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Ok, first of all your list will be easier to read (and so you'll get more replies) if you make it less vertical, i.e. more information in each line.
Several things I think you're doing wrong with the list. A lord commissar's morale bonuses are better in a foot list than in a mechanised army. Rough riders are fine, although you'll have to very carefully hide them behind chimeras if you want them to live long enough to charge, but Mogul Kamir is a mistake. He deprives you of control over where and when to attack, which is bad. Also, the price tag makes an already fragile unit a big fat prize for your opponents' bolters.
Most people would use special weapons only, not heavy weapons, in chimera-mounted squads. If you're using the tanks aggressively, moving them around, you can't fire the heavy anyway. Same goes for mixed special weapons, most people use all one type. Heavy weapons should maybe be used in the infantry squads, but not in the vet squads, who will benefit most from using all 3 special weapons freely.
Mixed melta/plasma seems like a good idea, but why a melta and heavy bolter squad, or a melta/lascannon? How about a lascannon/plasma and a grenade launcher/heavy bolter squad instead?
I think that heavy bolters, lascannons on leman russes, and heavy bolters on vendettas, are a waste of points, or at least pretty inefficient. They just don't match the vehicles' ideal targets. If you scrap all those you'd have 145 points, why not use it on another vehicle?
Hope that helps, welcome to the site BTW
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2,000 Hive Fleet "It Came From The Sky!"
2,000 Paladins "The Steel Shaft of the Emperor"
2,500 Space Marines WIP "Task Force Astartes" 
Eldar Corsairs: 4000 pts
Imperial Guard: 4000 pts
Corregidor 700 pts
Acontecimento 400 pts 