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Iceland

Ok so here we have this



'This' to be precise , is a freehand design I did for a Salamander Succesor Army . My question is ..

How do you think it looks . I cant let you see the rest of the model , becouse its far from being finished So what do you think of it by itself ?

   
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Centerville MA

I can tell its fire, but i recomend black lines around the flames to make pop out more.

   
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Iceland

Hmm .. black outlines ? Should I do that with paint or the same pen i used to draw it with ?

   
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Oxford MI

looks good so far..maybe A outline ?

 
   
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Iceland

Yeah , well , same question to you sir ! Outline it with paint or freehand pen ?

   
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Shadeglass Maze

I can't tell what part of the model I'm looking at? Could you describe where this is on the model? Maybe it's obvious, and I'm having one of those moments...
   
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Centerville MA

Pen it and see what it looks like

   
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Iceland

RiTides wrote:I can't tell what part of the model I'm looking at? Could you describe where this is on the model? Maybe it's obvious, and I'm having one of those moments...


Its a kneepad

@fire4effekt = Yeah , im trying to do that .. I dont seem to be the best at drawing outlines after I paint the design

   
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Bilbao, Spain

try this, dark red blurr, inside, red blood, inside dark orange, orange, bubonic brown, dark yellow, yellow and white.

thats what i did for flames in my army. ^^

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Charlotte

Along the lines of the black outline, notice Darius has painted the flames over a black base. If you were to single out that kneepad in black before adding flames, the contrast would help them "pop" more.

Waaagh-in-Progress

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Iceland

Darius wrote:try this, dark red blurr, inside, red blood, inside dark orange, orange, bubonic brown, dark yellow, yellow and white.

thats what i did for flames in my army. ^^



That looks pretty awesome nice work , I'll give it a try , although mine will probably fail miserably thanks though ..

   
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Bilbao, Spain

http://www.dakkadakka.com/dakkaforum/posts/list/0/264077.page#1096389

believe me, i made that way all my army and you will make it better than i did ^^

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Iceland

Woah , thanks ..

Now to make an entire tactical squad to practise those !

   
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Maryland, USA

You have a good start on flames.

A few things you need to work on:

Try and make your fades more gradual. You have a lot of start contrast going on there, which is ok, but it needs intermediate colors.

Mix paint! Don't get stuck with the colors that are in the bottle. The only way to make a flame (and any fade) look good, is to mix paints to obtain the intermediate colors.

Make sure you're thinning your paints well. When your doing 5 layers of differnt shades, it makes a big difference if they are thinned down or not.

Good luck!

 
   
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Ohio

Like the execution. I would reverse the collor palette (i.e. yellow at the base, dark red at the top).

- Piousman

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Piousman is correct.

The hottest part of the fire will be the lightest. start with red over the entire area of the flames, then gradually work down from red, to orange, yellow and even a little tiny wet blend of white at the bottom...

not quite the same scale, but I just finished a mural that had a couple comets. I used that style, but used some neon colored paint to make it pop. neon yellow from apple barrel type paints used in small amounts might make the flames brighter, but use a little white to tone it down..
   
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In the Webway.

Its good but needs an outline. Its also too red. Use diferent colours such as orange, yellow, red etc. Jester's and Piousman's are good ideas to follow too.

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Crouching in a chair, drinking tea.

IT LOoKS HORRIBLE
no, wait...
I think it looks ok...

*Blank stare* 
   
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Deep Fryer of Mount Doom

Darius wrote:try this, dark red blurr, inside, red blood, inside dark orange, orange, bubonic brown, dark yellow, yellow and white.

thats what i did for flames in my army. ^^



great job by the way. your legion of the damned guys are part of the few pics i saved onto my hard drive during my gallery voting (and as you can see, i've got *a couple* votes under my belt).
   
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Bilbao, Spain

... those were salam...

well, never mind

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Iceland

Well , i guess i'll go die now ..

I mixed the white to a stage where it was a crossover of a wash/extremely vatered down paint .. it ruined the whole thing and i had to start over ..

Damn it ..

   
 
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