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ineptus astartes wrote:Darko is correct, we will have to make out posts cinematic, i will try listening to SW music while I write.

As I do believe either myself or that intelligent chap Nuke posted in the discussion thread awhile back, if we posted videos that are related to the scene in question then it would help set the mood. Music also.

Yeah...

I do my posts WELL.

*Glances at Delta Squad*

A point you have, Master Kasrkai.

I believe my posts have been off a fine standard, but you must realise some may not be able to write large paragraphs completely correct in a small amount off time.

yea, that is fine blood, just make the big fights long

Darkvoidof40k wrote:

ineptus astartes wrote:Darko is correct, we will have to make out posts cinematic, i will try listening to SW music while I write.

As I do believe either myself or that intelligent chap Nuke posted in the discussion thread awhile back, if we posted videos that are related to the scene in question then it would help set the mood. Music also.

It doesn't even have to be star wars stuff, I listen to music regularly while writing and I'm not saying that I write horribly without it but it helps...

blood reaper wrote:I believe my posts have been off a fine standard, but you must realise some may not be able to write large paragraphs completely correct in a small amount off time.

I am aware, nor was I picking certain individuals out.

If you know your writing is of a high standard amongst us Dakkanauts, then you also know I wasn't talking about you. Even so, you should also keep in mind what I said for the future.

I believe I am but I am just mentioning that while some members can write large paragraphs in only a short amount of time others can't at the same speed so fights require both players to reply to each other.

I actually have no idea of my dakka writing standards.

I try to do long posts at least, and I try for good punctuation/spelling.

"Clones, blast them!"
"Roger, Roger"
"Hey, look B1s I love these guys!"
"Why don't you run up and give them a kiss then, Scorch?"
"Don't be disgusting Sev" Scorch replied.
"Less talking more shooting you two" Fixer butted in making sure it went no further. The clones replied with a volley of fire from their DC-17s the flimsy B1s dropped like flies to the commandos accurate fire. The sound of rolling echoed down the corridor over the sound of the gunfire.
"Why does Vau always have to go and spoil it?" Scorch en-quired.
Typical Vau always making them think they had the upper hand before bringing in the heavies, it made him think that Vau probably didn't know the meaning of easy. The droidikas came into view, three of them, they deployed and put there shields up, that wasn't good.
"Well that just makes my day. Can this situation get any worse?" Scorch said sarcastically.
A new sound filled the corridor, the sound of something heavy hitting of metal.
"You just had to open your big mouth didn't you Scorch" Sev accused Scorch
"OK I was wrong it can get worse."
An ADSD came in view at the end of the corridor, it slowly advanced towards their position. A red light emanated from its front eye searching for targets it rested on the Delta's cover it had found them. Boss new what came next.
"Get down Deltas!"
A missile streaked out from the ADSD rocket launcher towards their position. A sudden surge of heat engulfed the delta as it exploded.
"Everyone, all right?" Boss en-quired. Affirmative came from the Delta's, the cover had saved them but they couldn't do that many more times. He looked for a way out there wasn't any they would get cut down if they tried to run. Unless...
"Scorch, see if you can give that thing one of your special presents eh?"

im back...and you locked the other thread anyways...so...what would you rate my post oh cat god of *insert several random things*?

lord commissar klimino wrote:im back...and you locked the other thread anyways...so...what would you rate my post oh cat god of *insert several random things*?

None of us locked the other thread - I have no idea where you came up with that misconception.

< Once again we'll refer you to the forum rules>

Now behave. the two of you are being evented traveling to Kamino together, I want no bickering

ineptus astartes wrote:Now behave. the two of you are being evented traveling to Kamino together, I want no bickering

I'll write something up later.

Throw me something to work with and we'll see what comes out the other end.

Oh I will, I will...haha...hahaha...bwhahahahahhahahahahaha!!!!

(this event is nice and long as long as I do not feel I am robbing you of RP ammo)

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(He also misspelled "This" in a PM he sent to me.)

Plo Koon sat in his chamber silently, a small temperature meter a foot in front of him. The chamber was completely spartan, save for the small pad he sat upon, shins down knees in front. The air was frigidly cold, though it did not trouble the Kel'dor much. He was completely in tune with The Force now, his mind reaching out gently, as he felt the life all around him. From the padawans training far below, to the simple dust mites in his mat. Life was everywhere, and the force flowed through each and every one. He was a fine warrior, Plo Koon. A master of lightsaber combat and force alike. His extensive knowledge of physics served to aid him in his calling on The Force, allowing him to do things most Jedi would have thought beyond them. Such as what he was doing now. He brought his mind back, as gently as he let it roam, and felt the air again. Still frigid and still.

He began to focus now. He reached out with The Force into the air around him. Slowly at first, then gradually faster, the particles in the air began to move, and thus, heat up. The air immediately around him began to swirl softly, and the warmth of The Force. He opened his eyes behind his visor and looked to the meter. Ten degrees. Twenty. Forty. Sixty.

Then he stopped. The air was starting to stabilize, nearing perfect room temperature. He stood up, as he remembered that he was going to the Council Chambers early, as he sought some council with Master Yoda. He opened his door, and began to head to the chambers, going down multiple dura-steel halls and windows before arriving at the mag-lift. As he input the floor of the chambers, he noted Master Windu approaching. He had his hand up, calling out to Plo Koon

"Hold that if you could, Plo Koon."

Due to the judgement of the mods, Ineptus, Dark, and LCK have been banned until Thursday, that is all, carry on.

Wow. Why?
Bloody mods locking my quick reply....it is HORRIBLE!

The off-topic thread has been un-blocked, we can do OOC over there again, just try not to get it blocked again.

"Oh yer" Said Scorch
"Delta give him some cover fire!" boss ordered
Scorch ran up to the droid and jumped on its back. The A-DSD placed it shielded legs infront of its eye to stop all the blaster fire it was taking.

"Hey boss you might want to take cover." Said Scorch
The rest of delta ran behind crates and piles of damaged droids. Scorch shoved a thermal detonator in the droids missile-launcher, shoved plasma grenade down its cannon barrel and place a ion grenade on its back. Scorch leaped off its back and runs to cover as the grenades explode Scorch leaped behind a crate. The ion blast destroyed all the droids nearby.

"Well done Scorch excellent work." Said Boss smiling under his helmet.
"You hear that, Sev? Someone thinks I'm excellent." Replied Scorch.
"Well...at least that makes two of you." Sev Said

Yes it is become annoying that everyone is getting banned because of constant Off-topic conversations that make me want to leave, this is a great idea for a RPG and I want to take part in it.

In the Deep black of space hung a blue sphere. Storms played across it, and flashes of lighting could be seen from orbit. A pair of Aethersprite fighters dropped out of hyperspace fairly close to it.
Obi-wan voiced over the comlink to Nadhar Vebb. “There it is, the Navicomputer says this planet is known as Kamino and it looks like our elusive assassin is here, the beacon is directing us to a small concentration of raised cities and-Damn.”
Nadhar replied. “What is it Master Kenobi?”
Obi-Wan checked his readings again, “He must have of found our beacon, it’s no longer transmitting.”
As they entered the atmosphere, the two Jedi angled their fighters to a landing pad on the south end of the citie. with the whining of repulsorlifts, and the running lights illuminateg a rain-slick platform, long yellow bars of lights were arrayed in a circle around the platform, allowing pilots to see their landing zones. A hissing of hydraulics was barley audible over the rain as the fighters opened their cockpits at the same time.
“Nadhar!” shouted Obi-Wan over the pounding rain. “stay in that cockpit for now! I will contact you if need be!”
Nadhar looked miffed at this, but nodded, “As you wish master Kenobi” he said, and returned to his cockpit

When obi-Wan had entered the white halls, he saw a tall pale-skinned alien looking at him.
“Master Jedi,” she said in an airy, almost ethereal voice. “The Prime minister is expecting you.”
Obi-Wan asked, “I’m expected?”
“Of course,” The Kaminoan replied. “After all these years, we were beginning to think you weren’t coming.”
“Well, here I am” said Obi-Wan, winging it.
After a few hundred feet o walking, they arrived at a room with ladle-like chairs connected to the ceiling, on one of these sat what appeared to be a male of the species, with a small crest on his head.
“May I present, Lama Su” said the female, “Prime Minister of Kamino”
Lama Su stood up. “Greetings Master Jedi, You will be pleased to hear that two-hundred-thousand units are ready, with a million more well on the way.”
“That’s…good news,” said Obi-Wan, taking this in stride.
The Prime Minister nodded his head. “Please tell your master, Syfo-Dias, that his order will be met On Time.”
Obi-Wan was confused slightly by this, “Excuse me, master…?”
The alien looked puzzled. “Jedi Master Syfo-Dias is still a leading member of the Jedi Council, is he not?”
“Master Syfo-Dias was Killed, almost ten years ago.” Said Obi-Wan.
Lama Su looked slightly sad, “Oh, I’m So sorry to hear that.”
“That’s-that’s all right.” Said Obi-Wan.
“But he would be proud of the army we’ve created for him.” Said the Prime Minister, pride evident on his face.
“An army?” asked Kenobi.
The prime minister stood up. “A clone army, and I must say, one of the finest we’ve ever created.”
This information slightly disturbed the jedi, but he decided to not let it show. “Tell me, when my master first contacted you, did he say who this army was for?”
The Prime minister nodded. “Of course he did, this army is for the Republic, but you must be anxious to see the units for yourself.”
Obi-Wan smiled, “That’s why I’m here.” He said.

_______________Clone residence area overwalk: Tipoca city: Kamino___________
“As you can see,” said the Prime Minister as they walked over the mess Hall. “Clones are capable of free thought, you will find them immensely superior to droids in that respect. We take great pride in out combat education and training exercises.” This group was created only five years ago.” He said, pointing to a group of what appeared to be ten year olds at Flash-Training consoles.
“You mentioned growth acceleration.” Said Obi-Wan, fascinated by the high level of science used for this.
“Oh yes.” Said Lama Su happily. “Otherwise it would take a mature clone a lifetime to grow. Now we can do it in half the time.”
“You also mentioned genetic reconstruction?” said ObiWan, as a group of troopers conducted a CQC training exercise.
“Yes, they were modified to be far less independent than the original host, as well as totally obedient, taking any order without question.” Replied Lama Su, pointing to the growth vats.
“Who was the original host by the way?” asked Obi-Wan.
Lama Su glanced at him while opening the next doorway. A bounty hunter by the name of Jango Fett.”
Obi-Wan listened intently, a bounty hunter? He thought, well well well. “And where is this Jango Fett now? “ he asked.
“Oh we keep him here, apart from his pay, which is considerable, Fett demanded only one thing. An unaltered clone for himself, curious isn’t it?”
“Unaltered?” asked Obi-Wan, feeling more than a little silly at asking all of these questions.
“Pure genetic replication, no tampering with the structure to make it more docile, and no growth acceleration.”
The Jedi rubbed his chin thoughtfully. “I would very much like to meet this bounty hunter.” He said.
Taun We said, “I would be Very happy to arrange it for you.”
(insert clones being all marshal scene/w/ accompanying music)
_____________Tipoca City: residences; Jango’s residence_________________

Taun We depressed a button on the keypad and the door was opened by a boy of possibly 12.
Taun We asked, “Boba, is your father here?”
“Yup.” was the simple reply.
“May we see him?” asked the Kaminoan
“Sure.” Said Boba. “Dad! Taun We is here!” he shouted and opened the door further.
Obi-Wan entered the apartment and stood in front of a large window, depicting kamino’s rainy skies.
A man walked in, he was still fairly young, but not early, possibly thirty or forty years old.
“Jango, said Taun We, welcome back, was your trip productive?”
Jango nodded and adjusted his sleeves slightly. “Fairly.” He said.
“This is Jedi Master Obi-Wan Kenobi, he has come to check on our progress.” Said Taun We, in her usual ethereal voice.
“Your clones are very impressive, you must be very proud.” Said Obi-Wan, not breaking eye contact with the bounty hunter.
“They’ll do their job.” Said Jango, not implying anything.
“I look forward to seeing them in action.” Said Obi-Wan, as the conversation grew more and more icy.
“I’m just a simple man trying to make my way in the galaxy.” He said, staring right back.
Obi-Wan smirked. “Ever make your way as far into the core as Couruscant?” He asked.
The bounty hunter took a step forward until his face was a mere foot away from Kenobi’s “Once or twice” he said.
“Interesting, now if you excuse me, I must return to my ship.”

Jango nodded, saying to his ‘son’, “Eh, Boba, roodet soheet,” in what seemed to Obi-Wan to be Mando’a “Always a pleasure to meet a Jedi.”


After Obi-Wan had left, he turned to Boba. “What’s wrong dad?” asked Boba. Jango simply said, “Pack your things, we’re leaving, and tell Zam to meet us on the platform”

_____________Kamino:Tipoca City: Jedi Landing Platform____________
nadhar was fiddling around with his holonet port and researched a few details about water worlds when his comlink squawked. “Vebb here.” He said, thumbing it. Obi-Wan’s voice came through. “Tell the Jedi counsel that I have made contact with the Prime Minister of Kamino. They are using a bounty hunter named Jango fett to create a clone army for the republic, I will attempt to capture this Bounty Hunter and bring him to couruscant for questioning. I believe he is behind the plot against the Senator, that is all.” Nadhar answered. “Yes Master Kenobi” and fed it through the Holonet.
______________Kamino: Tipoca City: Slave I landing pad_______________
(and the dice roll! One dice for each shot, In fact every single thing they do is regulated to them, even moving, tripping, choosing weapons and CQC.)
Obi-Wan charged out onto the landing pad of Jango Fett’s, his lightsaber already leaping to his hand, the armored bounty hunter stood up from where he was loading several crates, drew a pair of WESTAR blaster pistols and fired off four shots, each of which was deflected, leaping up, the bounty hunter attempted to back off, but tripped over a crate he had been loading onto his Starship. Obi-Wan attempted to grab the man, but had his hands kicked out of the way, along with his lightsaber. Obi-Wan used the momentum to kick Jango under the helmet’s chin and sending Jango flying. The Hunter smashed into a pillar and groped for his pistols, but they were not there, instead, they were lying about ten feet away.
Bringing up the left hand, which contained a miniaturized Toxic Dart launcher Jango fired. Barely managing to evade it, Obi-Wan dived forward, and managed to clunk his head on the ground. Jango regained his footing and armed his flamethrower, sending a billowing cloud of napalm after the Jedi, who in an expert move, launched himself forward, and reaching out a hand, his lightsaber flew towards him.
Thinking quickly, jango pivoted and kicked the Jedi in the stomach, the lightsaber then flew over the doubled up Knight, and clean off of the platform. Triggering his Jetpack, Jango took off, and grabbed the Jedi while doing so, the Jetpacks surged to full power, and he carried the dazed Knight over the platform and dropped him.
Obi-Wan flailed vainly, attempting to grasp anything, his hands met the hunter’s foot, and he grabbed that. “What the?” was Jango’s response, he attempted to shake the knight off, but obi ran reached up and yanked one of the jetpack’s straps off, the jetpack then carried the combatants to the landing platform before slamming into the deck, out of fuel.
Jango had been flung into a stack of crates , and was attempting to disentangle himself, Obi-Wan however, was picking up one of the mandalorian’s fallen blasters and aiming it at the hunter “I am taking you back to courascant, drop your weapons” said Obi-Wan
With a bright flash, and the characteristic sound of a KYD-21 blaster pistol firing, Obi-Wan dropped to the floor as the stun round hit his ribs.
“Really Jango?” asked Zam wessel walking down from the ramp of Slave I
“Stow him in the prisoner bay.” Said Jango, standing up. “Tell Boba to get the ship ready for launch.”
Nadhar Vebb hurried down the hallways, he had attempted to contact master Kenobi several times, but no one had picked up. So the Mon Calamari was headed to the landing pad of this ‘Jango Fett’ stepping out into the rain, he saw two figures carry what appeared to be an unconscious Kenobi onboard, as the ship lifted off. “Kriff!” he shouted. Charging forward, he flung a homing beacon aimed at the mandalorian’s hull., where it stuck fast. Hurrying back to his ship, he knew that he should contact the counsel ,but he also knew that saving master Kenobi was the first priority.

vahdar jumped into his ship and launched off,following just out side of the bounty hunters radar. hitting some buttons,vebb contacted the jedi council. "obi-wan has been captured by a bounty hunter named jango fett,the one these clones are based on. i have set a tracker on him and am in purs-whoa! asteroid field,this cant be good.er anyways,we believe he is the assassin. out" hanging up before they could call him off,vebb entered the field on full alert. "lets do this.you wanna play,ill play."

I think im going to have to pull out of this RP.I know nothing truely about sev, my starwars knowledge is iffy, the dice system kind of makes it feel...awkard, and I merely lack time for multiple RPs.
TWH

OOC: Seems like the battle of Geonosis is coming up. Better finish this live training then.
BIC:

"Alright Sev there's our target. The B1 droid commander, the one with yellow markings. You see him" Boss said pointing to the target.
"Yer, I see him" Sev replied.
The Delta's were positioned on a walkway, they had managed to infiltrate the enemies base with being spotted, keeping a low profile and sticking to the shadows they had got to the walkway were Sev was preparing to take out the commander. Using the sniper attachment of the DC-17 assault rifle Sev lined the cross-hairs with the droids head. Pffft! It was done the droid stood still for several seconds its head laying 10ft away from its body. The body swayed then fell to the floor.
"Well done Delta's now get to the extraction point" Vau's voice came over the com-link.
"Alright Delta you heard him, lets go." Boss ordered the squad.
"Up there, there they are blast them"
"Er, I think they have found us Boss" Scorch said.
"Well, done Captain Obvious" Sev said sarcastically.
"I aim to please" Scorch replied.
Boss groaned although they had completed there objectives this still wasn't going to be easy especially with every droid in the sector on there tail. It isn't over, yet.

(Agreed)
(IC)
CC-2224 moved with his retinue towards the landing zones. They had been called to the planet Geonosis where they would engage the CIS. Cody was responsible for this sector's departure from the landing zones and over 15000 clones were leaving the planet of Kamino. About 1000 of them in his sector. His retinue made sure everything was running smoothly while the commander consulted a star map. Geonosis was not far from Kamino but they would be sure to encounter confederacy ships when they got closer to the planet.

They had the element of surprise. The confederates had no idea of the army being deployed against them, this meant the Cody could bring most of the forces under his command down to the planet within a couple of short minutes. Descend ships would be used. Namely LAAT gunships, he encoded his final commands into the helmet network and boarded the ship that his sector was heading to. The massive cruiser had been named "Kaminoans fury" and it was a good name at that.

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