I enjoy writing little stories for characters and the likes. This is the fluff for two dudes im entering in a competition. A fluffy backstory is recommended to make so i made one. Post your thoughts and any mistakes i've made, but other than that, just enjoy it.
"C'mon Klayton! These orky scumbags aren't going to kill themselves!" Serj taunted. "My grandma could probly kill these ugly bastards better than you can, and she's dead!" Serj grinned as another mass of green muscle was cut down by his power axe.
"Thats the best you can come up with? Your more pitiful than a bloody gretchin." A small yelp of anger told Klayton a nearby gretchin had heard his insult. "You better watch out Serj, I can smell one nearby, but only just, your stench outdoes theres by alot"
A small group of orks made their way through the dense undergrowth of the forest towards the space wolves.
"We are Orkz! We are made for fightin, AND winnin! Die humies!" The two Grey Hunters laughed at the small brained Ork as they unloaded round after round into him and his companions.
"Well you aren't doing a good job are you now" Klayton said stepping over the lifeless green heap on the ground.
"Where do you think the others are?" Serj asked as he stomped on a half dead orks head
"Dunno, most likely behind us taking out the girly orks that have made their way around us." Klayton put a round through a small gretchins head with his bolter.
"That wouldn't surprise me the slightest" Serj said, grinning.
+Serj, Klayton, be on the lookout, scouts confirm a squad of Nobz coming in your direction, they are weilding power claws and big choppers, they're the target of this operation, but you will need help, fall back immediately+
+This is Serj, there is no way in hell we are falling back, you get here quicker, we'll hold them back until Harris can get his missile launcher ready+
+Negative Serj, you and Klayton are to fall back immediately, if you don't, Russ help you I'll kill you myself+
+Nice threat Kage, but honestly sir, you know where we are coming from, Serj and I are more than capable to take these bastards out+
+Well enjoy what's left of your life Klayton. Be sure to pray to Russ and the All Father first+
+Affirmative Brother Kage, see you on the other side+
The two Grey Hunters hid just at the opening of the bottle neck awaiting their prey. Serj breathed in, they were downwind from the Nobz so he could smell them perfectly, they were at the other end of the bottle neck. He glanced across at Klayton and could see he knew where they were aswell.
"They've just entered the bottleneck" Klayton told Serj over the comm-net. "You ready?"
"Hell yeah" He placed his finger on the switch that activated his power axe. "Let's use the old 'throw the rock' trick to put them off guard."
Klayton nodded, holstered his bolter, picked up a rock off the ground and lobbed it around the corner. It landed just behind the orks and they turned around. Klayton and Serj activated their axes and ran into the bottleneck firing their bolters at their xeno enemies. In an instant the ten nobz were reduced to six due to the bolter fire, and moments after that the two grey hunters were amongst them striking about wildly. One of the nobz struck back at Klayton with his power claw and as the strikes met the weapons shattered. Klayton's axe whirred and buzzed for a moment before shutting down and the power claw fell apart. The nob knocked klayton to the ground, took his knife from his belt and lifted it into the air. Klayton swung his bolter to bear, firing off as he did but the nob knocked Klayton's bolter off to the side with his knife and lifted his knife once more. As he swang down Klayton kicked the nob. The nob's knife connected with Klaytons knee pad and Klayton's foot connected with the nob's jaw, shattering it. Klayton grabbed his bolter back and stood up again, shooting round after round into the ork's thick skull.
Serj cleaved through the orks arm and the power claw fell to the ground, and with a diagonal swing finished the nob off. He grinned momentarily until the Nob leader started to shoot at Serj. One round clipped his right shin and another one grazed the top of his left shoulder pad throwing him off balance. The leader charged towards Serj and swung at him with his big chopper. Serj parried the blow but it still took a small chunk out of his left shoulder pad. As Serj parried the next couple of blows his axe whirred and buzzed. Serj shot at the leader and got him in the eye, he followed up with a blow to the leader's wrist with his axe, knocking the big chopper out of his hand. As he went for the final blow the nob leader started shooting at him. One shot hit Serj's axe and another hit his bolter, rendering them both useless. Serj dropped both his weapons and as he stooped down to pick up the nob's big chopper a shot got him on the top of his right shoulder pad. He backhanded the nob in the jaw, knocking off his iron gob and chopped off the hand that was holding the pistol. The ork stared down at the stumps where his hands were and as he looked back up his head was taken clean off by Serj. Just to his left Klayton was trading blows with the last nob, they both had standard knives so Serj ducked down, grabbed the knife off another dead nob's belt and tossed it to him. Klayton grabbed the other knife and drove it into the bottom of the ork's head before cutting the top of his skull off with the one he already had. The last nob stumbled back and Klayton took the knife from the his head.
Serj stuck a spikey shoulder pad from one of the orks on his left shoulder pad to cover a large hole and put the leader's iron gob on his right shoulder pad before picking up the ork's head. Klayton stabbed an ork head onto a pike and the two grey hunters held their weapons high in the air and let off howls of triumph.
"So when do we get our tank?"
We've already got it, it has been with us the whole time"
. great work, got any more?
You did a great job. Though, as PanzerSmurf said, it felt a little toofast. But that is a style, so I don't see it being of any major matter to look at. Again well done.