Picture quality and paintjob aside (they could both do with a bit of work). I say I really like these guys. The spears look great. Are they some kind of cavalry spears? I was looking at some wood elfs a few months ago for the purpose of kitbashing and equipping my SW with long spears (for a jump pack unit originally) but it got to expencive for me (or I got to cheap!). This makes me really want to get some spears again!
And the colours: well, you cant go wrong with black. They look real mean.
The paint job could do with some more washes and highlights to be honest. They look a little glossy, but that might be the photos lightning.
All in all, I think you got a feeling for posing and converting that will become marvelos with a little practice, and IMO, that is more importatnt than the perfect paintjob.