I like the
MoT, but perhaps instead of ignoring cover it should force the target to re-roll successful saves? That way it shows how it guides it's way to a weak point, without being too powerful. With
MoS I think maybe make it that each wound lost = a -1 penalty on the pinning test. I like
MoN as is though. I really wish snipers were more viable in
40k. there's a reason they're so feared on the battlefield in modern warfare.
I also really like the fade to black rule. Fluffy, useful and cool all in 1