Just some thoughts:
You could have a few problems here - especially against vehicles, as you've no real anti-armour. Try some Hellblasters or Eradicators.
You're better with smaller units for things like Intercessors, 2 x 5 is better than 1x10 as their real utility is screening & objectives
You have a lot of melee units here, you could do with adding some ranged units. Can't see much use for Assault Intercessors if you have the jump version.
The Aggressor / Redeemer partybus is a great unit, but putting a gravis captain in there multiplies its effectiveness massively
Reivers are pretty poor for the points, other light units have much better impact
It's quite a lot of characters, you could drop one or 2
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