They are a solid beginners start.
I would look into maybe taking a bit more time and care, there seems to be a lot of splashes of colour in odd places (red in white sections and so on). Be patient and try to keep in the lines as it were.
I would also suggest you think your paints a bit more or at least consistently. In some places it looks too thick, but in others too thin. Try to aim for multiple thin coats to build up opacity and solid layers.
Washes to add depth may also be something that you might want to take a look at, your metals have no real tonal variation too them and look flat.
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