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“Stand, Men of the Empire! Whilst the Brutal and Perifidous foes stand around you, remember those you leave at home! Your women, your children, your brothers, your mothers and your fathers! Remember that we are the sons and daughters of Sigmar! Let this be the fire in your hearts on this day, let this faith be as true as your swords and your spears! Like the lead from a handgun, or the bolt from a crossbow, strike true, and with each blow may our enemies know that our Emperor guides us and Sigmar protects us! Now I ask you upon this day, will you stand against the growing tide?”

Nice work, I definately prefer this to Magnus' speech before the gates of Kislev, nice work!

Oh, and the answer is "YES!!!!!!!!!!!"

FOR SIGMAR! very well done man, I sense great skill in your writhing. kepp up the good work

Thank you both. Glad you enjoyed it.

Nice work.

I'd reframe it a bit, beginning with the question and ending with the command. Like so:

Will you not stand, Men of the Empire? Will you flee before the perfidious foe, forgetting your womenfolk and your children? Will you forget that we are all the sons and daughters of divine Sigmar? No! You will never forget! This will be the fire in your heart, the true edge of sword and spear, the bark of pistol and bite of arrow and bolt: every blow against the enemy for the honor of the Emperor! every enemy that falls testament to our faith in Sigmar! You will stand, Men of the Empire, and you will slay your enemies this day!