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Hey everyone. I hope it's ok to post this here. I'm a new an aspiring youtuber. I've released a couple of videos so far and I have released a new one today.

This is the first video in my new series where I plan to review every unit in the Chaos Space Marine codex.

I appreciate any feedback. Thank you all.

Part 1 - Abaddon the Despolier

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H0v7Gdeiang&list=UU3sCvjVJ1bVEC23OC97OP0Q

For a first time its pretty god.And dont worry about mistakes with rules. For example MiniWarGaming do it 2 sometimes.

At the end of video you can give a 1 or 2 tips about tactic how to use the unit.

Thanks for the response and the tip.

OK cool. You're actually the second person to mention about talking about tips. I'll defiantly add something like that into my next video. Thank you for watching it and leaving this feedback

I'm back with part 2. This time I talk about Huron Blackheart. I hope you all enjoy!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=toS4kX_JSMA&feature=youtu.be

You take really long breaks, you sniffle, you're not articulating particularly well, though I'm not sure if that's due to your cold, the slightly too loud music, or mic. It doesn't seem very well rehearsed because of the pauses, sniffling etc.

As far as the advice, I personally use Huron, so I'd also suggest talking about units he works well with. I personally like plasma gun-wielding Chosen. He also works well with Huron; I'm gonna start playing around with Huron (Plus Havocs), Cypher (and three squads of Chosen) and Deep Striking Dreadnoughts from the dataslate, and maybe start using the Dreadclaw with a bunch of Termies.

Hi Chaz. Yea sorry for the sniffles, I did have a cold :( I'll tone down the level of music.

The pauses I'm not sure why. I wasnt reading off a sheet as I didn't want to sound overly robotic, perhaps I'll just edit better to erase the amount of pauses.

In my next video I'll talk about tactics and units for the next HQ I review.

I value your thoughts and Ideas, and I thank you.

No problem, just trying to give some constructive criticism without being harsh or rude! Good luck!

Not rude at all mate. I will never become a better youtuber if people sugar coat everything!

I have the feeling you didn't have a tight enough script. It feels like you're just talking about what comes to your mind the moment you're talking.

DaPino - Cheers for the feedback mate. I toally see what you mwan. I'll have to practice the script a little more before recording.

Hey all! I'm back with another review. This time its Kharn. Feeling better and better about the way I'm doing these . Still learning and adapting with every video. Please check it out and let me know your thoughts. Thanks all


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jycgsh7I3Wk

Good review.

Thanks mate