Hi,
Just a suggestion, but having sold a number if
40k items on ebay, I'd suggest putting a LOT more pics in the actual auction. I know you linked to them, but you really want to show off the paint job on these beauties. It makes a difference
Also, I'd say you should describe how you painted it. It looks like you put a ton of work into the typhus model, and I'd add some to the description. If people skim, it won't hurt, and if they read it through they'll see that this really is an extremely well painted miniature. You have to brag about it yourself because there's no one else to do it for you
In the future, this goes for the titles, too (I'm not sure if you can edit them now or not). Just saying "Painted- Typhus, Herald of Nurgle" isn't enough
imho. More like "EXTREMELY Well Painted Typhus, Herald of Nurgle- First Place Orccon
40k Singles Category". Again, you have to brag about yourself
I would also describe it differently than a "high tabletop standard" if it won a competition. You may have very high standards, but most people would call this professionally painted, pro painted, ungodly-awesomely painted, etc... again you have to brag about yourself because they can't see it in person, and there's no one else to do it for you
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