Hi always happy to see new people fighting for the Greater Good!
First off are those the models you are working with?
Is this your first list, too? You may want to run a slightly smaller one to get a feel for things first too.
Also, you ALWAYS need more Marketlights
You have 15 from four sources by my count, which isnt too bad
imo. Remember the are heavy so pathfinder moving fire snapshots. Drones do not, but they have
BS 2 and really need a drone controller to be useful. So keep those things in mind when choosing Marketlight sources. If there isn't much cover for your the Pathfinders are gonna be toast fast.
The immediate thing I see is the Stormsurge. I don't think you have the firepower to protect it and 400+pts for a distraction unit is a hefty price to pay. Also what upgrades did you give it to get it to 410?
Also
def take a
MSSS and CNN on the commander. I would drop the Stim injector, gauntlet, and Target lock for them.
I also think you need to check the Riptide points. A stim injector for a Riptide is 35pts (still worth it), and are you using the Ion Accelerator or HBC?