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I'd drop the plasmas in a heart beat.

I would also change the Commissar Lord for multiple regular Commissars, modular is the way to go, that way when one dies you still have the rest to do the job, not to mention the possibility of packing some nice Power Fists with them.

Also, get Creed, his multiple orders (including FTHOC) will impact the game BIG TIME, not to mention the possibility of using his Tactical Genius to sneak a suicide Hellhound/Devildog/Banewolf to take care of something scary OR to have an entire platoon on a flank forcing your enemy to either split up and get outgunned on the main battle or ignore the flankers and get lots of pot shots (more than potshots with those AC) all game long.