Yes, that's exactly what it says it does, 'magical' or otherwise.
To review the review, effort put in and all that to be respected, but you're well off base with most of the analysis so it's hard to give it any credibility.
If you are to stick with the unit by unit appraisal, which isn't necessarily wrong, I would drop all the fluff/description. Is this review for people who have the codex or don't? A review of changes, or strategy?
I own the codex, so I don't need to read how "Reapers dropped by X points, they can buy a missile upgrade, you can take an exarch with blah blahpower and they now ignore jink saves, cool!"
I know all that already because I own the codex and can read unit entries.
To use a food analogy, it's like a review of tomatoes as 'tomatoes are red, they come from a vine, they have a soft outer skin, and are squishy in the middle'. We know all that and it's boring, what might be interesting is a few recipes Tomatoes can be used it, good method of preparation, and so on. Your 'reviews' have too much of the former and very little of the later.
Try to stay away from ratings out of ten. It really doesn't serve a purpose and distracts from the text of the review no matter how good it is, and shifts feedback and discussion from the entry itself to where it rates on a pointless arbitrary scale. Don't encourage that. It's a simple mistake a lot of reviewers fall into, thinking they need to 'rate' things for the 'TL;DR' crowd.
Also, Night Spinners look like ballbags - seriously?
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