170 Captain w/ Relic Blade, Storm Shield, Artificer Armor, Digital Weapons
I saw your point about loading up on your
HQ but I personally think you went overboard. He's protected by Terminators in a Land Raider, he doesn't really need the extra armor. I'd lose the
SS and
AA. I think we can use those points elsewhere.
215 Tactical Squad w/ PowerFist, Plasma Gun, LasCannon
215 " "
If you plan on moving them up the board, they need Rhinos and you don't need the Lascannon. In a mobile squads (one that will be in midfield) the Multi-Melta is as good if not better. Even outside of 12", its AP1 so its more likely to actually kill a tank.
100 Scout Squad w/ Snipers, Camo Cloaks, Heavy Bolter
I feel that Camo Cloaks are kind of overkill really. You should be deployed in 4+ cover and engaging at range. The biggest threats to Scouts (Heavy Flamers and the like) will ignore your fancy cover saves anyway.
200 CC Terminator Squad w/ TH/SS
250 Land Raider Redeemer w/ Multi Melta
Pretty standard in alot of Codex armies. I feel its overkill and I'd rather have the points in more guns but that is a playstyle thing.
165 Las Pred
No thank you. Too expensive for what it does. Take the Combi-Predator instead (
AC/
LC). Its 45 points cheaper and just as good at its intended targets of transports, walkers and
MCs. Everyone always discounts the poor Autocannon.
85 Dakka Pred
Good little gun system, cheap and dakka-y.
100 ThunderFire Cannon
I prefer Whirlwinds simply because they can be deployed out of
LOS and the model looks cooler.
So if you take my advice, you'll have a total of 35 points leftover. If you do a little more trimming I think you could fit in an Attack Bike or Speeder or build up your Scout squad a little bit more.