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Hi guys, thank you for checking my list. is it a competitive army? could you give me some suggestions.

Inquisition:

HQ
Inquisitor Coteaz 100

Troop
Inquisitorial Henchmen Warband
• Crusader 15
• Crusader 15
• Death Cult Assassin 15
• Death Cult Assassin 15
• Death Cult Assassin 15

Inquisitorial Henchmen Warband
• Jokaero Weaponsmith 35
• Jokaero Weaponsmith 35
• Acolyte: carapace armour; hot-shot lasgun 13
• Acolyte: carapace armour; hot-shot lasgun 13
• Acolyte: carapace armour; hot-shot lasgun 13
• Chimera 55

Allies

Astra Militarum

HQ
Tank Commander 30
• Leman Russ Punisher: sponson multi-meltas 160

Enginseer 40
• 1 Servitor 10
• 1 Servitor 10
• 1 Servitor 10
• 1 Servitor 10

Troop
Veteran Squad: Veteran Weapons Team (lascannon); + 1 Veteran Sergeant 80

Fast
1 Vendetta Gunship 170

Heavy
1 Hydra 70

Lord of War

Warhound Scout Titan (double barreled turbo laser distructor X2) 720

Fortification:

Aegis Defence Lines: Gun Emplacement with Quad-gun 100

1,749 points

Please don't post all the exact points details of all the models. Simply saying, "Warband, 2xCrusaders, 3xDCA = 75pts" is good enough.

Putting Hot Las on the monkeys' bodyguards is a bit of a waste. Jokaeros have anti-armour, so anti-Marine stuff isn't worth it, IMO. The Bolter, for 1pt, is the best way to equip Acolytes. Also, paying for carapace armour is again not worth it, since they'll be tooling about in a tank. If the tank pops, they're about to die anyhow--carapace armour won't save them.

The Assassin Kill Team is on the small side. It goes in the Vendetta, yes? With only two 3++, you'll die pretty quickly even to a Tac squad of bolters, and you'll have to sit around for a least one turn getting shot at since there's no assault vehicle in the list.

I don't have my rules in front of me, but I wasn't aware that you could take the same gun twice on the Warhound. Maybe double-check that.
I also run mine with the TLD and the chaingun, for rate of fire (because a template can scatter and hit nothing with a bad roll).

The tank commanders leman russ needs to have a second russ in his squadron.

Henchmen are Elite not Troops.

You only have a single Troop choice in your AM Detachment. You need at least two.

 Elric Greywolf wrote:
Please don't post all the exact points details of all the models. Simply saying, "Warband, 2xCrusaders, 3xDCA = 75pts" is good enough.

Putting Hot Las on the monkeys' bodyguards is a bit of a waste. Jokaeros have anti-armour, so anti-Marine stuff isn't worth it, IMO. The Bolter, for 1pt, is the best way to equip Acolytes. Also, paying for carapace armour is again not worth it, since they'll be tooling about in a tank. If the tank pops, they're about to die anyhow--carapace armour won't save them.

The Assassin Kill Team is on the small side. It goes in the Vendetta, yes? With only two 3++, you'll die pretty quickly even to a Tac squad of bolters, and you'll have to sit around for a least one turn getting shot at since there's no assault vehicle in the list.

I don't have my rules in front of me, but I wasn't aware that you could take the same gun twice on the Warhound. Maybe double-check that.
I also run mine with the TLD and the chaingun, for rate of fire (because a template can scatter and hit nothing with a bad roll).

Thanks man, all great suggestions. I deleted the assassin kill team, crusaders as human shield and team with monkeys and servitors. by the way, I lost the game to necron ctan + swarms of flyer....


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 tankboy145 wrote:
The tank commanders leman russ needs to have a second russ in his squadron.

Cheers mate. I didn't read the codex carefully, my very first list of AM


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 grendel083 wrote:
Henchmen are Elite not Troops.

You only have a single Troop choice in your AM Detachment. You need at least two.

according to the codex, I think inquisition can be primary detachment