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Loricatus Aurora wrote:Good stuff Trondheim

How about a massive space conflict between the marines and (Dark?) Eldar?

Or the Eldar trap leads to temporary alliance between Eldar/Marines against XYZ (ie Nids? Necron?)

Thank you, sorry no space conflict just yet. This story is finnished but I may return to it in the future, And no alliance aka Blood Angel & Necrons Vs Nids, The Death Hands are a bit too fanatical for that

I think this is brilliant, I really enjoyed it

Don't go for the alliance Trondheim, that really diluted the Crons and the BA for me. That is horrid MW-vomit.

My Succubus has more pleasant vomit than that.

No worries. I like my Astartes to be xenophobic homicidial characthers.

Really nice story, Trondheim. I really like how you describe a combat, and how the story is flowing!

Now write the next part!