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2011/05/19 23:45:51
Subject: Catalices best-Lord commissar Klimino Alexander
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Phanobi
oh,you know. in a basement...cooking ponies into cupcakes....
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there,seperated speech,also made him a lutinant.cant think of any mayor ways to make him sound more tougher,already trailing out orders.
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 Deathshead420 wrote:As your leader, I encourage you, from time to time and always in a respectful manner, to question my logic. If you're unconvinced a particular plan of action I've decided is the wisest, tell me so! But allow me to convince you. And I promise you, right here and now, no subject will ever be taboo … except, of course, the subject that was just under discussion. The price you pay for bringing up either my Chinese or American heritage as a negative is – I collect your f  g head. [Holds up Tanaka's head] Just like this f r here. Now, if any of you sons of bitches got anything else to say, now's the f g time! [Pause] I didn't think so.
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2011/05/19 23:54:06
Subject: Catalices best-Lord commissar Klimino Alexander
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Renegade Inquisitor de Marche
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To make him sound a bit more authoritarian:
Instead of kid have him use trooper or sargeant unless he already knows them.
Take away any 'i hopes' or anything else that makes him sound uncertain.
Try to get the troopers using his rank rather than his name... maybe his surname at the least.
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2011/05/20 00:01:36
Subject: Catalices best-Lord commissar Klimino Alexander
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Phanobi
oh,you know. in a basement...cooking ponies into cupcakes....
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ok,thanks.
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Deathshead420 wrote:As your leader, I encourage you, from time to time and always in a respectful manner, to question my logic. If you're unconvinced a particular plan of action I've decided is the wisest, tell me so! But allow me to convince you. And I promise you, right here and now, no subject will ever be taboo … except, of course, the subject that was just under discussion. The price you pay for bringing up either my Chinese or American heritage as a negative is – I collect your f g head. [Holds up Tanaka's head] Just like this f r here. Now, if any of you sons of bitches got anything else to say, now's the f g time! [Pause] I didn't think so.
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2011/05/20 00:43:36
Subject: Catalices best-Lord commissar Klimino Alexander
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Phanobi
oh,you know. in a basement...cooking ponies into cupcakes....
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changed it up a little,nothing major though.
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Deathshead420 wrote:As your leader, I encourage you, from time to time and always in a respectful manner, to question my logic. If you're unconvinced a particular plan of action I've decided is the wisest, tell me so! But allow me to convince you. And I promise you, right here and now, no subject will ever be taboo … except, of course, the subject that was just under discussion. The price you pay for bringing up either my Chinese or American heritage as a negative is – I collect your f g head. [Holds up Tanaka's head] Just like this f r here. Now, if any of you sons of bitches got anything else to say, now's the f g time! [Pause] I didn't think so.
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2011/05/20 12:57:32
Subject: Catalices best-Lord commissar Klimino Alexander
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Ancient Ultramarine Venerable Dreadnought
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Have you ever heard of the space bar? It's that big rectangular button at the bottom of the keyboard. You should try using it more often.
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2011/05/20 13:00:13
Subject: Catalices best-Lord commissar Klimino Alexander
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Phanobi
oh,you know. in a basement...cooking ponies into cupcakes....
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geez, i, never, knew, there, was, one. 
ok,so work on spaceing properly? and thanks for being so nice about it
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Deathshead420 wrote:As your leader, I encourage you, from time to time and always in a respectful manner, to question my logic. If you're unconvinced a particular plan of action I've decided is the wisest, tell me so! But allow me to convince you. And I promise you, right here and now, no subject will ever be taboo … except, of course, the subject that was just under discussion. The price you pay for bringing up either my Chinese or American heritage as a negative is – I collect your f g head. [Holds up Tanaka's head] Just like this f r here. Now, if any of you sons of bitches got anything else to say, now's the f g time! [Pause] I didn't think so.
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2011/05/20 19:51:34
Subject: Catalices best-Lord commissar Klimino Alexander
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Ancient Ultramarine Venerable Dreadnought
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lord commissar klimino wrote:geez, i, never, knew, there, was, one.
ok,so work on spaceing properly? and thanks for being so nice about it
And stop adding so many commas.
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2011/05/24 03:47:02
Subject: Catalices best-Lord commissar Klimino Alexander
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Phanobi
oh,you know. in a basement...cooking ponies into cupcakes....
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the ending is up on the crow fight.not the best,but at least i finally got it done.
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Deathshead420 wrote:As your leader, I encourage you, from time to time and always in a respectful manner, to question my logic. If you're unconvinced a particular plan of action I've decided is the wisest, tell me so! But allow me to convince you. And I promise you, right here and now, no subject will ever be taboo … except, of course, the subject that was just under discussion. The price you pay for bringing up either my Chinese or American heritage as a negative is – I collect your f g head. [Holds up Tanaka's head] Just like this f r here. Now, if any of you sons of bitches got anything else to say, now's the f g time! [Pause] I didn't think so.
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