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The space marine chapter the steel warriors (a descendant chapter of the iron hand) had been dispatched as a whole chapter to yutis caris VI, where a daemonic incursion had twisted the planet and had killed most of its population with just hours. The reports showed that the invasion was made purely of daemons of tzeentch, led by Fluxscribe the deciever, tzeentchs favourite daemon prince. As the steel warriors landed on the now desolate yutis caris VI, Kaine Dalfar, the chapter master of the steel warriors alerted the grey knights and demande a scouring party to be sent at once. At that moment the chapter masters head started filling up with voices one of a familiar tone that told him of the great rewards he would recieve if he was to kill the grey knights whe they arrived. Suddenly a vision popped into his head showing him ascending to daemon hood and becoming the most powerful being in the galaxy, as every marine in the steel warriors chapter started getting similar visions, warp portals opened up and thousands of screaming horrors jumped into the mortal realm throwing daemonic fire the marines way burning them and turning them into no more than ash piles. Kaine snapped out of the trance and raising his hammer ran towards the daemons smashing them to oblivion sending them back to the warp, though as suddenly as he was slaying these daemons, Fluxscribe appeared wielding a contract that offered him daemon hood in exchange for his service to the changer of ways. Kaine stopped dead in his tracks and read the contract as his marines carried on fighting, presenting Dalfar with a blue feathered quill, fluxscribe gave a huge smile, his many razor sharp teeth showing. the chapter master signed the contract and his loyalty to the emperor and within minutes his body started mutating huge horns grew from his temple, his armour burst apart and huge wings sprouted from his back. the many steel warriors that remained became overwhelmed with this and all wanted the same deal. Fluxscribe offered them a new body, a form that would replace their old All the steel warriors had to do was willingly give up there souls to Fluxscribe and they would transform once the grey knights arrived, and so they did. Fluxscribe fed of all these souls and grew in power and size and as the grey knights ships came into view, the daemon prince with a flick of his hand started the transformation of the marines and as the horrors entered the warp, he stayed to watch his twisted plan unfold as the marines started to squirm and squeal, the arms splitting into many their bodies becoming twisted and warped limbs sprouted all around their bodies, every marine were becoming spawns of chaos. Kaine looked at Fluxscribe and with an almighty roar boomed ''TRAITOR!!!!'' laughning uncontrollably he watched as the grey knights appeared and exterminated every last on of the spawns before they could mutate fully and surrounding Kaine a volley of incinerator cannon shots burned through the daemon prince and the fatal blow from a force sword came from an inquisitor who with all his might lopped of the former chapter masters head. As Fluxscribe returned to tzeentch's great hall in the warp, he couldnt stop laughing at what he looked at as a good form of entertainment, tzeentch with a smirk on his many faces as his favorite prince had served him well again also offering great entertainment for the architect of fate. The only one who was not amused was Kairos Fateweaver who believed a formal mortal should not be ranked so highly by his master and never saw eye to eye with the great Deceiver, his stern look at Fluxscribe was returned with a wink from the daemon prince as he walked to the great libraries of tzeentch, to record his latest achievement and add another lie to his tomes.

1/ again, do SOMETHING to breack up the dlock of words, or else we read the same sentance again and again.
2/ what software are you using, turn correct on and start fixing any mistakes (especialy if like me you use you ipod).
3/ great story again, any more necron stufff up your sleeve?

yea i need to sort out the sentences and mistakes but yea ill have a necron one out either later on or tomorow

 necronspurs2012 wrote:
yea i need to sort out the sentences and mistakes but yea ill have a necron one out either later on or tomorow

Sweet. Love reading necron fics