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Evolution of the Brotherhood of the Ghoul Stars


The following chapters are chapters I have made some have been stricken off records. They will be noted like this *Exterminated*.
All of the following is to celebrate me having over 2,000 posts!
You guys can take from the selection of chapter, you may talk about how I made them. And why I got rid of them. This is in order of which came first.
I know I am not the only one who has gone through his slew of chapters before settling down on one chapter. We all at one point as space marines have either been a Ultramarines, Blood Angel, Black Templar, Imperial Fist, Raven Guard, Dark Angel, White Scar player at one time. I'm not counting those but you may voice your opinion. Anyway I must tell you the story of how I came up with these names. The Chapters you see here are all what I use to use in school too imagine different things and worlds, etc. Basically all of these were taken form random at different places. Each one is renfined to look like what the originially look like. Unforunately, i have gotten rid of all the painted models before Storm Crusaders, and no model remains of all these chapters. Its just recently I came across these Chapters while I was going through some stuff and that I was about to hit 2,000 messages.

If you guys have not read my blog here on Dakka Dakka. I suggest you check it out. Anyway Of all the chapters here I must say that it took alot of time. And I WILL FINALLY START PAINTING NOW!

1. The Sword Gliders *Exterminated*
My Very first Chapter Name, it began relatively 9 years ago. They were quite well how do i put it different. As they had a lot of different colors, and mainly blue.
It was almost blinding to look at but. Yes it was my first chapter.
They were stricken off my records as an actual chapter. But needless to say they did leave the foundations of the rest of the chapters to come. This Chapter was also the first to include Malnar and Calnor. Using combinations of my name, I was able to make other characters.
Without this chapter I would of never made the Storm Crusaders. *is retconned out of existance*


Sword Glider Painting Scheme.


2. Sword Templars *Existent*
One of my very first Chapters emphasizing my love for the Grey Knights this chapter was one of the few chapters that I have kept. Though I have let some of my friends make this their chapter. The Chapter has since been acting as one of the few chapters that I actually liked, and not only that but it was the first time I painted a model for this army. (It was horrible)
This Chapter I do not remember much about but i kept records on all my chapters in my handy notebooks.
It was a unique chapter of Daemon Hunting Space marines numbering only 978 marines. They were understrength after a crusade in the 3rd war for Armageddon as they were almost exterminated by the Life Eater Virus, they were once numbering in around 1600 Battle Brothers. Their symbol was the Black Templars symbol except Sliver.

Sword Templar Painting Scheme.



3. Wild Cats *Exterminated*
A Simple but almost hilarious army. This Chapter was a complete joke and was one of the few that I actually didn't care about. Needless to say it was destroyed by the Sword Templars as the Wild Cats De-evolved and became followers of the Ruinious powers. This was the first time that I ever allowed Chaos Forces in my army.
This was mainly a funny army that got drunk on the field and were almost slaughtered to 100 marines. Their Symbol was a Orange and Black Tiger. *is retconned out of existance*

Wild Cat Color Scheme.


4.Storm Blades *Existent*
One of the First Chapters to ever include a warring faction. And a Hersey. This Chapter was one of my first real Chapters that emphasized the Templar aspect and mastery of Weaponry such as the blade. This was also the First Time I introduced Calis. And half the chapter went traitor and became insane Space marines that fought each other. only 700 loyal Blades Live. The Chapter had 1500 marines. And the chapter lost 500 in total in that war. Only 300 Blades that followed Calis survived. Their symbol was a sword with lightning surrounding it. *this has been retconned to the Storm Knights*

Storm Blades Color Scheme



5. Dusk Guard *Existent*
This Chapter has few information but was heavily influenced by the Death Guard and the Raven Guard. They were a Raven Guard Descendant. But with a little twist. They were jungle experts, and they used camo generator. They Rarely used marines. They had 800 Scouts and only 500 Battle Brothers. The Chapter Planets. Tarsoain was a forest planet that had 5 moons. All of which gave the Dusk Guard a huge flux of Recruits Frequently. Their Symbol was a Sunrise with a cloud.

Dusk Guard color Scheme.




6. The Order of the Bloody Hand *Exterminated*

This chapter was fanatically loyal to the Eldar and worshipped the Eldar God Khaine. (almost said khorne D: ) Anyway the chapter itself was uniquely structured as it first introduced a Newer ranking system and a newer feel. As they used mainly pyskers. They were exterminated by the Dusk Guards and Sword Templars. Also unique to the Order was that they had at least 1,900 Battle Brothers. Hence why two chapters teamed up to defeat the Order.
Also new to this was I started my Eldar Army at this time. So i had to come up with a reason why the two forces combined. Their symbol was the Symbol of a Blade dripping with blood.
*is retconned out of existence*

The Order of the Bloody Hand Color Scheme






7. The Wanderers *Existent*
This chapter was a chapter of at least 1,000 battle brothers, but they were almost completely exterminated by the Necrons. Only 190 marines, drawn from almost every company excluding the 10th company. This chapter only had 11 terminators. This Chapter still exists but only 100 of them exist. It was unique because it first showed art of the future Guardians. This Company of Marines went throughout the galaxy, acting basically under a rouge Trader and they were supplied with a low amount of recruits. But they managed to survive. This Chapter Barely had any Chapter Masters left. It was headed by oh would look at that. Captain Val. Their Symbol was a Hooded Angel. *no weapon* This number has increased back to 520 Wanderers are still alive. They operate in a Star fortress and a small fleet.

The Wanderers Color Scheme






8. Storm Knights *Exterminated*
This chapter was the first to feature, Captain Calick, Brother Captain Altorick, Talick and Asherian. I have lost almost all my notes for this chapter. But the remaining notes I do have point to it being one of the Original 2nd Founding Chapters. Their Symbol was the Dark Angels symbol. They are the sons of the Storm Crusaders. They turned Traitor and are now the Iron Malice's

Storm Knights' Presumed color Scheme.





9. Storm Crusaders *Current*
The Storm Crusaders are the newest incarnation of my work. They are the largest and greatest and most indepth I have ever gone. The Chapter is heavily influenced by almost all of the Chapters on this list. As it has almost every single character. Symbol: Angel of Time.
The Crusaders are still at heart Templars and Modern Military Tacticians. All characters combined into this chapter.

Storm Crusaders Color Scheme. (ignore the Raven)




10. Son's of Asherian *Side by Side Current* *renamed Dusk Paladins*
My newest edition to my chapter list. This chapter is the Crusader Elements of the Storm Crusaders. They number 3,000. And they are fighting the Chaos Space Marines in the Eye of Terror with Full Force. This Chapter is led by Gabriel.
Symbol: Dragon with sword through it.

Son's of Asherian Color Scheme.



In this thread you may talk about other chapters that you have designed but never used them. I have several others but these are the 10 huge chapters.

You may rate which one you like.


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I need people to post. Ugh....... Lalalallalalalalalalla

If anyone has questions on how long this took me. This took me 2 hours to make as i had to go through all my journals, notebooks, logs, and audiologs. eww. It was like going through your entire life for autobiography it was not pretty.

I had a chapter called The Sentinals of Euphrates. They were based in the Euphrates system as a major Imperium outpost guarding the Arx gap but were enveloped by a massive warp storm over a century before the gothic war began. There's more but that's my favorite bit.

purplefood wrote:I had a chapter called The Sentinels of Euphrates. They were based in the Euphrates system as a major Imperium outpost guarding the Arx gap but were enveloped by a massive warp storm over a century before the gothic war began. There's more but that's my favorite bit.

O.o That sounded Awesome. And Plus you used Euphrates which I believe is a Greek thing. If I remember correctly.
Anyway good to see people read my question.

Actually i think it's also a moon of jupiter or some other planet but considering there is a planet called Birmingham i don't see why not.

Well. Anyway if anyone can post one of their chapters just post here. You may even post your current chapter here. O.o
I have one more chapter but it has already been made and I scrapped it.


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Anyway I have a Craft World of my own I would Like to add.

Hey Guys is there anyone else that will like to add their chapters?!?!?!?!

The Sword Templars History and Chapter Tactics.
Chapter Master: Leonidas Taldor
Geneseed: Imperial Fists
Chapter NO.: 212
Traits: Strike Hard, Heavy Assault, Abhor the Witch!
Manpower: 987 - (once was 1,500)
Chapter Tactics: Heavy Assaults, Stubborn.
Homeworld: Fleet Based, Has a Star-fortress.
History:
The Chapter Participated in the Second war for Armageddon and the 13th Black Crusade. The Chapter in the Second War for Armageddon was almost completely destroyed as on the planet of Armageddon Delta, the Life eater virus was blown by the winds of Armageddon and the Sword Templar's 6 companies were eaten alive by the virus. The chapter has struggled ever since. The Chapter Later still understrength aided the Dusk Guard Chapter in the Destruction of the Order of the Bloody Hand.

The Two Chapters were sent to destroy the Order of the Bloody Hand Space Marine Chapter due to that the Chapter had turned away from the Emperor's light and was worshiping the Bloody Handed God Khaine and was in league with the Eldar. The Two Chapters seeing that the Order of the Bloody Hands were not only in control of a fortress monastery and a size-able Fleet, it also possessed an entire system. But as they were preparing to Attack the Order of the Bloody Hand's System, an Fleet of Inquisition and Imperial Navy Forces Arrived to Aid in the Destruction of the Bloody Hands.

The Sword Templar were the first to arrive in the System and they took with them a Battle Barge called the Heart of Gods met the Bloody Hand's Fleet. The bloody Hands opened fire on the Battle Barge but Immediately as they fired upon the Battle Barge. The Rest of the Imperial Forces Arrived quickly surprising the Bloody Hand's Fleet, and scattering them. The Imperial Navy and Inquisition Targeted the Main Communications and Supply Lines. While the Two Chapters who Stood at 2,000 Battle Brothers Strong in total were ready to Assault the Monastery of the Order of the Bloody Hand.
Both Chapters Hoped that the Fleet of the Bloody Hand's had not returned to the Monestary as the Pyskers of the Dusk Guard had blocked all communications between the fleet and the Planets.
Taking the risk the Entire Fleet of the Two Chapters Appeared over the Monestary planet of Dreadlocks IV and started to bombard any Anti-Ship weaponry that was located on the Planet. Meanwhile on the Planet below the Bloody Handed Chapter had just been fully gathered in the Monastery beginning to Leave through a webway as all communications with their fleet was gone. Seeing the worst the Entire Chapter had pulled its forces back to the Monastery and was preparing to go through a webway gifted to them by the Eldar.

Immediately when the planet was bombarded and as their sensors picked up ships in Orbit. The Entire Chapter Settled into its new positions and Fired upon the Invaders.
The Two Chapters was surprised that the Bloody Hand's were able to fire back and even destroy a few ships. the Two Chapters agreed the Battle had to be taken to the ground so the Sword Templars Drop podded into the Fortress Monastery's inner walls. As the protective covering of the mountain was obliterated exposing it to a airdrop. The Sword Templars fought the Bloody Hand's On the Sacred Barracks and the streets of the Monastery both chapters fought. But the Order of the Bloody Hand was over 2,000 Space Marines, while the Sword Templars only measured around 987 Battle Brothers. The Sword Templars then rushed with their assault squads to destroy the orbital cannons slaughtering many of the Bloody Hand's in their wake. Then the Dusk Guard Arrived seeing the Orbital Cannons all destroyed the Entire Dusk Guard Chapter Deployed their many War-machines and their Storm Ravens and Thunder Hawks pounded against the walls of the Monastery, in only a few moments the Walls of the Bloody Hand's Monastery were gone and the Dusk Guard had killed Hundreds of Bloody Hands and PDF Troopers in the fighting.

Seeing that the Two chapter's were only focused on destroying the Bloody Hand's. The Bloody Hand's Deployed their entire Chapter in City Fighting to try and Fight off the Invaders. The Two Chapters seeing the enemies sloppy and desperate tactic bombarded the Bloody Hand's Forces with Vindicators and Land Raiders. Soon the Bloody Hands had suffered a massive causality rate. Seeing their chapter doomed. At least two companies of Bloody Hand's Activated the Webway gate and escaped leaving the rest of the Bloody Hand's to destroy the webway gate and to ensure the chapter survived with the Two Companies. Soon the Librarians that had stayed including the Chief Librarian walled out with at least 500 of the last remaining Bloody Hand's and the two Chapters the Dusk and the Templar's both looked at the almost beaten Bloody Hands.
The Three Chapters stood for a moment looking at each other. And the Chief Librarian of the Bloody Hand's Spoke and asked, "Why Brothers do you attack us when we had no reason to fight us? Why would the Inquisition want us dead? If all we have is the Webway? What did the Inquisition proclaim us of being Conspirators? We use our knowledge to fight and we have successfully saved millions this way! You must see sense!"

The Chapter Master of the Dusk Guard responded, "You Misguided fool, what you have done is turn away from the Emperor's Light, conspiring with Xenos and using their technology as your own and for disobeying all the Laws placed by the Imperium you and your chapter are to be exterminated."

The Sword Templar Chapter Master yelled. "Die Traitors for what grief you have caused for my chapter! You Must Die for your sins!" And with that the Two Chapters charged the Bloody Hand's in close combat.

The Dusk Guard Chapter Master Beheaded the Chief Librarian. While the Sword Templar Chapter master slaughtered the Entire Retinue of the Librarian's.
And with that the entire Bloody Handed Chapter was almost exterminated only the Two Companies and the scattered Bloody Hand's fleet remained.

But the Dusk Guard and Sword Templars thought their enemy was destroyed and took the system with-in the week. Though the costs were high the Sword Templars had be triumphant and had claimed the system with the Dusk guard as their new recruiting worlds. The Two Chapters Parted as they both were called to aid in the 13th Black Crusades.
But the Bloody Hand's Surivived waiting in the webway until they can prove themselves innocent of their charges and to regain their honor. Though this is only a speculated, as only 1700 Bloody Hand's Bodies were recovered, and 500 of the Bloody Hand's were listed as Campaigning.

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The Dusk Guard (Knights)

Chapter Master: Mortis Void

Homeworld: Lucaia

Geneseed: Blood Angels

Chapter No.: 162

Man-power: 1,000 – 1,200 (Unknown)

Symbol: Clouded Sun/ or the Symbol of Dusk. (fading moon upside down)

Specialty: Ship to Ship, Boarding Actions, Lightning Fast Assaults, Pyskers.

Traits: Trust your Battle Brothers,

Blood Brothers: Sword Templars (fought together during the Bloody Hand’s Rebellion) Ice Angels, The Wanderers, Storm Crusaders (fought together during the 5th War for Drancoris and aided in the Assault on Baltnis).

History:

The Dusk Guard are Feared and known for their cunning and their use of Pyskers. They Maintain a fortress Monastery at Lucaia a feudal planet likes of Ancient Terra, before the heresy. And is not overpopulated but instead is around 200,000,000 Human Population. The Planet of Lucaia is surrounded by 3 moons. One almost the color of blood, the Second the color of the forest, the third the Color of the Deserts. This is where the chapter took it’s colors. The Dusk Guard unlike many other Blood Angels have not had a single Astrates fall to the Black Rage.

The Dusk Guard were founded during the Age of Apostasy. A time of great revolts and blood shed. Wishing not to get involved the chapter built itself up and started to campaign against renegades in the Ultima.

At least 200 Years ago a Chapter Called the Wild Cats Chapter splintered from the imperium taking with it 2 systems. Which were vital in supplying the 13th Black Crusade’s Defense in the Eye Of terror. The Dusk Guard Chapter were called to destroy the Wild Cats and to regain the system without the use of an exterimantius. Also joining the Dusk Guard were The Wanderers chapter which had come to settle a score with the Wild Cats as The Wanderer’s were betrayed to die on their planet. The Two Chapter Master’s gathered all of their strength in their Sizeable Fleet. But it was still not enough to defeat the Wild Cat’s Entire Chapter.

Word came from a unlikely ally, the Ice Angel’s Chapter. Who sent a Battle Barge, and 2 strike cruisers. Enough to make the Dusk Guard, Chapter Master confident to organize the assault on the Wild Cat’s Fleet.

The Wanderers chapter was the first to arrive in the system with their fast ships. Immediately On arrival their small fleet was attacked by the Wild Cat’s Fleet. The Wanderer’s Chapter abandoned all hope for a full scale assault, and resorted to Hit and Run tactics assailing the Wild Cat’s Rear guard.

Next Arrived the Ice Angels who immediately on arrival fired upon the Wild Cat’s Destroyers. But the Ice Angel’s were not expecting the Wild Cat’s to of corrupted the System’s Imperial Navy. The Ice Angel’s Fleet was surrounded and was attacked from all sides.

When all hope was lost the Dusk Guard Finally Arrived with their entire Chapter Fleet and an small Imperial Navy fleet from their home system. The Dusk Guard immediately assaulted the Lead Ship of the Wild Cat’s sending in a boarding party of 50 Dusk Guards. Who entered the vessel of the Wild Cat’s to little to no problems. The Difficulty was they had no way of escaping. Almost being completely outnumbered and seeing no way of escape, the Captain In charge of the Dusk Guard’s Boarding party Steered the Battle barge of the Wild Cat’s straight into the Wild Cat’s Naval Destroyer Ramming through it and also smashing through a couple of cruisers.

With the noble sacrifice of the Dusk Guard’s 6th Company. The Dusk Guard Assaulted with full force and the Ice Angel’s followed. Smashing through the Wild Cat Fleet with Relative fast speed. The Next step was to aid The Wanderers chapter that had just drop podded on the Homeworld of the Wild Cats. And Who had captured the Fortress monastery which was relatively ill-defended. Were requesting aid against a current difficulty. The Dusk Guard seeing their allies in aid sent the 2nd company and their 9th company. While the rest of the chapter fought the Wild Cat’s Chapter. The Ice Angels also sent one of their companies to aid in the retrieval.

Immediately on arrival on the planet the fleet was assailed by a giant Anti Ship laser on the planet below. Seeing no way to get there without the use of thunderhawks the Dusk Guard fired their drop pods onto the planet below before retreating from the planet.

When the 2nd company of the Dusk Guard arrived they found that the vox channel’s were blocked and their communications to any ship in orbit impossible even by the use of librarians. They found the cause of this. The Chief Librarian of the Wild Cat’s had blocked it with his psychic powers. And not only that but the Wild Cat’s had access to a Small Titan Legion. Which consisted of 2 Reaver titans and 5 warhounds. With very few heavy weapons the Dusk Guard performed hit and run tactics with the Wanderer’s chapter against the Wild Cat’s Titans. As all choices to assault the Titan’s head on would result in their devastation.

The Hit and run Tactics proved successfully. Then the Ice Angel’s chapter struck with full force upon the titans as the Titan’s had suffered severe weapons failure in no due part to the Librarians of the Dusk Guard 2nd company. Surrounded and slowly being crushed on all sides the Wild Cat’s Charged with full fury upon the 3 chapters. Acting in pure rage the Wild Cat’s threw away all tactics and discipline as they fought the Dusk Guard and the Ice Angel’s in combat. In which the Two chapter’s excelled in. The Two chapters fought side by side against the Wild Cats, killing hundreds of the orange marines.

With superior tactics and close combat excellence, the two chapters slaughtered the Wild Cats and finally killed the Chief Librarian. And the Titan’s Legion were completely destroyed by the Wanderer’s Chapter which had turned the guns of the Fortress Monastery upon the Titan’s. The Dusk Guard with their communications back online the Dusk Guard called upon their ships to aid them the final fortress, the Moon of the Wild Cat’s Homeworld.

The Three Chapter’s with their all but diminished forces assaulted the moon. Slaughtering the last of the Wild Cats chapter. It would take 2 weeks more before the 2 systems were taken back by the 3 chapters, as the Wild Cats had risen a mighty Imperial Guard Regiment that was later wiped out.

At the end the Three Chapters parted each other all confident that they had done their duty and had brought the 2 systems back to the Imperium the Ice Angels and The Wanderers exchanged oaths to aid each other, and the Dusk Guard honored the Wanderers for taking control of the Systems. And ensuring the Survival of The Wanderer’s Chapter.

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I would like to Thank IceAngel for allowing me to use his chapter.
Anyway the Next Chapter Will be the Wanderer's Chapter who are going to fight the eldar.
Hope You guys Like the Lore

I promise to read the lore when I feel like it. Funky paint scheme.

Finch Claw wrote:I promise to read the lore when I feel like it. Funky paint scheme.

Which one? The Wild Cat's or the Sword Gliders?

Yeah I need to fix some parts of the Dusk Guard and the Sword Templars.

The Wanderers

Chapter Master: Altoris

Homeworld: Neckia (Destoryed) Occupies a fortress monastery for the moment has a single ship and two strike craft.

Geneseed: Speculated to descend from a Lost Legion’s Genestock. But many believe the chapter to be descended from the 21st Cursed Founding as they were highly unlucky during the Assault on their homeworld.

Chapter No.: 737

Symbol: Darkened Angel

Man-Power: 229 (slowly regenerating)

Chapter Tactics: Hit And Run, Well known for their Tactical Squads being able to infiltrate entire bases without being noticed, Desert fighting experts and Ice World Experts.

Brotherhoods: Sword Templars (Life debt, as the Sword Templars provided The Wanderers a Single Ship, and saved them from the Necrons.) Dusk Guard (War against the Wild Cats, received a Homeworld in aiding in the assault.) Storm Crusaders (aided the 29th company during a Campaign against a Necron Fleet), Ice Angels, Emperor’s Shields (Aided in a small battle against a Wild Cat Company that had survived)

History:

The Wanderers Chapter have been under Strength for at least 150 years. As their planet was destroyed in a war against the Necrons awoke underneath its surface. The Wanderers sent 720 Battle Brothers to fight the Necrons driving them into the very planet itself, activating a Warp drive, using their Entire Fleet as basically giant ticking time bombs as their weaponry had no affect on the Necrons tomb world sent their entire fleet through the planet, taking the planet, Necrons and the remaining The Wanderers with it into the warp.

The Chapter Master Altoris was not present during this time, as he was overseeing a campaign, having significant loses came across a single ship that possessed the entire storage of their geneseed and the last battle barge of their once great fleet was shattered but still had its priceless cargo. Altoris took it upon himself and the rest of The Wanderers Chapter to rebuild it, and one day ensure the chapter would one day regain its forces.

The Chapter had been highly active in its Wandering. Its Original Name has been lost in records but it has taken a new name The Wanderers. But it is clear they are devoted to the Imperium and they have a deep seated hatred of the Necrons. The Chapter also hunted down artifacts. Though the exact reason why is unknown. But what is known is that they use the artifacts which are Dark Age Technology for the Imperium and turn it over to the Ordos or the Mechanicum.

The Chapter’s most famous artifact raid was against the Eldar of Ulthwe in the Ghoul Stars. The Wanderers were traveling in a system when they came across a Adeptus Astrates Signal, too weak to be a recent attack. But it was several thousands of years old. The Wanderers came across a Desert Planet and detected a large superstructure on the planet below. Wanting not to have an problems arise if it was a trap. The Wanderers sent down their forward Stern Guard and their tactical squads to capture the Superstructure.

When they arrived on the planet below they found a doorway to a massive armory, which contained relics such as Terminator Armor, Relic Blades, Conversion beams, and land raiders, and 500 suits of Power Armor. This founding made The Wanderers praise the Emperor as their luck had finally turned to good. Not only did they find this but as they searched deeper they found technological wonders. And Eldar Relics, the Librarian accompanying The Wanderers forces accidently activated a Eldar Distress beacon. Not knowing what he had done he remained ignorant until it was too late.

The Eldar of Ulthwe arrived in large numbers of Storm Guardians lead by a single Farseer called Ja’loti the so called keeper of relics. Immediately on arrival the Eldar Ground forces attacked The Wanderers Guarding the Superstructure. While the Eldar Ships engaged The Wanderers Fleet above.
Surrounded and almost completely outnumbered Altoris scattered the fleet making it harder for the Eldar to target them. He then sent down his newly Equipped Terminator Squads to the ground below to provide aid to the besieged units below. Also simultaneously sending out Cobra Fighters, to engage the Eldar Fighters.
The Librarian who was at the command of the Ground forces of The Wanderers immediately on sensing a Eldar Pysker nearby bolstered the defenses of the Superstructure by collapsing tunnels and by using the ancient Land Raiders to aid them in their battle against the Eldar who had believed to find only infantry. When the ancient Machines roared to life thanks to their Techmarine Plato they immediately took the battle to the Eldar by driving them back from the caves.

When the Terminators Arrived to provide aid they found The Wanderers pushing the Eldar but still not gaining as much ground as they would like.
With a Final Push the Librarian immediately Engaged the Ja’loti in combat, slicing through the Seer Council with relative ease with his assault Squad. The two Pyskers battled each other with their minds and finally the Librarian disemboweled the head of the Ja’loti. Taking the force weapon away from the Farseer’s corpse; as a prize. They secured the last of the cargo and prepared for transit. But before they could leave the Eldar attacked yet again. Seeing no other way to aid his brothers Techmarine Plato planted within his land raider several melta charges that he rammed straight into the Eldar Webway gate destroying himself and a large chunk of the Eldar forces.

With no route of escape the Eldar Storm Guardians were quickly mopped up by suppression fire laid down by the enraged Terminators. After Successfully retrieving all the relics and the remnants of the Land Raider that Plato used it was rebuilt and is called Plato’s Fury. The Librarian that had slew the Eldar Farseer is now the Chief Librarian of The Wanderers Chapter as it was still vacant since 50 years before.

Hope you guys enjoyed it.
This is the Cast of Characters that will be focusing on The Wanderers Chapter that I really enjoyed writing about as it seemed that this chapter needs some time in the spotlight. (As I am going to start a small army of them. I need a little break from the Storm Crusaders.)
Anyway If you have anymore things you want me to add to this chapter that should be added like a character list which is coming as soon as I write it, I will try and put it up!

I read your stuff, Its quite good. Keep it up. Those templars remind me of a chapter I just made up recently.
1000 guys, Live in a ship, Armor colour is grey along with a black hand, gene seed is from the bt Most members wear mk2 Iron armor. Their trademark is the use of incinerating bolter rounds and chain fists. symbol: 1 2 Same as the templars except 1 and 2 are not connected.

Finch Claw wrote:I read your stuff, Its quite good. Keep it up. Those templars remind me of a chapter I just made up recently.
1000 guys, Live in a ship, Armor colour is grey along with a black hand, gene seed is from the bt Most members wear mk2 Iron armor. Their trademark is the use of incinerating bolter rounds and chain fists. symbol: 1 2 Same as the templars except 1 and 2 are not connected.

Thank you. All I need to finish now are the Order of the Bloody Hands, Son's of Asherian, Storm Crusaders, and Son's of the Phoenix which will be added to the list.

Can't wait

11. Son's of the Phoenix
The Son's of the Phoenix is another chapter I had lying around. They are descended from the Storm Crusaders, and they have at least 2,400 Battle Brother son Active duty. They are a fleet based chapter, and their main Ship is a Star Fortress. This is one of the first of a few successive group of successors of the Storm Crusaders. But this army was never actually sent into action, I tried to make a chapter Master for the army. But I failed.

The Son's of the Phoenix's symbol is Raven. They also have many symbols of wings all over their armor, and ornate equipment.

Alrighty Here is one of the more Famous Chapters I have done
Son's Of Asherian
Chapter Master: Gabriel

Homeworld: Fleet Based. (once was part of the Storm Crusaders.)

Geneseed: Storm Crusaders

Symbol: Sword Of Asherian and the Symbol of Time turn sideways.

Manpower: 3,750

Chapter Tactics/specialties: Crusade, Full on Assault, Abhor the Witch, Brother's before duty!


History:
The Son's of Asherian are a Crusading chapter were once part of the Storm Crusader's Chapter. The reason for this was a deal broke between the Storm Crusaders 2nd Arch Templar Malnar with the Inqusition of the Ordo's Heretics, and Xenos. The Storm Crusaders were then banned from being able to send any marine into Deathwatch. Instead the Alpha Squadron was created. The Son's of Asherians were at one time considered to be a part of the Storm Crusaders for 5,000 years. Before Calnor Alnria and Malnar both deemed it necessary to splinter the Son's from the chapter. Already possessing a fleet and a more than enough geneseed to hold out the Son's have showed the Galaxy that the Son's of Asherian are one force no one should ever fight against.

The Son's of Asherian have a similar structure to the Black Templars. Needless to say each company of the Son's of Asherian sometimes consists of only 50 battle brothers and a single vessel, or even to the might of 500 Battle Brothers. The Son's are rarely together as a chapter as the Entire Chapter is spread across the entire universe, it would be a day like the years of the Horus Hersey to bring this chapter together. The Son's of Asherian Maintain at least 13 Fortresses and systems to maintain their high quota of recruiting and to replenish losses of campaigns.

The Son's of Asherian are known for Participating in the War's of Drancoris, Gothic War, the Black Crusade, and the Medusa Campaign. But a battle that is most recent is the battle of Tordinis. The Son's of Asherian Talinith Crusade under the Command of Lord Commander Telecis Feldor. Who he and 200 battle brothers of the rank of Crusader, and 25 Templars arrived in the system of Tordinis. When they arrived they found a system in flames. As Orks, and Chaos cultists fought for the possession of the system.

The Son's Immediately assaulted the main hive planet that was under siege by Cultists and Greenskins alike. The Cultists had thought that the capture of the hive city was going to be breeze compared to the orks. Charging headlong into the newly arrived Son's of Asherian. The Son's fired a volleys of disciplined shots into the Cultist army. Slaughtering thousands of Cultists. The Cultist's retreated and devised a new plan to call upon the Son's of Asherian's worst enemies, The Word Bearers. Not knowing of this the Son's Of Asherian cleansed the world of Green skins and wiped out the last of the Green Skins with a decesive strike onto their Roks. The Lord Commander Telecis Feldor, had been able to force the Greenskins closer together so that the Lance Weaponry of their Fleet would destory the entire Ork fleet. Ending Wagh! BackSplitta.

The Cultists were successful in contacting a Chaos Warband of The Word Bearer's and in 2 days the Cultists would arrive to fight their Enemy. During these two days the Son's of Asherian spread out on the newly reconquered Fortress World of Tordinis Prime. Mopping up any Green Skins left in the area. While the Son's of Asherian were at their lowest numbers in the main citadel of Tordinis Prime the Word Bearer's attacked.

Caught completely off-guard the Lord Commander Telecis Feldor immediately gathered the remants of his crusade that were in the Citadel. And held out against the Word Bearer's. But the Word Bearer's Sent waves upon waves of Cultists. It was said that the walls of the Citadel's Main gate were filled with piles of chaos cultists stacked so high that it dwarfed a Baneblade. Running low on ammo the Telecis Feldor saw that there was no other choice. He immedately embarked into the Horde of cultists into close combat. With one Halbried in one hand the Sacred Storm Bolter of Asherian's Fury, Telecis assualted the thousand son's head on. The Two Forces clashed together chainsword met flesh, while bolter met powerarmor.

After hearing the charge ordered by Telecis Feldor, the Alpha Squadron who had accompanied Telecis Feldor's crusade deemed it neccessary to intervene. Teleporting to the surface with at least 10 Alpha Squadron Marines. The 10 turned the tide of battle as their sacred and well trained weapons smashed through the implementing of their Untouchable gene. The 10 Alpha Squadron Marines slaughtered hundreds of Renegades in just a few hours. Soon the Rest of the Talinith Crusade was coming from across the planet. Dropping in to aid their allies and to slaughter the Word Bearer's. In that battle the Lord Commander Telecis Feldor gained thousand's of wounds, from sorcery and chaotic powers. In that last ditch of effort to defeat the Word Bearer's Daemon Prince, with his dying breath Telecis Feldor pushed his halberd through the Prince's Skull killing the beast and sending the Word Bearer's into a full retreat. But the Alpha Squadron appeared to exact vengeance on the Lord Commanders Death and poured in their weapons fire into the Word Bearer's Slaughtering every single Word Bearer. The Alpha Squadron seeing their job finished left.

After the battle at the Citadel, the Son's of Asherian gathered the bodies of their crusade and and retrieved the geneseed and it has been said by reports of the populous that the skies were black for 2 months in honor of the fallen soldiers of PDF and the Sons.

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Alrighty hope you guys enjoyed it.
Anyway the Alpha Squadron is basically my version of the Legion of the Damned but they basically have specifically designed armor. But they are slow compared to other marines.

Ok I will be updating and getting one more Chapter up that was slightly Inspired by the White Scars lightning fast assaults.


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The Wanderers Chapter Character list
Michael Tabris: Chapter Master of the Wanderer's Chapter
Venerable Zion: Council Member
Captain Aaron: Captain of the 7th, Council Member
Chief Librarian Debir: Council Member. (newly elected.)
Gideon: Veteran Sergeant of the 1st company. Council Member
Captain Titus: captain of the 3rd company, Council member
Captain Ariel: Captain of the 4th
Captain Michael: Captain of the 5th
Squad Kohath
Veteran SGT Kohath, Veteran Lael, Veteran Uriah
Ok Can someone help me make the other 8 characters?
If you can help me that would be absolutely incredible I am running out of time. My anniversary is coming up in 2 months.

Hello peoples!
Here is one of my favorite Dreadnoughts Garane of the 1st company!

Garane
Garane was once the Captain of the 1st company but he was wounded in a battle against a traitor forces were his arms were both hacked off by a Daemon Prince and his legs were crushed, even with his artificer armor on. He was recovered from Champion Navious the future captain of 1st.
Garane now serves as Loken of the Iron Wolves 10th Company adviser and ancient. Garane wields his plasma cannon. He has since banished the Daemon Prince that almost defeated him in combat. He is truly a Hero of the Storm Crusaders and is one of Calnor Alrnia's Greatest friend.


Then one of my more Favorite Captains. Captain Prometheus of the 3rd company.

Prometheus
Prometheus is the master of the fleet of the Storm Crusaders. He has to been one of the chapters greatest fleet commanders they have ever seen. He gained the rank of Fleet Admiral after his daring assault on a Chaos Renegade Fleet that possessed at least 20 cruisers. Prometheus had only 1 Battle Barge and 12 Rapid Strike Vessels and 20 Cobras.
Indeed he destroyed the entire Chaos Renegade fleet and only lost 1 rapid strike vessel and 2 cobras. His Company the 3rd are boarding action experts as they are able to board ships with drop pods from a close proximity ship that is moving. Prometheus rarely takes to the ground and rarely leaves his vessel if the Space Battles are far from over.


Techmarine Jakios is another one of my more favorite Characters. One day I will make him a forgemaster.

Jakios
Jakios is one of the last surviving members of the original 10th Company from the 4th War of Drancoris. He has served the chapter for 600 years and his arms have never grown tired. He is brilliant at his work and is seen by many of his younger battle brothers as gifted with machine spirit. It is said that he can calm the machine spirits with relative ease. He Is also known for leading the 10th company when Captain Loken was wounded during the Hammerfall Campaign. He took the company into defensive action and was able to defeat an entire chaos renegade force.


Then one of my Stern Guard SGTs Garro. (yes his name is from the Horus Hersey)

Templar Garro
Garro has served the Storm Crusaders for 350 years. He is an amazing Swordsmen and is widely known for taking the fight directly to the enemy. His Squad nicknamed Doom Bringers. Bring Melta weaponry to bare against Vechiles and Heavy Infantry. Garro is attached to the 10th Company. His Power Weapon was given to him by a Space Wolf and as such they wear space wolf icons as they served with the Space Wolves for a realtively short time in their time with the 5th company of the Storm Crusaders in a joint campaign.

First Knight _________

First Knights
First Knights are the Storm Crusaders excavators and relic retrievers. First Knights are sent across the Entire Galaxy to find relics of the chapter that were stolen in the chapters history, or relics of other chapters. The First Knights rarely actually meet any of their brethren but they are usually accompained by a squad of Alpha Squadron or Guardians. Half of the current number of First Knights are Pyskers and the other half are specialized in other manners of weaponry.
(All non-pyskers that are first knights are Vulkan. All Pyskers First Knights are Grand Masters used from the Daemonhunters codex they are equipped with a Nemesis Force Weapon.)
First Knights are drawn from all of the Storm Crusader's Successor Chapters.

Good stuff so far Asherian and some nice conversions.

Thanks. It is good to see people liking my stuff.

Calnor Alrnia the Grand Templar of the Storm Crusaders




Calnor Alrnia
If not one of the most famous of the Storm Crusaders. Calnor Alrnia is a legend among his chapter. Defeating Daemon Princes, Chaos Lords, Ork Warlords, Renegades, Sorcerers, Tau Commanders, Autarchs, Farseers; most of these kills are confirmed and are written down in the Library of Knowledge. Calnor Alrnia Bares the Sword of Asherian, an ancient blade that brusts with power, the Crusader armor is a self repairing technological wonder. The Eagle helm is Calnor Alrnia's badge of office and his protection against weapons that may do him harm. Calnor Alrnia also has his Specialized Combi-Melta that was specifically modified to take down large creatures or leaders.
Calnor Alrnia is also in the possession of a C'tan phase knife and a Knife of unknown origin which he once used in his assassinations during his time in Alpha Squadron.

Hey guys. quick update. My project in collecting more marines will be coming soon! Beware as the Assault on Maldrie will be the first narrative written by me and a few select people that I know!

Merianis Strike Force
Dusk Guard Chapter (Son’s of Sanguine)- The Dusk Guards are lead by Captain Ulthizzar who he and his strike force of Terminators while the rest of his company is regenerating its loses against the Wild Cat’s Chapter are arriving on Merianis with their brother chapter the Emperor’s Shields.
Librarian Alima- Terminator Leader from the 1st company

Captain Ulthizzar – Captain of the 4th Company

Terminator Squad Pacis- Attached to the 4th Company
Sergeant Pacis, Brothers Unas, Mesu, Men-nu, Ankh,

Termiantor Squad Ukani- Attach to the 4th Company
Segerant Ukani, Aiaria, Caesornia, San-Khu, Honored Brother Hathor,

The Wanderers Chapter force- The Wanderers are known for hunting down relics of their chapter and others by going to desert planets and looking for evidence of their past so one day they will find out exactly who they were descended from. Captain Katzfiel was assigned by Chapter Master or Arch Angel Michael Tabris to find anything on the Planet of Merianis. The Wanderers Chapter have been on the planet of Merianis fighting a Eldar Force that has seemed to be aware of their intentions.
Captain Katzfiel- Katzfiel is realtively new to his position and has so far only served in 2 campagins as a captain. But his experince is not to be put into doubt as he is one of the few last surviving senior staff of the Wanderers Chapter that Survived the Destruction of their homeworld.
Librarian Tarot- Tarot is a wise-old librarian who has mastered many of the arts of interrogation, he out right refuses to fight on the open battle field as his skills in recovery and the use of his powers of perception are legendary among his Libarius.
Tactical Squad
SGT Talia, Brothers Olinda, Vesta, Varcan, Dameal, Permaz, Ambriel, Haael, Gabi, Mador,
Stern Guard Squad Bahram
SGT Bahram, Veterans Tabris, Vel, Daschar, A’albiel

Tactical Squad
SGT Nafriel, Brother Oertha, Vohal, Penat, Amatiel Karoz, Weattna, Farris, Donel, Barchiel.

And 2 unnamed extra Tactical Squads and 2 unnamed extra fully equipped Scout Squads.

The Emperor’s Shields- The Emperor’s Shields have been called to the planet of Merianis with their Commander Agro of the 5th. He along with his entire company do not know what awaits them on the planet.

Captain Agro
Techmarine

Tactical Squad Aegeus- Is one of Captain Agro’s closest friends and was once part of the very large veteran company terminator squads before he and Captain Agro were sent to replace the lost captain of the 4th company.
SGT Aegeus, Leonidas, Agenor, Iarios, Kain, Lupus, Monimos, Nebo, Ophelos, Pallas
Assualt Squad Menelaos- Recently promoted Segerant youngest of the company
SGT Menelaos, Brother Lucianus, Kreon, Cyprus, Kaisar

Devastator Squad Hypatos- The Oldest of the company.
SGT Hypatos, Deimos, Ektor, Gad, Fotis

And 3 unnamed Tactical Squads, and 1 unnamed devastator squad, and 1 unnamed assault squad.

Assualt on Merianis

Chapter 1
On-board the Strike Cruiser the Poseidon's Tempest. An yellow Astrates claded in Captain laurels looked out the observation deck. The Deck itself was darkened but outside the wondrous sight of the Emperor's Shields fleet was in view. At least 4 Strike Cruisers and the Gigantic form of the Battle Barge The Olympus dwarfed them all. By splendor and by sheer size.

The Emperor's Shields Captain's stern face possessed many deep scars and a likeness to that of a warn veteran. His short cut black hair barely even covered his forehead. His battle armor shined and his helmet which possessed a laurels on both sides were a splendor. In the fair corner was a Red claded Tech Marine whose face told of a wizened veteran who had seen many a things in his time.

The door to the observation deck opened with a whine, and out stepped a Emperor's Shield, his youthful face told of many tales. The Captain turned his head slightly to see the new comer to the observation. The Captain smirked. "Welcome Sergeant Aegeus!" He turned to greet his tactical sergeant embracing each other like long lost friends.

The Sergeant had been recently on a recruiting mission and was teaching many neophytes with his tactical squad. The event was good as they recruited at least 20 neophytes. The Sergeant welcomed his Captain's friendly jesture and gave him friendly embrace as well. Such was tradition.

The Sergeant spoke with a muffled voice not being at the least bit influenced by any of the distractions of the wonderous scene behind the Captain.
"Captain Agro, it has been far too long my friend! It has been what 10 years, since we last saw each other?"

Agro grinned, his blue eyes looked at the tech marine in the corner. "I believe so. Isn't that Right Tech Marine?"
The Techmarine nodded silently as though a robot.

Aegeus rolled his eyes, his thoughts were clear on his face of the tech marine which was basically "I hate tech marines."

Agro punched Aegeus in the shoulder as he knew what Aegeus thought. Agro spoke hardy, "We need the tech marine for this mission, and the 4th is coming with us."

Aegeus turned his head slightly obscure, wondering what the mission was. He spoke with rasp in his voice. "What mission? Are we going on a crusade?"

The Tech Marine finnaly spoke. "Merianis, a Desert planet at least 150 parsics from here, apparently a Ork infestation has been found, it seems to be that the outpost that was set up by the Imperium we have lost contact with. We and two other chapters are being called to handle it."

Aegeus looked at his captain and nodded. "Should I tell the Pilots to leave for Merianis Captain Agro?"
Agro nodded his head to Aegeus. The Tech Marine bowed and left the Observation deck while Aegeus followed him out the door.

Agro pondered his chin. "Merianis? I haven't been there for 50 years. What could of possibely happened?" he spoke out loud with his eyes still glaring out the observation deck.

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Alrighty. This is actually going too be an update for my forces. I will be gaining a few marines from some of my friends. And I will be starting a Emperor's Shields Force.
Captain Agro is relatively new. Though I will have to tell Tony that I have made at least 50 named Emperor's Shields. But No Libarians will be present from the Emperors Shields.
He Is basically named after of course the Agronaunts from the Tale of the golden Sheep. Aegeus as many of you know is the wise man from the Medea story and many other names will come up. But many of the characters will appear.

Good stuff Asherian. You're developing a good atmosphere and it will get better and better the more you practice it. Keep it up!

Thanks alter. I will work more on it. This is my revised version. The old version is really really bad. If people can chip in sometime to help me with this that would be great.

Yep, this is great work. Gives me an idea of what kinda stuff i'd need to come up with to do my own!

Mukkin'About wrote:Yep, this is great work. Gives me an idea of what kinda stuff i'd need to come up with to do my own!

I am actually going to do a little story. Of Tyrion and Cato Scarius who met each other and basically had a huge fight over an insult Cato said about Tyrion's beloved homeplanet.

Asherian Command wrote:

Mukkin'About wrote:Yep, this is great work. Gives me an idea of what kinda stuff i'd need to come up with to do my own!

I am actually going to do a little story. Of Tyrion and Cato Scarius who met each other and basically had a huge fight over an insult Cato said about Tyrion's beloved homeplanet.

Can i just say that's a bad idea?