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Made in ca
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Please tell me what you think , and what you think should improve on . (even color choices , anything! ) Thanks!


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Made in jp
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Somewhere in south-central England.

Put it in the gallery and link it to the Vote For This thread.

http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/234224.page

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Made in ca
Avatar of the Bloody-Handed God





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Are the sub gallery i created different then the one it stays in when i upload them? (confused , its in my gallery atm)

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Made in nz
Longtime Dakkanaut





New Zealand

Really nice. My only comment is that the kans and their bases are quite similarly coloured - tinting the bases a different colour would help the kans stand out more, although I guess that depends on what basing theme your army has.

PS nice use of the old Rhino circular hatch (with a stompa/BW crankwheel on top?) - I must steal that idea...
   
Made in gb
Trollkin Champion





UK

Very nice! I for one am impressed.

Grim.

~Burn the land and boil the sea you can't take the sky from me~

Available for commissions contact me for details

 
   
Made in us
Decrepit Dakkanaut






Burtucky, Michigan

I have 2 gripes and one has nothing to do with how good you painted/modeled them lol. As a rule, I hate Kans. Now that, thats out of the way. I think where you rusted them, looks a bit thick. I know how small they are, and it can be a pain to get a good rust effect in small areas, but thats really the only thing to me.
Other then the rust, I think those look really good. I really like the double buzz saw. Extra killy
   
Made in au
Homicidal Veteran Blood Angel Assault Marine





Melbourne, Australia

I like them Luna - they look great.

I would agree with the base comment however - perhaps a couple of small patches of green grass would break it up a bit?

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Made in us
Humming Great Unclean One of Nurgle





Georgia,just outside Atlanta

I think they look really good,and as far as your bases go,if you do add any grass effects,please make sure its dead/decimated looking,green would just spoil the whole look you have here.


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Made in ca
Avatar of the Bloody-Handed God





Inactive

Updated with "blood effect" not sure what to think...


and the back


My PROUD collection of 2 art books + extra KAN . buffalo???


Just kidding ^^ ,

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Made in gb
Elite Tyranid Warrior






Looking very orky Luna.

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Made in us
Moustache-twirling Princeps





About to eat your Avatar...

I think the weapon-gore looks pretty good, but the color looks the same as the rest of the red on the model. Some contrast between the two would be nice.


 
   
Made in us
Bounding Assault Marine





colorado

Love 'em luna. My favorite is the one with the double saw blades on it's arm.

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Made in ca
Avatar of the Bloody-Handed God





Inactive

Thanks devilkin , but the ones on the smaller bases are assembled by someone else .

You guys like my canned buffalo?

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Made in us
Privateer





The paint dungeon, Arizona

Lookin good

I'd do some minor tweaks, some chipped paint and wear around the edges. The gore on the blades can be popped out a bit if you did some dirty metal highlights on the edges of the saw teeth- a lil contrast is good on detail bitz.

And maybe a touch of wearing/weathering on the leg/hydraulic bits, I think that would really round the look out.

As is theyre better than most, and I think its mostly how you choose to 'style' your orks in terms of weathering/wear & tear
   
Made in ca
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Inactive


Thanks ! all the tips and suggestions will be used on the 2 deff dreds in the comming future.

As far as the kans go ( 5 more to go ) will be kept at the under 1 hour each pace.

@Wrexasaur you know , i had a great idea to making the blood effect. I took out my hair spray , washed it clean , dipped the hose into the vallejo paint bottle.

Worked for 2 test sprays in the sink then it clogged
raaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !

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