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I had a quick scan of your blog. Firstly a few positive things.

1) i like your drawings, im very envious of anyone who can draw better than me.
2) You have some usefull information about painting figures. Bonus!
3) Your photos do you painting justice.
4) i like to see that the younger generation can take time to fill in a blog about there hobby activities.

Criticisms.

1) add some content to the forum to get folk to actually feel they want to read your blog.
2) big walls of text in a blog tend to put people off very quickly and make visitors either skip, scan read or not visit again.
3) ok your young, your about 16-17? Judging by your GCSE comments, dont get dragged into arguments on the forum. It wont do you much good on the forum with the older members.
4) Seriously remove your email address from your blog.... You will thank get spammed terribly...

disclaimer: All the above is intended as constructive criticism and none of it is meant or intended to cause any ill feeling or harm to the OP.

FINALLY some help, thanks mate!
I totally see where you are coming from, i wonder if you could be of any more help and give me some ideas of how to break up th text and make it more inviting for the visitors to read? As for the arguements on the forum i think i shall not be sparring with any of the rickety older generation again. As for your disclaimer its fine, all constructive critisism is highly welcome, bullheaded-smartass-wiseguy comments are not so welcome but tolerated nonetheless. For those who wonder why this is on a p&m page the i shall placate you with a question, should i base my horses with khemri brown or scorched dirt(or whatever its called), I guess a brown wash is neccasary but its where to start?

oh and btw a new post is coming up soon...FEATURING
My first painted warrior of rohan and a previous drawing now complete

bond

Criticism 3. So true. Old people are mean and will not only win THIS argument. They will watch your every post for the chance to win the next one.

it wouldnt be so bad if they (as a few kind fellows have) offer the advice I need. Anywho, there is a new, short, post up now.
Thanks for your continued support

Kizmet wrote:

boyd wrote: watching a monkey try to f-ck a football.

thats funny to watch

Its hiliarious.

dont encourage them lol

DakkaDakka really isn't the right place to advertise that you posted a new blog post.