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Wow, amazing stuff!

Did you read the novels already, cause to me it definitely feels like you've nailed most of the basics of the universe even without having access to most of the information yet, so that's really, really impressive.

One thing that did jump out at me is:

"...for the whole ten years he had been part of Epirian...


The Epirians started the Foundation, but the Foundation is the actual name of the corporation (so people often refer to it as the Epirian Foundation and call the people who work/fight for it Epirians).

So that should probably just be changed to:

"...for the whole ten years he had been part of the Foundation...