Your list looks entertaining, I'm sure how competitive it is, but thats ok. As far as competitive advice goes, 1 land raider is not a huge threat, but at 1500 points its hard to fit in 2, and it would drastically change the list, also I'm not sure 5 man sternguard are that powerful, but I've never played with them.
On to the real critiques I have. I would take all hammers and storm shields in the termie squad. Your list lacks a anti infantry and focuses too much on anti tank. Unless you play against a lot of full mech lists, I would think about adding in some anti infantry. I would suggest cutting the melta guns off of the tac squads for flamers and add the 3rd combi melta to the sternguard, I love having mirrored units. Also, I would change your land raider into a land raider crusader or redeemer with a multi melta, its a lot more shooty and I dont think you need the antitank. Finally, I would swap the twin-linked lascannons on your razors for las/plas, your lascannons are a little less effective, but you gain an additional weapon in case of a weapon destroyed and to shoot with.
Hope some of my ranting helped give you some ideas, good luck.
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