Your list is really confusing to read. Most people do allies by having their main list first, followed by the allied list, instead of having the two armies mixed together.
Sorginak wrote:
Coteaz 100
Librarian 200 Mastery 2; The Shrouding, Sanctuary, Might of Titan, Nemesis Warding Stave
If you are mostly using this guy to give cover saves to your firebase, it might be better to keep him cheap. Maybe drop the stave?
Company Command Squad 167 CC Has Plasma Pistol and Bolt Pistol, Medi Pack, Vox Caster, Las Cannon team, Two Body Guards; Camo Cloaks
Guardsman Marbo 65
Vindicare Assasin 145
Techmarine 142 Storm Bolter, Nemesis Warding Stave, Rad & Psycotroke Grenades
The storm bolter is useless. If you want him to shoot something, use the
TL Plasma pistol and flamer on his servo harness.
Psyker Battle Squad (8) 80
Psyker Battle Squad (8) 80
The whole unit dies when you roll a singe perils. Add a single acolyte with no upgrades to the unit. The psykers all die, but you have one random jerk who can score and does not give up a kill point.
Jokaero 2
Servitor 3 Plasma Cannons
Warrior Acolyte 3 Plasma Guns
Warrior Acolyte 4 Storm Bolters
-200
This unit is a little bit all of you eggs in one T3 basket for me. I would make it into 2 units kinda.
The servitors and jokaero sitting in the back shooting stuff. The Plasmaguns and bolters in a chimera moving and shooting
Crusaders (9) 135
why no Death Cult Assassins. a split 5 assasins and 4 crusaders is so much more deadly. Give them a rhino or something to get them moving as well. Walking across the board will kill them.
Vetran Squad 160 2 Sniper Rifles, Vox Caster, Las Cannon; Gunnery Sgt. Harker
Aegis Defense Line 85 Icarus Lascannon
Lemann Russ Battle Tank 190 Plasma Cannons, Hvy Bolter
Lemann Russ Vanquisher 250 Pask, Multi Meltas & Lascannon
Hang on a second. Who is your main force and who is the ally?
Are the russes in a squadron or separate?
Overall you list is okay, but I feel that you are taking too many upgrades and not enough normal stuff.
Does you russ need plasma cannons that often can't fire?
Do you need a mega-pask russ instead of a normal one for 100 more points?
Do you really want a 200 point T3 squad sitting still , when half of it can move and shoot perfectly fine.
if you want more info on running henchmen, then chack out the article in my signature, it is very comprehensive.