but the risk involved in the possible loss of more of the Chapter's resources made others argue fiercely against the idea. In the end the two faction's champions took the argument to the dueling blocks, and the Seeker's champion bested the Stoic's and earned his faction's wish: that those who wished to go may go, and without enmity from the brothers they left. Taking minimal ships and supplies so as not to overburden their greatly depopulated Chapter, the Seekers prepared to enter the Warp. Perhaps predictably, they were lost to the same storm which claimed Captain Lysander's ship. The incident was quietly covered over in the Chapter's history as an embarrassing minor schism which ended itself at the cost of hundreds of Astartes and a wealth of ships and resources.
A millennium later the Imperial Fists were still fighting, their noble First Captain remembered but replaced more than once since. Then Lysander returned. His ancient ship regurgitated from the Warp near an Iron Warriors stronghold and immediately crippled. The mighty Captain himself captured and imprisoned. Tortured and mocked for months, brought back from a hell of madness to a hell of shame and pain. Then the escape. Broken manacles and hungry fists served him well enough at the time, though now he wields a master-crafted thunder hammer. Guards slain, orbital defences sabotaged, he stole a ship and crewed it with fellow freed prisoners of the traitor Chaos Marines. He quickly established contact with Imperial forces and was returned to the Fists with great honor and celebration under Guard escort in a matter of weeks. Though he was extensively tested both physically and psychically for many months, he was still given the respect due a man with his impeccable record, and returned to his rank afterward.
This story is widely known. What is not known even to many Imperial Fists is that the Seekers also returned. The Seekers also were spewed from the Warp a thousand years from when they entered. They too found themselves before the guns of an enemy world, auspex still Warp-blind and sensors unable to cope with the number of enemy guns already firing on them. But the sensors did show one thing very clearly: the runic icon for Darnath Lysander's ship. That which they sought was near, and every Astartes on board felt his hearts leap at the thought. Having sustained incredibly light losses to the Warp storm, the Seeker fleet still represented a significant naval presence, and every station was crewed by a Space Marine fighting to save the living symbol of his Chapter's honour. The battle of Malodrax was short lived, and nearly every Seeker ship was utterly destroyed with all hands lost, but there was a good reason. Every shot fired from every Seeker gun targeted an implacement or orbital platform which was firing on Lysander's ship. Their bold sacrifice prevented the total obliteration of the Captain's vessel, at the cost of almost every one of their lives. They were the only assistance Lysander had in his fabled capture, and probably the reason his ship was not simply destroyed altogether, yet none outside the Vengeance Marines celebrate their actions.
Several Seeker ships had their guns silenced by precision fire after the Iron Warriors realized that they were not firing to protect themselves. The Seekers had witnessed Lysander's capture, and saw a dark and shaming chance. They fought the traitors when they boarded the crippled Imperial vessels. But they fought to lose, and they lost to be captured. After the Warp storm, the naval engagement, and the repelling action there were few enough Seekers alive, but each knew if even one of them could reach the Captain it would be worth it. Seeing their lost commander's face would accomplish their mission and turn the past hell into a glory road. So they took the shame of defeat and capture as merely a path to victory. Like smearing kohl over a shiny decoration for a stealth mission, it did not lessen the honour represented.
It was Seekers who caused a splinter of adamantine to find it's way to the Captain's water ration. After he picked his locks and slew his guards, it was Seekers who had a map of nearby anti-air emplacements and other priority targets for an escape. Many died on suicide runs at batteries and bunkers over a kilometers-wide area to provide a gap for a single stolen ship to make it out. Five Seekers were on that ship with the Captain. All had been his sergeants, a thousand years prior. All had fought and bled for him a thousand times before he was lost, and had endured the same humiliation and agony as he since his return. They said nothing of the Chapter Master's decision.
After Lysander was exonerated from all suspicion by near a year of testing, he led the First Company of the Fists once more and wiped the Iron Warrior presence from Malodrax completely. When the smoke cleared, he found his Company had gained in number, and many of them were armourless. A few dozen Seekers had hung on in captivity after the escape before. They were miserable shadows of what a proud Astartes should look like, but they held their looted boltguns in unshaking hands. They were given medical attention immediately, then sequestered with the sergeants from the escape, who had been released from testing with the Captain, but kept confined to quarters.
All were given back their basic armaments and assembled at a disembarkation dock. Their armour had been returned with all insignia removed, and the paint blasted away to bare metal. Likewise any honours borne on weapons had been shorn. They stood like the generic Astartes statues often seen on Imperial worlds, dull grey and lacking any Chapter or unit identifiers.
A voice came over the vox hail, a voice every living Fist would know and obey without conscious thought. Every one but the Seekers, who had never met the current Chapter Master.
'Seekers. Go without enmity or regret...' There was a pause with the weight of the ages in it. '...but go and do not return. You have left the Fists and must now forge your own path. Seek out the Templars or another of the successor Chapters, do as you will... as the Emperor wills. Adeptus Astartes, I salute you."
Then they were ushered aboard a transport and taken to a spaceport. The crusade ships moved on and left less than fifty Space Marines with the gear they stood in and nothing else. Those were the founding members of Vengeance Chapter. As the last lights of the crusade's engines winked out in the distance, each Marine swore an oath of vengeance. Not against the Fists, for they understood why they had been cast out. The oath they swore came from the torture and mockery they suffered on Malodrax, and was unyielding and brutal in its wording and intent. They swore to thwart Chaos in any form, using whatever means necessary. If a man stood between them and their foe, they would trample that man. If Chaos hid beneath a rock, they would destroy that rock. If the rock was the foundation of a city, what matter? Hardened in the crucible of ancient wars and recent tortures, the newest Chapter in the galaxy was founded by its oldest and perhaps toughest First Company Space Marine veterans.
They were committed to the cause but wondered how they might replace their losses without a Chapter planet or even a favoured recruiting world. Crusading Chapters such as the Imperial Fists are known to simply harvest worlds at need, weeding out the weak and unworthy as their training process goes on, but many Chapters have a dedicated planet or system from which they regularly conduct drafts. The advantage to an Astartes-held world being security (obviously) and also the ability to tailor a culture to create citizens prepared for the recruitment process. Teaching tribals which end of a bolter makes noise is tedious. Founding Chapter Master Ryllos was unable to find a satisfactory solution, and the Chapter waned near obscurity for long centuries, with only a trickle of Marines joining, and those often the last remnants of broken Chapters. The loss of Master Ryllos during the Macharian Heresy was not the killing blow to the Chapter that many thought, however. Inexplicably, the next two Masters selected had been White Scars prior to joining the cause of vengeance, and they kept the Chapter from extinction, barely, by using guerilla tactics and by avoiding major engagements. When the mighty Jangath Captain-Khan finally succumbed to his many wounds, the last of his honour guard, Chapter Champion Ilden Arctos, took up his fallen Master's sword and led the barest remnants of the Vengeance Marines to victory. Tales of his exemplary display of the Chapter's ethos traveled, and eventually losses were replaced enough to field a single company again. Newly appointed Master Arctos chose his next campaign with great care. He committed the entire company to a beleaguered industrial world, already nearly a lost cause.
Following a brilliant and brutal blitzkrieg campaign which shattered Waaagh! Bloodgob, the civilian population of Rigel IV was left decimated. Chapter Master Ilden Arctos held council with the few surviving members of the local government, and came to a weighty decision. All the boys orphaned by the war, every prepubescent male child without a guardian across the face of the world, was to be gathered as fresh recruits. Rigel IV lost thirteen percent of its original population after the war was already over, to their saviours. Chapter Master Arctos, seeing the dedication in the eyes of boys who had no one left to follow but him, made the practice official Chapter custom, naming them Vengeful Children, or Children of Vengeance. So it is that these new Vengeance Marines know the pain of loss, and have a personal stake in the Chapter's work. Planetary governors and Defense Captains have learned to look at the numbers before calling on the Fists of Vengeance, as they will take every last orphaned boy on the planet. Those who fail to meet Space Marine standards are sent to Imperial Guard regiments across the Segmentum, and are still highly valued for their unwavering resolve and sharp discipline in battle.
In tribute to their founder, Captain Lysander, Vengeance Marines are dedicated to cleansing the stain of Chaos from the galaxy. While the Chapter will answer any request for aid that they may, Vengeance Marines actively Crusade in pursuit of Chaos in all its forms. Chaos marines are their primary target, but their efforts cleaning up renegade Imperial worlds and the Warp have brought them against Eldar and their dark counterparts, Tyranid by the hulk-load, and the occasional lost and confused Waaagh!. Taking after their Imperial Fist ancestry, Vengeance marines tend to prefer a stand-up fight to the lightning hit and run strategies of the White Scars, or the unpredictable behaviour of the Space Wolves. This preference is not universal, and Vengeance marines consider quick thinking and individual action to be a part of adherence to the Codex.

If your life is given in service to the Emperor, your death shall not be in vain. - Chaplain Argento, Crimson Fists 2nd Company

All men give their lives, or else have them taken. I gave my death, that I might continue to serve. - Dreadnought Laudenus, Vengeance Chapter 3rd Company

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Really liked it. It's different, very different. It really is a breath of fresh air compared to most peoples DIY chapters. Your fluff is well written and obviously well planned. AND you choose to be a IF successor which is a huge bonus for me, kudos to you sir! +1


Are you planning to expand on this at all?

"You have ruled this galaxy for ten thousand years, yet have little of account to show for you efforts. Order. Unity. Obedience. We taught the galaxy these things, and we shall do so again."

 
   
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Thanks 'Guy! I will probably expand on this, yes. I get new ideas and don't mind making changes, which actually looking it over I'll have to edit this. They kept their colors and the Fist sigil, I'll have to re-write some things. If you (or any dakkanought) has ideas, please feel free to help me with it.

I have another story from Vengeance Chapter... much longer and grimdarker... I'll have to re-edit it a bit, but I'll try to get it posted tonight when I get off work. Orks, space hulks, dreadnoughts, warp translations, melta charges, Thunderhawks, boarding torpedoes, and ANGRY but still Imperial Fisty marines. All based on my actual army

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It's refreshing to see a well-designed Imperial Fist-successor chapter. The only thing I had skepsicism about was your involvement of Lysander (I tend to dislike having named chars by official authors in fluff, but you did a nice job with that).

I would like to know their general tactics, and weapons of choice.

The only part that I found to be of criticism is the quote of the Chapter-Master. I would expect as much from a Scout or an Ork, but not a Chapter-Master.

For mood of the general Imperial Fist, I would go to Germany anno 1917. The war is lost, yet they still fight on with a fatalistic reserve. They shall have the nerve as fighting for a lost cause would give them. It's not as much anger as desperation for me.

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Thanks B

Tactics: damn the maneuvers, just go straight at 'em!

weapons: largest possible, as many as possible. Even tactical and devastator troops carry CC weapons, or fit bayonets to innappropriate guns. They are a budget army though, background and IRL. Few vehicles, dreadnoughts, etc.

Lysander was too awesome not to include, and is more or less the reason for the Chapter's existence. I tried to mostly just 'refer' to him, and not write any new material. I'm just quoting, really

My Chapter Master is roughly equivalent to someone else's scout, or a particularly hygenic ork, so I don't mind the slightly aloof quote. The idea is its a Chapter of crazies, renegades and misfits. With GUNS! that have knives on them...

I wanted to create my own mood for Vengeance Chapter, but have ties to a 'real' and honored codex Chapter. As said, its all WIP. Thanks for the comments!

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Made in us
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New version/fairly severe re-editing! Compare to the original and please comment.

More Vengeance Chapter background!
Coorin's Tale: Prologue: http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/0/430727.page#3929455
Salusa Secundus, homeworld: http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/jforum.page?module=posts&action=edit&post_id=3929326&start=0

Vengeance Chapter
"Repaying the blood deficit"

The Emperor commands us. Dorn guides us. Honour shields us. Fear our name, for it is vengeance. -Rhetoricus

Also Known As:
Vengeance Marines, Fists of Vengeance

Established:
958.M40

Progenitor:
Rogal Dorn, Patriarch of the Imperial Fists Chapter
-as Imperial Fist successors, the Betcher's Gland and Sus-an Membrane organs have been lost

Patriarch:
Darnath Lysander, 1st Company Captain of the Imperial Fists Chapter
I have traveled far and seen much. Yet nothing warms my heart so much as the sight of a gun so massive that its fury makes the very world tremble. - Darnath Lysander 1st Company Captain, Imperial Fists (attr.)

Chapter Master:
Ilden Arctos
Bigger guns make bigger holes, but I keep my knife sharp. - Ilden Arctos, Master, Vengeance Chapter

System:
Ultima Segmentum, the Eastern Fringe, Grendl Stars (Wings of Sanguinius)

World:
Salusa Secundus

History:
From their fortified base on the Iron Moon of Salusa Secundus, Vengeance marines strike against the foes of the Imperium. Born from the gene seed of the Imperial Fists Chapter, they claim the living legend Darnath Lysander as patriarch. The famous Captain's own gene seed was used to culture the Vengeance Marines' gene stock shortly after he was lost in his famous millennium-long Warp mishap. The tragic event actually sparked the decision to found the new Chapter, if indirectly. Grief stricken and enraged, a faction among the Imperial Fists, largely members of Lysander's First Company, wished to take ship and seek their lost First Captain, but the risk losing even more of the Chapter's resources made others argue fiercely against the idea. Those who wished to go after the Lysander called themselves the Seekers, while the marines able to accept the Captain's fate and move on were known as Stoics. In the end the two faction's champions took the argument to the dueling blocks, and the Seeker's champion bested the Stoic's and earned his faction's wish: that those who wished to go may do so, but at a terrible price.
The division in the Chapter was too great, and had nearly come to civil war. The Seekers had separated themselves from their battle brothers by their seemingly suicidal desires, and could not be allowed to remain members of the same brotherhood. Addressing them in person before their departure, the Chapter Master formally declared the Imperial Seekers Chapter to be a successor of the Imperial Fists, with the right to bear colors and arms which showed their heritage. They would remain martial allies and keep lines of communication. In time of strife they would come to each others aid, but with hard feelings on both sides, it was decided best to acknowledge the split and make a clean break.
Taking minimal ships and supplies so as not to overburden their now-depopulated Chapter, the Seekers prepared to enter the Warp immediately. Nearly three hundred Astartes threw their lives like a lifeline into the Emperean, on the barest chance that they might find their lost Captain. Perhaps predictably, they were lost to the same storm which claimed Lysander's ship. The incident was quietly covered over in the Imperial Fists' history as an embarrassing minor schism which ended itself at the cost of hundreds of Astartes and a wealth of ships and resources.
A millennium later the Imperial Fists were still fighting, their noble First Captain remembered but replaced more than once since. Then Lysander returned. His ancient ship regurgitated from the Warp near an Iron Warriors stronghold and immediately crippled. The mighty Captain himself captured and imprisoned. Tortured and mocked for months, brought back from a hell of madness to a hell of shame and pain. Then the escape. Broken manacles and hungry fists served him well enough at the time, though now he wields a master-crafted thunder hammer. Guards slain, orbital defences sabotaged, he stole a ship and crewed it with fellow freed prisoners of the traitor Chaos Marines. He quickly established contact with Imperial forces and was returned to his Chapter with great honor and celebration (under Imperial Guard escort) in a matter of weeks. Though he was extensively tested both physically and psychically for many months, he was still given the respect due a soldier of his impeccable record, and returned to his rank afterward.
This story is widely known. What is not known even to many Imperial Fists is that the Seekers also returned. The Seekers also were spewed from the Warp a thousand years from when they entered. They too found themselves before the guns of an enemy world, auspex still Warp-blind and sensors unable to cope with the number of enemy guns already firing on them. But the sensors did show one thing very clearly: the runic icon for Darnath Lysander's ship. That which they sought was near, and every Astartes on board felt his hearts leap at the thought. Having sustained incredibly light losses to the Warp storm, the Seeker fleet still represented a significant naval presence, and every station was crewed by a Space Marine fighting to save the living symbol of his Chapter's honour. The battle of Malodrax was short lived, and nearly every Seeker ship was utterly destroyed with all hands lost, but there was a good reason. Every shot fired from every Seeker gun targeted an implacement or orbital platform which was firing on Lysander's ship. Their bold sacrifice prevented the total obliteration of the Captain's vessel, at the cost of almost every one of their lives. They were the only assistance Lysander had in his fabled capture, and probably the reason his ship was not simply destroyed altogether, yet none outside the Vengeance Marines celebrate their actions.
Several Seeker ships had their guns silenced by precision fire after the Iron Warriors realized that they were not firing to protect themselves. The Seekers had witnessed Lysander's capture, and saw a dark and shaming chance. They fought the traitors when they boarded the crippled Imperial vessels. But they fought to lose, and they lost to be captured. After the Warp storm, the naval engagement, and the repelling action there were few enough Seekers alive, but each knew if even one of them could reach the Captain it would be worth it. Seeing their lost commander's face would accomplish their mission and turn the past hell into a glory road. So they took the shame of defeat and capture as merely a path to victory. Like smearing kohl over a decoration for a stealth mission, it did not lessen the honour represented.
It was Seekers who caused a splinter of adamantine to find it's way to the Captain's water ration. After he picked his locks and slew his guards, it was Seekers who had a map of nearby anti-air emplacements and other priority targets for an escape. Many died on suicide runs at batteries and bunkers over a kilometers-wide area to provide a gap for a single stolen ship to make it out. Five Seekers were on that ship with the Captain. All had been his sergeants, a thousand years prior. All had fought and bled for him a thousand times before he was lost, and had endured the same humiliation and agony as he since his return. They said nothing of the Chapter Master's decision.
After Lysander was exonerated from all suspicion by near a year of testing, he led the First Company of the Fists once more and wiped the Iron Warrior presence from Malodrax completely. When the smoke cleared, he found his Company had gained in number, and many of them were armourless. A few dozen Seekers had hung on in captivity after the escape before. They were miserable shadows of what a proud Astartes should look like, but they held their looted boltguns in unshaking hands. They were given medical attention immediately, then sequestered with the sergeants from the escape, who had been released from testing with the Captain, but had not been returned to active service.
All were equipped with their accustomed weapons and assembled at a disembarkation dock. Their armour had been returned with all insignia removed, and the paint blasted away to bare metal. Likewise any honours borne on weapons had been shorn. They stood like the generic Astartes statues often seen on Imperial worlds, dull grey and lacking any Chapter or unit identifiers.
A voice came over the vox hail, a voice every living Fist would know and obey without conscious thought. Every one but the Seekers, who had never met the current Chapter Master.
"Imperial Seekers. Go without enmity or regret..." There was a pause with the weight of the ages in it. "...but go and do not return. You have left the Imperial Fists and must now forge your own path. Seek out the Templars or another of the successor Chapters, do as you will... as the Emperor wills. Adeptus Astartes, I salute you."
Then they were ushered aboard a transport and taken to an Imperial spaceport. The crusade ships moved on and left less than fifty Space Marines with the gear they stood in and nothing else. Those were the founding members of Vengeance Chapter. As the last lights of the crusade's engines winked out in the distance, each Marine swore an oath of vengeance. Not against the Fists, for they understood why they had been cast out. The oath they swore came from the torture and mockery they suffered on Malodrax, and was unyielding and brutal in its wording and intent. They swore to thwart Chaos in any form, using whatever means necessary. If a man stood between them and their foe, they would trample that man. If Chaos hid beneath a rock, they would destroy that rock. If the rock was the foundation of a city, what matter? Hardened in the crucible of ancient wars and recent tortures, the newest Chapter in the galaxy was founded by its oldest and perhaps toughest First Company Space Marine veterans. Maddened by their experiences and losses, they chose a new name for their Chapter and their purpose. Vengeance.
They were committed to the cause but wondered how they might replace their losses without a Chapter planet or even a favoured recruiting world. Crusading Chapters such as the Imperial Fists are known to simply harvest worlds at need, weeding out the weak and unworthy as their training process goes on, but many Chapters have a dedicated planet or system from which they regularly conduct drafts. The advantage to an Astartes-held world being security (obviously) and also the ability to tailor a culture to create citizens prepared for the recruitment process. Teaching tribals which end of a bolter makes noise is tedious. Founding Chapter Master Ryllos was unable to find a satisfactory solution, and the Chapter waned near obscurity for long centuries, with only a trickle of Marines joining, most often the last remnants of broken Chapters, ...or renegades. The loss of Master Ryllos during the first war of Armageddon was not the killing blow to the Chapter that many thought it would be, however. Inexplicably, the next two Masters selected had been White Scars prior to joining the cause of vengeance, and they kept the Chapter from extinction, barely, by using guerilla tactics and by avoiding major engagements. When the mighty Jangath Captain-Khan finally succumbed to his many wounds, the last of his honour guard, Chapter Champion Ilden Arctos, took up his fallen Master's sword and led the barest remnants of the Vengeance Marines to victory. Tales of his exemplary display of the Chapter's ethos traveled, and eventually losses were replaced enough to field a single company again. Newly appointed Master Arctos chose his next campaign with great care. He committed the entire company to a beleaguered industrial world, already nearly a lost cause.
Following a brilliant and brutal blitzkrieg campaign which shattered Waaagh! Bloodgob, the civilian population of Rigel IV was left decimated. Chapter Master Ilden Arctos held council with the few surviving members of the local government, and came to a weighty decision. All the boys orphaned by the war, every prepubescent male child without a blood parent across the face of the world, was to be gathered as fresh recruits. Rigel IV lost thirteen percent of its original population after the war was already over, to their saviours. Chapter Master Arctos, seeing the dedication in the eyes of boys who had no one left to follow but him, made the practice official Chapter custom, naming them Vengeful Children, or Children of Vengeance. So it is that these new Vengeance Marines know the pain of loss, and have a personal stake in the Chapter's work. Planetary governors and Defense Captains have learned to look at the numbers before calling on the Fists of Vengeance, as they will take every last orphaned boy on the planet. Those who fail to meet Space Marine standards are sent to Imperial Guard regiments across the Segmentum, and are still highly valued for their unwavering resolve and sharp discipline in battle.
In tribute to their founder, Captain Lysander, Vengeance Marines are dedicated to cleansing the stain of Chaos from the galaxy. While the Chapter will answer any request for aid that they may, Vengeance Marines actively Crusade in pursuit of Chaos in all its forms. Chaos marines are their primary target, but their efforts cleaning up renegade Imperial worlds and the Warp have brought them against Eldar and their dark counterparts, Tyranid by the hulk-load, and the occasional lost and confused Waaagh!. Taking after their Imperial Fist ancestry, Vengeance marines tend to prefer a stand-up fight to the lightning hit and run strategies of the White Scars, or the unpredictable behaviour of the Space Wolves. This preference is not universal, and Vengeance marines consider quick thinking and individual action to be a part of adherence to the Codex.

If your life is given in service to the Emperor, your death shall not be in vain. - Chaplain Argento, Crimson Fists 2nd Company

All men give their lives, or else have them taken. I gave my death, that I might continue to serve. - Dreadnought Laudenus, Vengeance Chapter 3rd Company

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I'm not sure on their origins...
The entire 1st company were with Lysander when he was captured...
Also i'm not sure how long it would take to culture an entire chapter from a single gene-seed but it'd be a really long time...
But i can't deny i do quite like the bit after that...

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! I need to re-read the Lysander story. I didn't know the whole 1st was with him. The gene-seed was only for neophytes (obviously) while the bulk of their forces were fully developed space marines, either from the Fists or renegades/cast outs from other Chapters. I need to flesh out the bit about other unsatisfied (angry) marines from other Chapters joing the cause.

Thanks for the feedback! Check out my other Vengeance stories and let me know what you think.

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I would have it go more like this:
Regular IF successors are in a losing battle and are saved by Lysander.
Many years later they hear of his disappearance and start to search for him.
They happen across a similar fate but manage to make planetfall (or are captured) and begin their guerrilla war/slow breakout.
They later reform, some of their numbers are outcast marines and others are IF detached to help the chapter survive their depleted numbers as a sign of thanks...

Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. 
   
Made in us
Stalwart Space Marine





in a fire... AAAAAAAHHH!!$*five@!!

I wanted the story to begin with Lysander's disappearance, because he came back in like 966 m41... not much time left in the millenium. I have some revisions planned to deal with the entire first company apparently already being gone... thanks PurpleFood for the info. Thinking it will turn out that the Seekers were not ALL lost in the storm, and that they remained a very small but active Chapter during the thousand years Lysander (and the rest of the Seekers) were lost. These non-lost Seekers would have been justly enraged when Darnath and their lost friends show up and only the Captain is accepted back into the Fists. Yeah... another re-write in the works.
Don't forget to check out my other Vengeance fiction, I'm interested to hear what people think of Coorin's Tale.
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Stalwart Space Marine





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Another revision. Now we're a splinter Crusade, not a seperate Chapter... except its still mostly a seperate Chapter Also I looked it up in the SM codex and MOST of the 1st Co was lost w/Lysander, not all. So here's Vengeance CRUSADE history, take 3:


From their massive star fort, the Iron Moon, Vengeance Crusaders strike against the foes of the Imperium. Born from the gene-seed of the Imperial Fists chapter, they claim the

living legend Darnath Lysander as spiritual patriarch. The famous Captain's own gene seed was used to culture the Vengeance Crusade's gene stock shortly after he and many of his

company were lost in his famous millennium-long warp mishap. The tragic event actually sparked the decision to found the new Crusade, if indirectly. Grief stricken and enraged, a

faction among the Imperial Fists, largely the remaining members of Lysander's First Company, wished to take ship and seek their lost First Captain, but the risk involved in the possible

loss of more of the Chapter's resources made others argue fiercely against the idea. In the end the two faction's champions took the argument to the dueling blocks, and the

Seeker's champion bested the Stoic's and earned his faction's wish: a new Crusade was declared in the name of vengeance for the lost. Vengeance Crusaders would wear Imperial Fist

colors and iconography, and hold true to their vows to Dorn and Emperor, but were for all intents and purposes a new and autonomous Chapter. Taking minimal ships and supplies so

as not to overburden their greatly depopulated brethren, Vengeance Crusade prepared to enter the Warp. Perhaps predictably, they were lost to the same storm which claimed

Captain Lysander's ship. The incident was quietly covered over in the Chapter's history as an embarrassing minor schism which ended itself at the cost of hundreds of Astartes and a

wealth of ships and resources.

A millennium later the Imperial Fists were still fighting, their noble First Captain remembered but replaced more than once since. Then Lysander returned. His ancient ship

regurgitated from the Warp near an Iron Warriors stronghold and immediately crippled. The mighty Captain himself captured and imprisoned. Tortured and mocked for months,

brought back from a hell of madness to a hell of shame and pain. Then the escape. Broken manacles and hungry fists served him well enough at the time, though now he wields a

hammer entrusted to the Chapter by Dorn himself. Guards slain, orbital defences sabotaged, he stole a ship and crewed it with fellow freed prisoners of the traitor Chaos Marines. He

quickly established contact with Imperial forces and was returned to the Fists with great honor and celebration under Imperial Guard escort in a matter of weeks. Though he was

extensively tested both physically and psychically for many months, he was still given the respect due a man with his impeccable record, and returned to his rank afterward.

This story is widely known. What is not known even to many Imperial Fists is that Vengeance also returned. The Crusade also was spewed from the Warp a thousand years

from when it entered. They too found themselves before the guns of an enemy world, auspex still Warp-blind and sensors unable to cope with the number of enemy guns already

firing on them. But the sensors did show one thing very clearly: the runic icon for Darnath Lysander's ship. That which they sought was near, and every Astartes on board felt his

hearts leap at the thought. Having sustained incredibly light losses to the Warp storm, the Crusade fleet still represented a significant naval presence, and every station was crewed by

a Space Marine fighting to save the living symbol of his Chapter's honour. The battle of Malodrax was short lived, and many Vengeance ships were utterly destroyed with all hands lost,

but there was a good reason. Every shot fired from every Crusade gun targeted an implacement or orbital platform which was firing on Lysander's ship. Their bold sacrifice prevented

the total obliteration of the Captain's vessel, at a terrible cost in Crusader lives. They were the only assistance Lysander had in his fabled capture, and probably the reason his ship was

not simply destroyed altogether, yet none outside the Vengeance Crusade celebrate their actions.

Several Vengeance ships had their guns silenced by precision fire after the Iron Warriors realized that they were not firing to protect themselves. The Crusaders had witnessed

Lysander's capture, and saw a dark and shaming chance. They fought the traitors when they boarded the crippled Imperial vessels. But they fought to lose, and they lost to be

captured. After the Warp storm, the naval engagement, and the repelling action there were few enough Crusaders alive, but each knew if even one of them could reach the Captain

it would be worth it. Seeing their lost commander's face would accomplish their mission and turn the past hell into a glory road. So they took the shame of defeat and capture as

merely a path to victory. Like smearing kohl over a decoration for a stealth mission, it did not lessen the honor represented.

It was Vengeance Crusaders who caused a splinter of adamantine to find it's way to the Captain's water ration. After he picked his locks and slew his guards, it was Vengeance

who had a map of nearby anti-air emplacements and other priority targets for an escape. Many died on suicide runs at batteries and bunkers over a kilometers-wide area to provide a

gap for a single stolen ship to make it out. Five Crusaders were on that ship with the Captain. All had been his sergeants, a thousand years prior. All had fought and bled for him a

thousand times before he was lost, and had endured the same humiliation and agony as he since his return. They said nothing of the Chapter Master's decision.

After Lysander was exonerated from all suspicion by near a year of testing, he led the First Company of the Fists once more and wiped the Iron Warrior presence from Malodrax

completely. When the smoke cleared, he found his Company had gained in number, and many of them were unarmored. A few dozen Vengeance Crusaders had hung on in captivity

after the escape before. They were miserable shadows of what a proud Astartes should look like, but they held their looted boltguns in steady hands. They were given medical

attention immediately, then sequestered with the sergeants from the escape, who had been released from testing with the Captain, but kept confined to quarters.

All were given back their basic armaments and assembled at a disembarkation dock. A voice came over the vox hail, a voice every living Fist would know and obey without

conscious thought; every one but the Vengeance Crusaders, who had never met the Chapter Master, Vladimir Pugh.

'Vengeance Crusade, your objective is complete...' There was a pause with the weight of the ages in it. '...the Imperial Fists have no further tasks for you. You have served

you Chapter well for a thousand years, though it may have seemed longer in the warp, or on Malodrax. Your torments have changed you too much to return to your brothers,

however. The torture engines of the Iron Warriors have dampened your response to our psycho-conditioning hypnomats. We have also noted your relative apathy to the pain glove,

and the changes you have made to your armor. If you do not think like us or feel like us or look like us, you must stand apart from us. We bear you no malice and mean you no harm,

but your place is elsewhere. Fists of Vengeance, I salute you."

Then they were ushered aboard a transport and taken to a spaceport. The crusade ships moved on and left less than fifty Space Marines with the gear they stood in and

nothing else. Those were the surviving members of Vengeance Crusade. As the last lights of engines winked out in the distance, each Marine swore an oath of vengeance. Not

against the Fists, for they understood why they had been cast out. The oath they swore came from the torture and mockery they suffered on Malodrax, and was unyielding and

brutal in its wording and intent. They swore to thwart Chaos in any form, using whatever means necessary. If a man stood between them and their foe, they would trample that

man. If Chaos hid beneath a rock, they would destroy that rock. If the rock was the foundation of a city, what matter? Hardened in the crucible of ancient wars and recent

tortures, the newest Crusade of the Imperial Fists was founded by its oldest and perhaps toughest First Company veterans, and the unflappable troopers who had survived torments

unimaginable alongside them.

They were committed to the cause but wondered how they might replace their losses without a Chapter planet or even a favored recruiting world. Crusading Chapters such as

the Imperial Fists are known to simply harvest worlds at need, weeding out the weak and unworthy as their training process goes on, but many Chapters have a dedicated planet or

system from which they regularly conduct drafts. The advantage to an Astartes-held world being security (obviously) and also the ability to tailor a culture to create citizens prepared

for the recruitment process. Teaching tribals which end of a bolter makes noise is tedious. The veteran sergeants were unable to find a satisfactory solution, and the Crusade waned

near obscurity for long years, with only a trickle of Marines joining, and those often the last remnants of broken Chapters. The loss of Commander Ryllos during the Macharian Heresy

was not the killing blow to the Crusade that many thought, however. Inexplicably, the next two Commanders selected had been White Scars prior to joining the cause of vengeance,

and they kept the Crusade from extinction, barely, by using guerilla tactics and by avoiding major engagements. When the mighty Jangath Commander-Khan finally succumbed to his

many wounds fighting Eldar pirates, the last of his honor guard, Crusade Champion Ilden Arctos, took up his fallen Commander's sword and led the barest remnants of the Vengeance

Crusade to victory. Tales of his exemplary display of the Crusade's ethos traveled, and eventually losses were replaced enough to field a single company again. Newly appointed

Crusade Master Arctos chose his next campaign with great care. He committed the entire company to a beleaguered industrial world, already nearly a lost cause.

Following a brilliant and brutal blitzkrieg campaign which shattered Waaagh! Bloodgob, the civilian population of Rigel IV was left decimated. Crusade Master Ilden Arctos held

council with the few surviving members of the local government, and came to a weighty decision. All the boys orphaned by the war, every prepubescent male child without a

guardian across the face of the world, were to be gathered as fresh recruits. Rigel IV lost thirteen percent of its original population after the war was already over, to their saviours.

Master Arctos, seeing the dedication in the eyes of boys who had no one left to follow but him, made the practice official Crusade custom, naming them Vengeful Children, or Children

of Vengeance. So it is that these new Vengeance Marines know the pain of loss, and have a personal stake in the Crusade's work. Planetary governors and Defense Captains have

learned to look at the numbers before calling on the Fists of Vengeance, as they will take every last orphaned boy on the planet. Those who fail to meet Space Marine standards are

sent to Imperial Guard regiments across the Segmentum, and are still highly valued for their unwavering resolve and sharp discipline in battle.

In tribute to their spiritual patriarch, Captain Lysander, Vengeance Marines are dedicated to cleansing the stain of Chaos from the galaxy. While the Crusade will answer any

request for aid that they may, Vengeance Marines are in active pursuit of Chaos in all its forms. Chaos marines are their primary target, but their efforts cleaning up renegade Imperial

worlds and the warp have brought them against Eldar and their dark counterparts, Tyranid by the hulk-load, and the occasional lost and confused Waaagh!. Taking after their Imperial

Fist ancestry, Vengeance marines tend to prefer a stand-up fight to the lightning hit and run strategies of the White Scars, or the unpredictable behaviour of the Space Wolves. This

preference is not universal, and Vengeance marines consider quick thinking and individual action to be a part of adherence to the Codex.



So that's it. Please comment, I like revising and trying to keep the background 'correct' and fitting to existing Imperial Fist fluff.

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