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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/11 22:47:31
Subject: JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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Horrific Hive Tyrant
London (work) / Pompey (live, from time to time)
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ok, after ages of thinking on a new army i decided ork, but, as every army i have collected i buy a single model 1st and see what it is like to paint, i wont collect an army if i hate painting them.
Decided to try the new warboss from AoBR, C&C needed please.
As for the random urban camo, i decided to try something ive never done before, so i hope that turned out alright.
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Suffused with the dying memories of Sanguinus, the warriors of the Death Company seek only one thing: death in battle fighting against the enemies of the Emperor. |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/11 23:10:46
Subject: JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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Horrific Hive Tyrant
London (work) / Pompey (live, from time to time)
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i need some input
need to get an army painted by the 14th for GD lol.
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Suffused with the dying memories of Sanguinus, the warriors of the Death Company seek only one thing: death in battle fighting against the enemies of the Emperor. |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/11 23:17:00
Subject: Re:JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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Sneaky Kommando
Texas
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Looks nice, I think the face-plate belt buckle thing needs an ink wash or something to give more depth. It's the center of the model and is fairly prominent so you want it standout a little. The skin depth you have is nice and you've got a good mix of colors between the red, yellow and the grey camo pants.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/11 23:19:50
Subject: JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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Horrific Hive Tyrant
London (work) / Pompey (live, from time to time)
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i was thinking its a bit plain, might try a watered down scab red wash, might bring it out more.
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Suffused with the dying memories of Sanguinus, the warriors of the Death Company seek only one thing: death in battle fighting against the enemies of the Emperor. |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/11 23:20:29
Subject: Re:JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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[ADMIN]
Decrepit Dakkanaut
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My personal opinion is that it looks pretty good, but that too much is happening at once with too many colours being used. Take a few colours out of the scheme and it might look a bit better. Make the blue cable darker and a different colour so it doesnt stand out (perhaps just black even), make the loin cloth darker to roughly match the leather on the back, and tone down the yellow/orange hair a bit too (perhaps make it red to match the rest of the model).
That should cut down on the distractions anyway. It has a very 2nd edition blood-axe commando feel to it at the moment which I like.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/11 23:26:54
Subject: JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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Horrific Hive Tyrant
London (work) / Pompey (live, from time to time)
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1st attempt at a proper ork, only ever painte small bits, no real ammount of skin.
and i just like the look of urban camo, so i figured i'd give it a go.
need to darken the cable, storm blue should work well.
a few washes / red highlights will sort out the hair.
the tabard i can just layer darker, so thats no real problem.
that was mainly a test piece, but all in all i have 3 days to paint a 2k point ork army, and build it of course -_-
shouldnt leave these things to the last minute.
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Suffused with the dying memories of Sanguinus, the warriors of the Death Company seek only one thing: death in battle fighting against the enemies of the Emperor. |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/11 23:49:11
Subject: JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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Sure Space Wolves Land Raider Pilot
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Well.....good luck with the army, the scheme looks pretty tight, but I agree with lego about the hair.
Nice going on the camo....it is easy to do, yet hard to do well.
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Cry Fenris, and let slip the Wolves of Russ!
-Erik Shadowfang
Space Wolves (Shadowfang's Great Company)
Tau (Aun'burn sept)
Dark Elves
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/12 00:35:21
Subject: JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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Horrific Hive Tyrant
London (work) / Pompey (live, from time to time)
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ok, hair is now red gore, highlighted with blood red and megenta and red ink washes
ill put some morepics up tomorrow now the hair has been changed.
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Suffused with the dying memories of Sanguinus, the warriors of the Death Company seek only one thing: death in battle fighting against the enemies of the Emperor. |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/12 02:49:45
Subject: JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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[DCM]
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Quick ways to improve it.
You've heavily inked/washed the model.
For the skin go back and add a highlight, its too uniform ATM due to the thickness of the wash, needs some shazaam.
The bindings on the pistol grips- rehighlight them again. I assume the wash was to add shading to the recessed between the bindings.
Pants are fine
Red metal is fine.
Maybe a thin highlight/edge of chainmail on the plain metal to 'catch the light'.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/12 04:26:56
Subject: JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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Lead-Footed Trukkboy Driver
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Nice job, especially on the face.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/12 07:05:50
Subject: JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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Longtime Dakkanaut
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I like the urban camo scheme - presuming you're going for a DeffSkull or Blood Axe theme
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/12 17:26:18
Subject: Re:JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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Cackling Chaos Conscript
Victoria,Australia
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love it
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/12 17:28:31
Subject: JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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Stealthy Dark Angels Scout with Shotgun
VA, USA
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Camo looks great!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/12 18:19:33
Subject: JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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Horrific Hive Tyrant
London (work) / Pompey (live, from time to time)
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i know gonads, just needs some last minute things done.
skin has no ink atall.
just dark angles green, then additional highlights of DA green / scorpion green.
hair is changed, just need to sort out the grips.
cant do the metal yet, just checked and my mithril silver is dry as a bone, havent used it in ages.
not doing a basic ork army, just like urban camo
thanks for C&C
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Suffused with the dying memories of Sanguinus, the warriors of the Death Company seek only one thing: death in battle fighting against the enemies of the Emperor. |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/14 21:42:27
Subject: Re:JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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Deadshot Weapon Moderati
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pff awful XD
nah i like it specially that camo!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/15 17:39:58
Subject: JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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Horrific Hive Tyrant
London (work) / Pompey (live, from time to time)
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lol, dont make our war any bigger sphynx
how about i get this army done, you get your blind marines done, then have a little fight eh?
and ill post the updated pics a bit latee once cam is charged.
re-done the hair red, cleaned up the bandages / cloth.
all the red metal has been damaged up a bit (my techical terms  ) and the camo has been cleaned up aswell, the lense on the bionic eye has had a little work too.
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Suffused with the dying memories of Sanguinus, the warriors of the Death Company seek only one thing: death in battle fighting against the enemies of the Emperor. |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2008/09/15 17:50:12
Subject: JD's 1st Ork of many / Need some C&C
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Dakka Veteran
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Luv the urban camo pants!
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