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a new list i threw together just want some opinions
HQ
Chapter Master
-Power Fist
-Artificer Armor
-Digital Weapons
175
Captain
-Power Sword
-Artificer Armor
-Digital Weapons
140
Troops
Ten Man Tactical Squad
-Flamer
170
Ten Man Tactical Squad
-Plasma Gun
180
Scout Squad
-Shotgun
-Shotgun
-Heavy Bolter
-Camo Cloak
100
Elites
Dreadnaught
-Lascannon
135
Heavy support
Predator
-Heavy Bolters
-Storm Bolter
95
Total 995 Points

Two HQs in 1000 pt games is a bit much.
I'd drop the Chapter Master and add another Dread or Predator.

I agree with wuestenfux. Two HQ isn't very streamlined point wise.

I'd probably give your tac squads rhinos, Replace the shotguns with sniper rifles, and take a dakka pred.

I'd drop both HQs and take a Chaplain or a Librarian

Give your tactical squads heavy weapons! (Heavy Bolter or Missile Launcher or Multi Melta for FREE!)

If you're going to go with Chapter Master, change your second HQ to a Librarian or Chaplain (100 points each)

No point giving your HQ a good close combat loadout and then sticking him on a normal tac squad.
Lose the Dreadnought and Scout Squad and give the Chapter Master a CC Terminator Squad.

Also consider changing the Power Fist for a Relic Blade, as you'll keep (most of) the Str benefits of the Powerfist, but you'll keep the CM's Initiative high, allowing him to strike first in combat.