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Well, generally this is how successful (i.e. this) fiction threads go:

OP
well done
well done
well done
thanks thanks
well done
thanks
well done
Darkvoidof40k followed by much off-topic
off-top
off-top
off-top
update
repeat.

XD well I can assure you that no matter how off topic you take it I will put it back on topic.

Commissar NIkev wrote:Idk man..........its mostly Nurgle vs Eldar and Guardsmen...... VS THE AWESOME MARINES!!

you missed something!!

shas'o vera wrote:

Commissar NIkev wrote:Idk man..........its mostly Nurgle vs Eldar and Guardsmen...... VS THE AWESOME MARINES!! Vs GRAMMAR NAZI IN BIG L3TTERS!

you missed something!!

You missed something!!!!!

XD
I count the Awesome Marine as a addition to the Guardsmen,

The Nazi is with Nurgle......

Just cause of!!!!Y'know!!!!

Anyway, I nurglerape you and win the game. I level up.

Wait, this isn't the king of the hill thread! I just left there!
*jumps back to KoH thread and waits for annoyed NIkev*

Lucky to all who are enjoying this and following as I post(I congratulate you cause I haven't written in a little while), but I am planning on trying my hand at drawing this story into a short video. Although the name will be different and some things will be different from the written story here, I am going to try to keep it as close to the same as possible.

So, this video isn't THAT great considering I'm very far from being done. But I felt that I should at least post something as to not have nothing happening here.

that looks good for a first attempt, i have to ask, how did you manage to find the voice thing?

Thanks Shas!

The Voice is from a compliation but together by a Guy on Youtube called : Imperator Dominatus
He takes the Unit voices from the games and makes songs by putting them together with music.I definitely recommend looking up some of his work

Nice vid. But it was a bit hard to understand everything that was said, and I couldn't make out the picures. :/ Ah well.


EDIT: are you "ToumokuInsotsu"?

Ah, well I crudely scanned the pics because they are still in my sketch pad. But when I have the pics completed I am going to remove them(ever so carefully) and scan them proper.

That is my name. I wish I could change it though :/

That vid is pretty awesomesauce.

@DarkVoid
If wanted, I could type out the Lyrics.



@Wolfborn
Happy To please ^.^

Well, here is an updated version to the video, still isn't near completion, but I thought I'd add videos as I edited.

Lyrics

Nightmares Torment Me

I Can No Longer Resist The Call Of The Infinite

Their Blows Rain Heavy

My Wraithbone Cracks

My Sight In This World Dims

I Return To Slumber

My Soulstone Please Take It

Save The Others

Tis skill, good sir.

Thanks

Nice! I hereby give you my flag.

Darkvoidof40k wrote:Nice! I hereby give you my flag.

Why thank you good sir!


Wow, I procrastinate too much........

Darkvoidof40k wrote:Nice! I hereby give you my flag.

argh!! its the dreaded flag of the non-thrusters...

shas'o vera wrote:

Darkvoidof40k wrote:Nice! I hereby give you my flag.

argh!! its the dreaded flag of the non-thrusters...

You just got stamped.


BEGON HERETIC! *lights torch*

you wish, im not going that easily, the stamp only partialy covers my thrusting weapon

shas'o vera wrote:you wish, im not going that easily, the stamp only partialy covers my thrusting weapon

that......was just gross

Commissar NIkev wrote:

shas'o vera wrote:you wish, im not going that easily, the stamp only partialy covers my thrusting weapon

that......was just gross

*eats last nacho*
*lobs nacho sampling tray at gross thrusting weapon*

Shas: "Son of a b****!"


NIKEV GET THIS THREAD BACK ON TOPIC WITH SOME POSTINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!

sigh.......fine.....I'll torture my mind to summon upon a web of words to form thine holy story

Prologue
He dreamed of a dream like no others. The Entirety of it was not clear, he felt as if he was standing in water, but also on land. "How in the World?" he said to himself reaching and feeling an empty holster.In the distance he could see a figure. As he approached the figure, it was clearly taller than him. Even though it was sitting, its back against some rubble. Nikev stepped closer to investigate the strange figure. As he moved closer, the figure, which could now be noted as a Eldar Wraithlord. Its head moved into position so he was looking straight into what seemed to be its face. A deep, desperate, sorrowful voice rang out to say, "Nightmares torment me" "What" Nikev began to say when the voice boomed again. Burdening all that was near with sorrow. Nikev could feel the voice in his head as well as through his ears.
"I can no longer resist the call of the infinite." "What do you mean?" Nikev tried again only to be interrupted once more. "Their blows rain heavy." Dents began forming into the Wraithlord's body. "My Wraithbone Cracks." The Wraithlord's chestplate began to crack and fracture. Bright light began to emit from the open wounds. "My sight in this world dims" The emblem upon the Wrathlord's head, began to dim. "I return to slumber" The Wraithlord began to slowly slump back. My soulstone, Please take it." The Wraithlord held out a glowing stone to Nikev which he took from it and put in his Storm coat pocket. "Please" The wraithlord Paused in pain "Save" The Wraithlord began to loose its strength and began to slump back, its lights growing dim till the were almost out "Isha".
Blinding light encircled Nikev and an odd sensation began to flow through his body. He began to lose feeling in his body. It began from the soles of his feet and slowly rose throughout his body until he was completely erased from that realm. Awakening in a worse one yet. Looking into the distance, there was a massive building. It heavily resembled the Lady's Spire back on Nucia, although the great city of Naron wasn't at its foot.
On the ground below the spire, foot soldiers, tanks, and gigantic monstrosities assaulted the tower. Firing rockets, spewing acid, and firing laser rounds the force was desperate to take the tower. But from the tower, came a tremendous resistance, precise shots were striking the advancing army. Although the defender's clearly did not have the ammunition the stave the vast numbers of the Assaulters.
"Help them." Came the voice of the wraithlord. Nikev looked to his side and saw the wraithlord, standing in his prime, though a mere psychic projection. "Help them before they fall. I have failed," The wraithlord pointed to a small break in the assaulter's line, where their vision zoomed in. Seeing the location up close, Nikev could see the Wraithlord, battling the now visibly clear, forces of Nurgle.
The Wraithlord wielding a might sword of the eldar, was holding his ground as the forces of Nurgle assaulted. Blasting from his shoulder shuriken cannon, he was able to stave the tide until his supporting squad was killed. Without his support, heavy weapons where brought to bear against him. A rocket, improperly aimed hit the ground by his feet. Crashing down, the forces of Nurgle covered the wraithlord like ants, smashing, scratching, and trying to damage him in any way they could.
"For Isha!" Nikev heard and turned to see a Farseer summoning a massive storm, supported by the Wraithlord by sacrificing his last life force. A sudden blinding light and Nikev woke up to a large jolt but settled back down as he remembered they had boarded the Rhinos after finding out that the squad in the ruins was dead.
"Save Isha" Nikev muttered to himself as he reached into his pocket. Pulling out a glowing blue stone which took the form of a tear. Nikev had dreams like this one, but sometimes with different warriors at the battle, all of them seeming to die. He could remember when he had the dream before the tragedy at Nucia and how he ignored the dream. But now, he understood it and was determined to help the eldar who warned him by coming to their aid, or saving Isha. It was his duty, swore by their Lady and their repayment to the Eldar.

(Redoing the story.)

Amazing as usual, good sir.

Thanks

MOARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chapter 1: A Future to be Reached

"MEN OF NUCIA! FOR ISHA! CHARGE!" Nikev bellowed as the men under his command lept from the trenches and roared in anger at the foe they had to defeat.

"Strike them down with all of your might!" Nikev could hear the priest shout over the roar and heard the all to familiar rev of the father's eviscrator as he charged with the men of Nucia into the mouth of hell.

Running down the marsh with his squad Nikev dashes with all the speed he could muster to reach their archenemy before they could open fire. The Artillery had softened them up with a constant 3 day barrage and they wanted to make sure they could make it unlike the unfortunate last wave.

As the men ran the crossed the point at which the charge before them had met the hard rounds that the enemy replied to their charge with. Running Nikev saw Hoplik dead. He was almost unrecognizable he had been hit so much with the hard rounds of the enemy guns.

Moments later Nikev heard a most dreaded sound, bolters could be heard opening up on the line.
Lucky for the nucians the shots were going wild due to the smoke kicked up by all of the shelling. Although, for some Nucians, Luck did not hold long as the guns soon began to find bodies to hit. Screams could be heard as rounds tore bodies apart. Squeals of those who had been hit and killed before they could complete the scream were becoming increasingly loud.

Blasting blindly while charging onward Nikev was beginning to make out the enemy trench lines and could see that he and his squad were running straight into an enemy bolter. Balnet immediately stopped and dropped to his knee as he brought up his launcher and released a rocket. Hitting the bolter dead center the machine went up in flames as did its crew. Smiling from his kill streak he had just obtained his smile went limp as a bolter round tore his body limb from limb.

Guns from all over had opened up to meet the Nucians as they charged forward into the enemy trenches.

Reaching the Trenches Nikev immediately brought his chainsword to bear revving it at the troopers who had drawn their weapons to kill their attackers. Before the filth archenemy of the nucians could fell Nikev time seemed to distort meters in front of Nikev.

Like a phantom of the Night the Warp Spiders began their phase of the plan. Blasting into reality the appeared in front of the Imperial forces and began shredding the archenemy to pieces. As Nikev made it along side the warp spider he stopped for a mere moment " Thank you Spider!" The spider's expressionless face looked back at him and replied. "For Isha" With that the Warp Spider had disappeared entirely from Nikev's sight. Nikev turned and charged the enemy that still live and knew that that spider would claim many more lives of the enemy today.

With a blooded boiling roar, Nikev smashed into the enemy with his chainsword hacking limb from limb. The Smell was horrific, out in no-mans land they could not smell it as bad but here, in the thick of the enemy which had been seated here for weeks, the smell was unbearable. Nikev knew they would not be able to fight had then not had their specialized equipment on.

"Come on you Leer!" Scout Narko shouted as he charged headlong into a group of the chaos enemy. He knife and pistol in hand he had not even carried a las-gun, for unless he was with his long-las, he was with pistol and knife. Slashing and only using the pistol to finish off an enemy Narko dodged, sidestepped, and slaughtered all that came into his range.

"Fight them all!" Nikev roared with his chainsword chewing through one of the filthy archenemy spewing its insides all over the ground.

A loud roar was heard and Nikev looked up from his fresh kill. There, Standing meters taller than a normal man. Was a Great Unclean One. Its disgust clear from the distance from it Nikev wanted to vomit from the mere sight of the thing.

"WITH ME! FOR ISHA!" Nikev heard the shout and turned to see that the Farseer charging with her black guardians behind her. Blasting all that they came across they charged alongside the Nucians and supported them with fire from their Shuriken Catapults.

Running alongside the Farseer, Nikev Prepared to fight the Foul Xenos that rose in front of them. The Spawn of Nurgle would die this day bringing the combined forces of the Nucians and Eldar of the Craftworld Ulthwé.


"Damn she moves fast" Nikev thought to himself as he was begining to fall behind the Farseers gracious Strides.

As he was running to the obscenity he began to hear a high pitched whine begin to grow louder and louder and begin to consume the roars of his squad who were rushing in behind him.

Over the micro-bead Nikev could hear the voice of a man who had saved his life many times before.The man possesed such skill that he was both feared and respected by all who knew him.

"I" Nikev thought about how many times his friend had pulled this stunt and could help but smile.

"am" The Farseer well ahead of Nikev thought to herself "Stupid human, always wasting vehicles with this stupid move.

"Grisnak Mornip!" With the last words being spoken a speeder bike raced over Nikev and the Farseer.

Before Smashing into the beast Grisnak Mornip lept from the vehicle power fist glowing with arcane magic. As the Speeder bike flew past the creature crashing into the ground, the beast, after following the bike with its eyes began to turn around. It was met with a power-fist connected to a Xenophobic Marine with a passion to kill.

Ramming into the beast there wasn't even a crunch as the creatures jaw slide out of place with ease as the power-fist took it from its head.

Rearing back from the blow the creature lashed out at the Farseer who was within striking distance now.

Jumping into the air with grace and beauty the Farseer landed behind the beast and struck it with her divine powers. Lighting danced from her fingers and struck the beast up and down blowing chunks from its body.

Damint Nikev thought I'm always the last to the fight!
"HRUUAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!" Nikev roared as he charged the exposed back of the beast with his chainsword. His squad behind him opened up with their weaponry and the beast was being torn apart at an alarming rate, however, it seemed to be rejuvenating all that was lost at an even faster pace.


(Chapter To be Continued)