I wasn't keen on the representation of the Exarchs. I don't picture them being very chatty, least of all smiling. I suppose they're just Eldar Space Marines though, and Space Marines chat and laugh.
It also suffered from
Call A Rabbit A Smeerp, what with all the funky names for the food they were eating. It would've been appropriate just to put 'they were eating leaves and berries and
raw meat' and leave it at that.
I'm a fussy prick, it was fine. Looks interesting and I'll be picking a copy up.