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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/16 22:19:30
Subject: Chapter: name undecided! General idea!
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Thunderhawk Pilot Dropping From Orbit
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Just pick a name that sounds good if you like, though you may have to pick a region of space from the star chart.
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Come into my web, said the spider to the fly.
Come rest your wings, and let us talk eye to eye.
For I am a spider, and you are the fly. Now that you are here, let us sit, and say hi.
But I have have no morsel to share, nor anything to eat. But wait, what is that stickiness upon your feet.
Ah now I have you, now I can eat. Now I can enjoy you, or store you as meat.
For I am the spider, and you are the fly. How else could it have gone, between one such as you, and one such as I.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/18 21:52:28
Subject: Re:Chapter: name undecided! General idea!
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Cog in the Machine
On your planet, burning your men!
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I have been very busy lately but I came up with a cool name:
The Ascendants
Im not sure if it makes sense though! And I have to make up a fitting "war cry" or slogan or whatever.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/18 21:57:56
Subject: Chapter: name undecided! General idea!
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Thunderhawk Pilot Dropping From Orbit
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Ascending from...Heresy?
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Come into my web, said the spider to the fly.
Come rest your wings, and let us talk eye to eye.
For I am a spider, and you are the fly. Now that you are here, let us sit, and say hi.
But I have have no morsel to share, nor anything to eat. But wait, what is that stickiness upon your feet.
Ah now I have you, now I can eat. Now I can enjoy you, or store you as meat.
For I am the spider, and you are the fly. How else could it have gone, between one such as you, and one such as I.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/19 08:44:39
Subject: Re:Chapter: name undecided! General idea!
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Cog in the Machine
On your planet, burning your men!
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The emperor ofcourse!
Or the Brethren sounds cool, i think i'll go with that.
"Side by side, we stand and die!"
Sounds good to me!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/19 09:11:59
Subject: Chapter: name undecided! General idea!
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Wight Lord with the Sword of Kings
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'The Ascended Brethren'?
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/19 10:25:15
Subject: Chapter: name undecided! General idea!
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Cog in the Machine
On your planet, burning your men!
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Hmm, that sounds good but does it make sense language wise?
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/19 10:43:29
Subject: Chapter: name undecided! General idea!
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Renegade Inquisitor de Marche
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The Ascendant Brethren?
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Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/19 11:30:33
Subject: Chapter: name undecided! General idea!
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Thunderhawk Pilot Dropping From Orbit
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+1 For The Ascended Brethren.  It plays well with the SM being raised above normal humans, and it sounds fine language wise too.
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Come into my web, said the spider to the fly.
Come rest your wings, and let us talk eye to eye.
For I am a spider, and you are the fly. Now that you are here, let us sit, and say hi.
But I have have no morsel to share, nor anything to eat. But wait, what is that stickiness upon your feet.
Ah now I have you, now I can eat. Now I can enjoy you, or store you as meat.
For I am the spider, and you are the fly. How else could it have gone, between one such as you, and one such as I.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/19 11:57:28
Subject: Re:Chapter: name undecided! General idea!
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Cog in the Machine
On your planet, burning your men!
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Awesome! I have made my choice then, thanks a lot guys!
Woe betide the Xenos that face us on the fields of strife
Nevermore will we give way to those who oppose our divine task
Woe betides those who thwart our Deity
Our wrath does not know boundaries
We are the Ascended, the bulwark of man-kind!
What do you think of my battle hymn? I like this kind of stuff alot, it adds a great deal to the "aura" in my opinion!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/19 12:33:08
Subject: Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Thunderhawk Pilot Dropping From Orbit
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Sounds good to me.
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Come into my web, said the spider to the fly.
Come rest your wings, and let us talk eye to eye.
For I am a spider, and you are the fly. Now that you are here, let us sit, and say hi.
But I have have no morsel to share, nor anything to eat. But wait, what is that stickiness upon your feet.
Ah now I have you, now I can eat. Now I can enjoy you, or store you as meat.
For I am the spider, and you are the fly. How else could it have gone, between one such as you, and one such as I.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/19 12:56:27
Subject: Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Wight Lord with the Sword of Kings
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Yep, pretty cool. Do they scream it during the battle, or present it more as a hymn?
I've always loved the idea of Assault Marines tearing apart heretics while chanting a sacred passage.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/19 13:16:12
Subject: Re:Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Cog in the Machine
On your planet, burning your men!
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Thanks, they will chant it during battle, war cries are so tacky!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/19 13:33:13
Subject: Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Thunderhawk Pilot Dropping From Orbit
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HERETIC! You must shout for the Emperor, even in the shower. Those who do not will exspect a friendly visist from their local comissar. For the Emperor!
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Come into my web, said the spider to the fly.
Come rest your wings, and let us talk eye to eye.
For I am a spider, and you are the fly. Now that you are here, let us sit, and say hi.
But I have have no morsel to share, nor anything to eat. But wait, what is that stickiness upon your feet.
Ah now I have you, now I can eat. Now I can enjoy you, or store you as meat.
For I am the spider, and you are the fly. How else could it have gone, between one such as you, and one such as I.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/19 13:37:24
Subject: Re:Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Cog in the Machine
On your planet, burning your men!
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For the Emperor!
I do plan on makimg a slightly shorter verse, maybe something like:
Come Death
Come Sweet Death
Take us now
Something short and impressive
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/19 13:58:35
Subject: Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Wight Lord with the Sword of Kings
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Themanwiththeplan wrote:HERETIC! You must shout for the Emperor, even in the shower. Those who do not will exspect a friendly visist from their local comissar. For the Emperor!
Us Dark Angels get away with it!
This may be interesting for a chant too:
What is your life?
My honour is my life.
What is your fate?
My duty is my fate.
What is your fear?
My fear is to fail.
What is your reward?
My salvation is my reward.
What is your craft?
My craft is death.
What is your pledge?
My pledge is eternal service
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/19 14:47:11
Subject: Re:Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Cog in the Machine
On your planet, burning your men!
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I've also read that one on Lexicanum, it's a very nice one but i'd like to think of my own one aswell!
Allthough I love this one:
Where there is uncertainty, I shall bring light
Where there is doubt, I shall sow faith
Where there is shame, I shall point atonement
Where there is rage, I shall show its course
My word in the soul shall be as my bolter in the field.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/19 14:52:37
Subject: Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Wight Lord with the Sword of Kings
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Yeah, it was meant more as inspiration!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/19 15:22:07
Subject: Re:Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Cog in the Machine
On your planet, burning your men!
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Ah! My bad, I often scroll through the lexicanum quote page for brainstorming!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/20 10:36:58
Subject: Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Thunderhawk Pilot Dropping From Orbit
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@ JP I like the one before, have long one if you like because when they're wading through cultists etc, they need something to sing.
@TNB Yeah thats a good one too.
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Come into my web, said the spider to the fly.
Come rest your wings, and let us talk eye to eye.
For I am a spider, and you are the fly. Now that you are here, let us sit, and say hi.
But I have have no morsel to share, nor anything to eat. But wait, what is that stickiness upon your feet.
Ah now I have you, now I can eat. Now I can enjoy you, or store you as meat.
For I am the spider, and you are the fly. How else could it have gone, between one such as you, and one such as I.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/20 19:36:25
Subject: Re:Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Cog in the Machine
On your planet, burning your men!
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Yeah! all those heretics to slay and so little time!
Edited the OP btw!
And a little question: do Chapters sometimes have imperial guard segments attached to it? If this is a clear no-go i'll leave it but i'd love to add in a bit of regular soldiers!
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/20 20:35:45
Subject: Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Thunderhawk Pilot Dropping From Orbit
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I wouldnt say all the time, just mainly on a campaign or crusade I think. Though some chapters are noted for their auxilery chorts and plantery defence force. The boys in blue a a good example, who have been noted as taking taking them with them to war. It's based upon how many did your ships carry? 40 or 50 thousand or double that would be believable amount for a fleet chapter to me. But as I said it depends on your fleet size and if you have any detatchments or two of Guard for some reason.
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Come into my web, said the spider to the fly.
Come rest your wings, and let us talk eye to eye.
For I am a spider, and you are the fly. Now that you are here, let us sit, and say hi.
But I have have no morsel to share, nor anything to eat. But wait, what is that stickiness upon your feet.
Ah now I have you, now I can eat. Now I can enjoy you, or store you as meat.
For I am the spider, and you are the fly. How else could it have gone, between one such as you, and one such as I.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/20 20:41:21
Subject: Re:Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Cog in the Machine
On your planet, burning your men!
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Interesting, I was actually thinking of a division that is an actual part ofthe chapter, not an IG add on.
Much like astral claws did but then in smaller number, say those that did not get through the entire becoming-a-space marine hassle, instead of being exterminated(thats what they do with those , right?) they become part of that division. Would be pretty cool detail.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/20 21:03:01
Subject: Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Thunderhawk Pilot Dropping From Orbit
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Some of those that don't make the cut commit suicide, and most dare not face the shame of returning home to their families. While some find hope and new perpose in a role (serfs) that still serves the chapter. The truely unlucky ones have their service to the Emperor ended with a bolt shell to their mutated and twisted malformed skull.
They are all trained killers at the end of the day so it's all about what drop out rate you have and do they recruit for a combat role on their home planet etc..
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Come into my web, said the spider to the fly.
Come rest your wings, and let us talk eye to eye.
For I am a spider, and you are the fly. Now that you are here, let us sit, and say hi.
But I have have no morsel to share, nor anything to eat. But wait, what is that stickiness upon your feet.
Ah now I have you, now I can eat. Now I can enjoy you, or store you as meat.
For I am the spider, and you are the fly. How else could it have gone, between one such as you, and one such as I.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/20 21:28:41
Subject: Re:Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Cog in the Machine
On your planet, burning your men!
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I was planning on those that failed the tests will not be send home, they are offered a few choices, become a serf, become a soldier or choose for death.
Death Marchers
The Death Marchers are the recruits that did not make it through the tests, these men have chosen to fight on for the Chapter. However not Marines these men are physically enhanced by the Chapter before sending them off to the "Last Rite", the name of the ship that carries the Death Marchers, what exactly is done to them is unknown.
They are fierce warriors, eager to prove their heroism to their great leaders, when not in battle they devote theirselves solely to the art of war, and to the Chapter.
They are housed on their own ship inside the chapters fleet, isolated from the Marines, they only come down when called upon for battle, only in battle do they encounter their masters, few of them have seen the Chapter Master in person, only the oldest have seen but a glance of their Great Leader on the field.
Some little idea, whatya think?
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/21 04:31:25
Subject: Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Renegade Inquisitor de Marche
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They need to be actual Imperial Guard.
Controlled, supplied and recruited by the Imperium and the High Lords not by an Astartes chapter.
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Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/21 08:06:51
Subject: Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Cog in the Machine
On your planet, burning your men!
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Hmm.. Ok.
there was an IG regiment with them whilst they got lost in he warp and stranded somewhere in space.
Thats plausible, right?
I have another question about foundings, as all the 26 foundings are already logged should I use the 27th? This makes the chapter very young whilst i'd like to be them atleast 700-800 years old.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/21 08:19:06
Subject: Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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They aren't already used.
Most foundings have spaces that are unaccounted for meaning you can usually slot a chapter into most of them. The 1st is full however.
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Dakka Bingo! By Ouze
"You are the best at flying things"-Kanluwen
"Further proof that Purple is a fething brilliant super villain " -KingCracker
"Purp.. Im pretty sure I have a gun than can reach you...."-Nicorex
"That's not really an apocalypse. That's just Europe."-Grakmar
"almost as good as winning free cake at the tea drinking contest for an Englishman." -Reds8n
Seal up your lips and give no words but mum.
Equip, Reload. Do violence.
Watch for Gerry. |
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/21 10:23:28
Subject: Re:Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Cog in the Machine
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Okay, i'll research it a bit.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/21 10:25:52
Subject: Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Wight Lord with the Sword of Kings
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Just use something between the third and seventeenth founding.
Old enough.
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![[Post New]](/s/i/i.gif) 2013/07/22 07:56:49
Subject: Chapter: The Ascended Brethren - General idea!
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Cog in the Machine
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The Chapter's founding is believed to be in the early 36th millenium, believed to be the 13th founding but these are just speculations as there are no records on who the first Chapter Master was nor who gace the order for the founding.
No records are present from which Chapter they derive from nor does any of their capabilities give signs from which chapter they originated from.
The only thing that is notable is their affection for close ranged combat but this feature could be from various chapters among which the Space Wolves, Blood Angels and Black Templars.
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