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Keep this up and you'll "find" a reward, Scrazza.

But your grammar is slipping (gasp).. your tenses are getting confused and you're mixing words up (ie Laspistol instead of Lasgun).

Imperial Grammar Patrol

Me can has reward?

Scrazza wrote:Me can has reward?

Is the worst grammer ever! XD

Arken Vul'tan01 wrote:

Scrazza wrote:Me can has reward?

Is the worst grammer ever! XD

That was the intention.

LOL

BIC
Feris night walked down the corridor for a strange reason it was getting lighter. There was flashes of light and screams. He began to run down this hallway the sreams getting loader and the sounds of a bolter.

He turned a corner and saw a brave warrior fight swarms of daemonettes his thoughts were help this fellow marine and then leave because he was a grey knight but he also thought he may need an ally in the purge of chaos.

He raised his bolter and shoot at the ambushing daemons. Suddenly the daemons disappered, "WHAT IS YOUR NAME?" asked the marshal....

By the way, (yes, I know I keep going on about grammar/spellings etc.. sorry ) if your posts aren't very long/grammatically correct, then it might be a good idea to try and learn from other peoples' posts, like WARORK or Scrazza (or myself..).

I mean, to be honest, once you've learned to spell, get your grammar correct (98% of the time) - you'll never want to go back to bad grammar again. You can only understand how annoying bad grammar is once you overcome it.

And yes Scrazza, you can has reward. If you do some more posts at x10 interest power. Get some real brutal description in there, more speech, more emotions and feelings, MOAR DAKKA, more descriptions of your surroundings, remember that Lasguns have Single-shot, semi-auto and full-auto settings, and also low-, standard- and high-energy shot settings. Obviously, certain settings use more ammo.

By the way, have a free group of Heavy Weapons teams on me! (Heavy bolters, Autocannons, snipers)


Hmm.. maybe event later as well. We'll see.

@ black templar - your Marshal shouts a lot, doesn't he? lower-case speech is easier on the eye.

Sorry im trying my best.

Scrazza wrote:

Darkvoidof40k wrote: Now where did our resident Inquisitor get to..?

I was wondering that as well, I thought we teamed up

Sorry, the internet connection here is pretty terrible (a mix of having a 5 year old router designed only to handle one internet device but having to work with 10 and being conected to the internet via a wire from circa 1930) and also I recently found a new channel to watch on you-tube so I've been stuck watching that for some time as well...

I'll write a good long piece of RP soon, don't you worry...

black templar wrote:Sorry, I'm trying my best.

I know, but it won't hurt to improve your best, eh?

Because that's what a roleplay is (asides from fun and whatnot) - a chance to improve your literacy and writing skills. I mean, if you can do something that's fun and learn from it at the same time, then why the hell not?! You'd be crazy not to.

OOC: Grey not Gray. And I have a retuine.
Glaudian turned to see a Black Templar behind him.
"Glaudian why do you ask?" Glaudian replied.
The look on the Black Templar's face was a mix of appreciation and distrust. Glaudian understood that it was in the Black Templars nature to distrust Psychers. But surely he new all Grey Knights are loyal.

ok

wizard12 wrote:I'll write a good long piece of RP soon, don't you worry...

Excellent..

The marshal felt unsure on what to think of this fellow marine, this ship was tainted by chaos he was worried that this marine was tainted.

"I am here to cleans this ship of chaos will you join me?"....

"Our goals are the same so I don't see why not?"
Glaudian was concerned with the Marshal. He seemed to doubt Glaudian's loyalty. He was lucky an Inquistor was nowhere near because his thoughts were border line heresy. No Grey Knight had ever fallen to the taint of chaos. And to suggest one had was an outrageous thought.
"Why do you doubt my Loyalty?" Glaudian asked.
[Insert your peice of dialog here BT ]
Suddenly a group of blood letters poured round the corner.
TBC

"Creatures of the warp shall burn!"
He raised his bolter and fired kill some of the creatures of the warp slating the blood and guts of the creature when the rounds hit they let out a chilling scream.
Glaudian fired his wrist mounted storm bolter hitting the beasts.
But more and more kept coming Glaudian spoke the words of a psykic power.
"What are you doing?" asked the marshal but he got no reply.
Suddenly a shock wave went through whole room killing all the daemons...

Charkos and the Ousians continued to hold off the orks by sheer guts for as long as they could. The dead toll was high for the Ousians, but there were just under thirty orks left. The Guardsmen were hunting them down as he sat down to rest. He witnessed the damage in front of him. Dozens of dead kinsmen lay in front of him, and there were probably more along the line. He needed Mohan to play another tune on his banjo, he needed to be reminded of home. Every one who died, left a memory from Ousia.

Sergeant Pulver, sheeting his powersword in it's scabbard, walked over to Charkos.

"11 dead from our platoon, Chief." He started. "The others took quite a beating as well, but we're hunting down the last ones as we speak."

"Some good news, finally"... Charkos whispered.

He slipped the emty mag out his pistol, slammed in a new one and holstered it again. He got up, and patted Pulver on the shoulder reassuringly.

'"We'll get through this," Charkos said. I know that"

"Let's hope so..." Pulver said "One more thing, the second wave of boardings is due to arrive in two minutes. Fifteenth Company will be here to back us up."

"Good." Charkos said simply, and left to gather his men.

Ooc: sorry Scrazza, I hope you don't mind me flattening a lieutenant of a different platoon from your regiment with a door, I just couldn't resisit

Bic:

Marcus had tried to find the Lieutenant on the lander but as he made his way from compartment to compartment he started to get a bad feeling that there had been a mix up. He none of the men he spoke to had a clue where Charkos was or didn’t know who he was entirely. He had travelled the entire length of the lander, moving from the deep hull, where ammunition, fuel and supplies were stored, through the troop compartments talked to every sergeant of each squad then moving on to the cockpit. Marcus hammered on the door of the cockpit, the two guardsmen on guard duty stood by, dumbstruck by the fact an inquisitor of the one of the emperors most holy ordos was on their ship with their men. Just as Marcus restarted his barrage of fists upon the door it was opened by a slightly pale man. Sadly for the man Marcus was still hammering the door and it burst open as the lock was released, flattening the poor man against a filing cabinet.
Marcus strode into the room;

“Firstly, who’s in charge here?”

The door swung back on its hinges revelling the now pale man with a nose bleed holding up his hand and saying “me sir.”

“Then why was I not answered earlier?” said the inquisitor, spinning around with such speed the pale man jumped.

“We couldn’t hear you; it is quite noisy in here due to engine noise. Did the guards not inform you?” the man stuttered slightly.

“Ah... then secondly, have you realised your guards are imbeciles? I stood there for almost a full minute before you answered?”

“Yes sir, I realise.”

“Then finally, where in the warp is Lieutenant Charkos?”

“On lander 16 where he should be.”

“And this would be...”

“lander 17”

“Dammit, OK, look...” Marcus paused to look for the mans rank “Lieutenant, due to a mix up I am requisitioning a squad of your men to join me until I link up with Charkos, are you clear?”

“Yes sir, but, and please don’t mind me asking but, what right do you have to steal a squad of my men?”

Marcus reached for a small pocket attached to his sword’s scabbard, the man flinched and raised his arm as if Marcus would strike him down, instead Marcus pulled a small wooden tablet from the pocket, in its centre, raised in gold, was the inquisitional symbol. “All the right in this damned universe...”

The lieutenant flinched from this even more, but seemed to gain enough composure to come back with the slightly snarky remark of, “you realise our DZ is about 5 miles from Charkos’?”


Ooc: more to come later....

"See I saved you via my psyshic powers. Marshall. " Glaudian said.
The Marshal looked in disgust.He knew he was right just he did not want to admit it.
"Look do not doubt or fear me. Though I have powers that your chapter does not like does not me I am disloyal."
"I have fought for the Emperor for 280 years and never heard the voices of chaos tempt me."
The Black Templar still looked in disgust.
"How dare you suggest that I fear you! I am Fear INCARNATE!"

The marshal felt like turning his bolter on the Grey knight but he needed an ally he would trust him for now.

They headed down a hallway, "You asked me why i doubt your loyalty? Because powers like yours and your chapters is close to the powers of chaos and chaos can tip the balance."...

"We maybe close to chaos as in the fact that we are sent to kill daemons but we despise them and their so called gods. The Emporer is the only true go I know!" Glaudian replied .
He was becoming slightly annoyed with Black Templar trying to disprove his loyalty.

Wait.. Glaudian just admitted to being close to chaos?

I know what you're getting at . But try and write it in a more grimdark 40k way that makes sense. I'd suggest reading some 40k novels, more specifically perhaps, the Grey Knight novels.

The marshal began to trust this grey knight abit more.

They headed down a corridor into a hanger, they saw a pile of dead ork.

"Do you have any other chapter members onboard?" said Feris night with anger in his voice.

As the first lander landed on the decking, Mortensen's company had already cleared the area of orks, and affiliated grots. Fire Teams burned the dead orks while chinese volunteers tossed them on a heap. Blach witnessed the scene, and was proud of the work they did. They had single handedly cleared an area of orks. It had been a though fight, but they had pulled through. Blach was balancing his machete on his palm, as Pulver jokingly slammed his shoulders into him, and causing his machete to clatter against the floor.

"Nice, joker." Blach said. "Now pick it up, or I'll carve our slogan in your forehead." He laughed.

Still chuckling, Blach picked the machete up himself.

"We did a good job out here," Pulver said. "But we ain't done. If I know the orks, they should be coming in greater numbers soon."

"We got more troops now." Blach said calmly.

"Yeah, 15th Company is getting chucked into the fight, but it'll take more."

"Barricades, me need more of em." Blach answered. "Mines too."

You got that right." Pulver chuckled. "Charkos put you on guard detail, Vrek he put the whole platoon on guard detail."

"We got to secure this beachhead Pulvey, Charkos's right." Blach said. "I'll put some mines up outside the town, just lend me a hand with your squad."

"Let's go." Pulver replied.

The landers touched down, unleashing another 350 guardsmen unto the hulk from this entry point. They'd make a beachead, and try to hold on until armor units could be securely brought up. Within the hours, a tank company from the 14th Grahin Armour would touch down inside the hulk. From then on, the combined assault group could venture deeper into the hulk to exterminate any xenos threat they found. The men hoped it were only xenos they would come across.

OOC @WARORK, you got one hour to reach me and grab a good fight.

Darkvoidof40k wrote:Wait.. Glaudian just admitted to being close to chaos?

I know what you're getting at . But try and write it in a more grimdark 40k way that makes sense. I'd suggest reading some 40k novels, more specifically perhaps, the Grey Knight novels.

Close to chaos as in close to my blade!

black templar wrote:The marshal began to trust this grey knight abit more.

They headed down a corridor into a hanger, they saw a pile of dead ork.

"Do you have any other chapter members onboard?" said Feris night with anger in his voice.

"Yes We sperated after an attack. Though I still have vox contact with them. They should be near by." Glaudian said while kicking an Ork corpse out of his way.

"Why did you not tell me you had your chapter brothers here?" said the marshal.

He walked around the hanger and saw a wounded ork trying to crawl away but the marshal walked over put his boot on its chest and stabbed the ork though the chest.

black templar, Arken, you do realise you can roleplay with each others characters? Especially with simple conversations. Just use common sense, though. One line IC posts are pretty much useless.

"Because you did not ask, I don't go giving away my brothers' postion who knows who could be listening.." Replied Glaudian.
He watched the Marshal dispatch the Ork.
"I guess." The Black Templar replied.
"We heave got off to a bad start but lets put that behind us. We are brothers now." Glaudian gave his hand to the Black Templar.
"Aye." Replied Feris. (Is that your name?)