Switch Theme:

WIP marine  [RSS] Share on facebook Share on Twitter Submit to Reddit
»
Author Message
Advert


Forum adverts like this one are shown to any user who is not logged in. Join us by filling out a tiny 3 field form and you will get your own, free, dakka user account which gives a good range of benefits to you:
  • No adverts like this in the forums anymore.
  • Times and dates in your local timezone.
  • Full tracking of what you have read so you can skip to your first unread post, easily see what has changed since you last logged in, and easily see what is new at a glance.
  • Email notifications for threads you want to watch closely.
  • Being a part of the oldest wargaming community on the net.
If you are already a member then feel free to login now.




Made in gb
Fresh-Faced New User




Hey all! I'm new to these forums, so please be gentle..

I've been out of the hobby for a couple of years, and this is my first mini for about 18 months.

Pics:










I need a few suggestions in a couple of areas, in particular colour scheme. I'm stuck for a secondary colour for the shoulder pad trim, elbow pads and bolter casing.

General c&c also very much welcome and needed

Thank you
   
Made in gb
Resourceful Gutterscum




Quite cool, the eyes need, well eyes, but maybe this kind of marine dosen't need them, my SM knowlage is very, very bad.

 
   
Made in gb
Fresh-Faced New User




Thanks

The eyes I deliberately left out. Left black I find the eyes much more sinister and a lot more (for want of a better word) dark. Irl the empty sockets don't look so obvious

That said, though I sculpted the head meself (of which I am very proud ^-^) eyes might have been stretching my skillz a bit far. A potential commander I'm working on will feature an attempt at eyes
   
Made in de
Rampaging Carnifex






Franconia

A bit more black parts and you got some serious Malal troops. My personal wish would be a split colour scheme. But this scary guy screams for dark colours. And a split scheme would not fit that. He looks like a expected a Night Lord should look like (great job on the head). So maybe midnight blue with a cool new chapter symbol. Grey Death is pretty good on that stuff.

I know when it is closing time. - Rascal Mod

"Some people measure common sense with a ruler others with a potato."- Making Money Terry Pratchett
"what's with all the hate go paint something you lazy bastards" - NAVARRO
"You don't need pants for the victory dance." -BAWTRM
 
   
Made in gb
Fresh-Faced New User




I did a little googling, and I like the idea of Malal troops do you have any links to any other malal projects? I'd like to have a look at what it would entail before I commit this veteran to the dark powers..

The fluff behind this chapter is very WIP, they are my version of Iron Knights:

The chapter appeared from the warp to the aid of a stricken Ultramarines vessel and fought off a chaos warband. They themselves had no understanding of how they came to be there, and once Inquisitor Battalion arrived - answering the Ultras distress call - he denounced them as heretics, despite the objections of the Ultras, and they had to flee, being badly damaged themselves.

Afterwards, the Iron Knights eked out an existance outside of Imperial law - lightning fast surgical strikes against small enemy targets (their presence has been noted in such campaigns as the Armageddon war, making seemingly insignificant, and yet with hindsight, critical attacks against smaller enemy support forces and minor reserves). They depend upon the kindness of sympathetic rescue-es for ammunition and occasional respite from Inquisitorial forces, though such is their desperation for such munitions that, tragically, small Imperial supply convoys are just as likely to come under attack from the knights themselves, as they are to be rescued from xenos and heretic attack by the Knights. This, coupled with the necessity that potential recruits must be cruelly abducted from their homeworlds, as well as Inquisitorial propaganda regarding the chapter means that the popular opinion of the chapter is, indeed, one of heresy, fear and suspicion.

The chapters pre-history ends with a cataclysmic battle for Morgue IV. A thousand armies congealed against the Imperium under the banner of Mors the Child. Imperial Guard, Inquisition and Adeptus Astartes forces descended upon the system in retaliation for Mors' incursion into the Imperial realm. The Iron Knights watched but could not join battle, for the risk of being set upon by would-be-friend and foe alike. Finally, as wars of attrition must, the tide gradually turned, and Mors prepared for a last stand at the capital and chief spaceport of the planet, Krux. The Iron Knights seized the opportunity and joined the fight, almost the entirety of the chapter, small though their numbers were, deep striking at the Ultra Marine vanguard of the Imperial assault, setting upon Mors and his personal retinue.

Conscious the promise of victory was ebbing ever further away, Mors retreated to his ship, the Mutiny, and prepared for a warp jump. Though fully aware of the fate their battle brothers - and chapter master - would be doomed to should they leave, the Iron Knights fleet pursued Mors into the warp, under heavy fire from the Mutiny as it did so. Neither hind nor hair has been seen of either force since.

Inquisitor Battalion, one of the Inquisitors present upon Morgue IV, at once denounced the Iron Knights. Not a word was uttered by the white-clad warriors as the Ordo-Hereticus paraded their 'basphemys' before the survivors of the battle, and arranged a hasty trial and execution of all Iron Knights on the planet. So rapid was the trial amid the confusion of the aftermath the Ultramarines, as well as the chapters ever-increasing number of supporters and sympathizers could not prevent it, yet they did appeal.

An Inquisitorial tribunal was called for, and Battalion was tried for crimes against the Emperor and a wavering faith, and was found wanting.


In a nutshell, the chapter knowingly sacrificed themselves for the Imperium, and were wiped out in the process. Their lifestyle and doctrines made necessary by the suspicion in which they were held made for a very dour, grim chapter, who were well aware of their ultimate calling. The battle barge in pursuit of Mors took severe damage during its warp jump and ended up several hundred years in the past, on top of a beleaguered ultramarines patrol; the last Iron Knights becoming the first quite Event Horizon, but I like it.

There are two chapters - one, the mercenary warband-esque veterans, never more than a few hundred in strength, fleet based, semi-piratical, dour, brooding and cold, with few true loyalties. The second, the memorial chapter established by the Ultras on Morgue IV with a valiant, pure, spartan-esque heretige to honour. I'm thinking perhaps Battalion was onto something denouncing the Iron Knights, but the silent sacrifice of the Knights fooled their sympathisers regarding some dark and sinister motives deep within the Chapter hierarchy.... >_>

The first chapter I can easily see being a quiet, sly Malal warband cheers for the idea
   
 
Forum Index » Painting & Modeling
Go to: