Ok, let's start at the top.
blarg_roar wrote:HQ:
Company Master+ Power sword (115
You are better off with a Chaplain for 120 points. Even better if you can give him a Jump Pack.
Elites:
Ven. Dreadnought (autocnon, mlti-mlta, asslt cnon, not sure) (145
Give him the assault cannon. This actually allows him to hunt light tanks or kill infantry.
Troops:
Tactical Squad+ 5 marines+ Plasma Cannon+ flamer (185
w/ Razorback (50
Tactical Squad+ Plasma gun (105
w/ Razorback (50
The first squad is illegal. You have to have 10 marines to take a heavy. In both cases, take 5 dudes with a Plasma Gun and a Razorback with Heavy Bolters. They come out at 155 each.
Fast Attack:
Atk Squad+ 3 bikes+ atk bike w/ hvy bltr (220
This whole squad is out of place. Your bikes will just die and an Attack bike is best equipped with a Multi-Melta as it has the speed to get within 12" for max effect. I'd suggest dropping the whole thing for a
Dev squad with Missile Launchers or Lascannons.
Heavy Support:
Predator+ lascannon+ hvy bltr sponsons (130
This should be a Pred Destructor. It's 95 points and can kill both infantry and
A lot of your points seem off to me. Let me take a stab at a 1,000 point list using some of the above:
Chaplain - 145
- Jump Pack, Melta Bombs
1- Dreadnought - 145
- Assault Cannon, Venerable
5 - Tactical Squad - 105
- Plasma gun
1- Razorback - 50
-
TL Heavy Bolter
5 - Tactical Squad - 105
- Plasma Gun
1 - Razorback - 50
-
TL Heavy Bolter
5 - Tactical Squad - 105
- Plasma Gun
1 - Razorback - 50
-
TL Heavy Bolter
5 - Devastator Squad - 150
- 3 x Missile Launcher
1 - Predator Destructor - 95
- Autocannon, 2 x Heavy Bolters
The biggest weakness of the above list is it doesn't really have much that can deal with
AV 14. However, unless you play
IG regularly I wouldn't expect to see much
AV 14 in 1,000 points.
Hope that helps.
Ozymandias, King of Kings