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Barpharanges







WARRIORS OF SYRATH

Years after the hourus hearsy , Daemon prince syrath summonded many chaos marines to his serve under his banner of chaos undivded , but not just chaos marines , guardsmen , mutants , traitors cultists and daemons to serve him , for power , money , weapons , whatever they wanteded as long as they would serve him , soon hundreads swore them selfs to Syrath ready to serve him , They became the Warriors Syrath . Soon Worlds were invaded and raided , entire citys burneded to ashes . Hundreads of Imperial citizens sacraficded in the name of Syrath. As Syrath grew stronger so did his forces , traitoris plantery govners pledged there forces to Syrath for there on personal gain. Space marines defecteded to Syrath , even the most devoteded space marines turnded by Syrath.

This message was edited 2 times. Last update was at 2010/06/21 22:10:30


 
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Thanks for the assitance Gathereing storm
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During the early 41st millennium Syrath sent Corax the 1st or Corax the great to destroy a small Blood angel fleet in the jubatus sector. Corax planned to ambush the Blood angels hoping that they would fall into his trap. As his plan came in to place he spread a rumour that the Warriors of Syrath where trying to invade the sector and so the Blood angels set of in search of the invaders. When the Blood angels arrived 2 of Syraths light destroyers hung in the darkness of space waiting for the Blood angels to attack. The Blood angel’s foolish commander ordered the Blood angels to attack the ships unaware of the cruisers closing in. The Blood angel’s commander most foolish mistake was not to leave any ships to protect the rear of his ship, and not noticing the ships he was attacking were Recusant-class light destroyers, one of Syraths fully automated ship that had no transportation capabilities. As the Blood angels came in range of the ships Corax came out of the Warp ambushing the Blood angels from behind, Corax tore the Blood angel’s lighter ships to shreds in a matter of seconds, Corax ordered the Light destroyers destroy the Blood angels escort ships by crashing into them, destroying them and damaging the Blood angels command ship, Corax then contacted the Blood angels commander offering him his life if he swore he would serve Syrath. The commander refused, Corax then ordered his captain to fire all weapons at the Blood angel’s ship, destroying it instantly. Three weeks later Syrath's warriors fleet invaded the sector bringing a warp storm with them.

hope its good
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Syrath is an ancient “minor” Chaos god known for his evil and vile contracts and deals that could twist and corrupt the most loyal Space marine , Eldar or any creature at all , promising power and wealth . This means Syrath has truly endless forces made up of Chaos marines, traitor guard’s men, twisted mutants, Daemons of Khorne, Tzeentch and Nurgle and even a small army of Chaotic Eldar. Syrath’s origins are ancient and largely unknown but it is believed that he was “hired” by Tzeentch to steel most of malla’s powers for Tzeentch, but instead stole them for him himself. This has left him with the ability to absorb the powers of the other Gods, leading Slannesh to sign a “contract” with him to stop him from absorbing his powers.

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Actully i want to change the name to Recusant which meens refues , or Necrosis .

This message was edited 2 times. Last update was at 2010/07/05 09:58:44


 
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Im going to start writing fluff about Necrosis , i think it is a better than Ca Ra Sakk , thanks for the advice Gathering Storm , plus Syraths origens is brillant.


Commandant Necrosis is one of Syrath’s most cold and unfeeling commanders even for a Nurgle follower. Having little emotion and felling gives Necrosis his power caring not for his troop’s lives or personal gain, his only goal is to serve Syrath. Necrosis has killed millions of Imperial servants and xenos alike in the name of Syrath, armed with “deaths scythe” a lighting claw rusted and plagued by years of war and death , Necrosis has brought terror and pain to a 1000 worlds and will bring terror to many more.

this is just a draft hope you like it.

This message was edited 2 times. Last update was at 2010/07/05 20:41:40


 
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Brillant Gathering Storm , im write now working on some more fluff for newly nameded Corakx , This is going to be instead of Corax . i now its simmler but i still wish rename it to this or Grievous.
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Supreme commandant Coraks the 1st
Coraks, the darkness, death, the gathering darkness are just some of the names given to Syrath’s most loyal and feared, Dreaded and hated by Imperials and Xenos alike. Coraks has lead Syrath’s forces to victory for 10,000 years and is covered in the blood of a million worlds, ascended to a Daemon prince, by both Syrath and Tzeentch. Coraks was awarded after ascension his own personal fleet, called Coraks Elite Guard. Coraks has become more machine than Daemon, after many battles Coraks has replaced much of his body with cybernetics and machinery, in order to increase his strengths. He has altered fear and hate emotions, leading them to become cold and unfelling murderers, who’s only pleasure is to destroy and kill, unwilling leading them to become servants of Khorne. On the battle field Coraks tears down tanks and walkers alike, fighting by his side are the Forge guard, a group of his most loyal warriors, ready to give their lives for Coraks.

EDIT iv changded the name to coraks

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2010/07/07 18:42:06


 
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Done , i was thinking about changing the fluff about multipal incarnations , and the name , plus thank you for the help with the fluff , also in one of your older posts you metionded you may be going to GW on sunday , please send a messege if or if not but thanks any way!

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2010/07/07 18:46:29


 
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During M41.12 Chaos war sorcerer Syrath headed to the plane clasoc a small imperial world, torn apart by war, left to rot by the Imperium of man, with no sign of aide or help coming, the planets Guvnor Alexander declared it free from imperial rule, shortly after that he was contacted by Lord Syrath offering the Planet protection and resources, in return Guvnor Alexander would sign a “contract” saying that the Planet would belong to Syrath but would be protected by Syrath’s warriors.
As Syraths shuttle landed on the landing pad Guvnor Alexander prepared to “meet” with Lord Syrath. As Syrath steeped out of his shuttle he was followed by ten Black armoured chaos marine, each sporting a unique helmet and armour.
“Greetings Guvnor Alexander, such a pleasure to meet you in the flesh, so sorry I could not “.
“What do you mean not in the flesh? “
“I cannot leave the warp but can use this automatized terminator armour for “meetings”.
“I see shall we get on with this then?”
Guvnor Alexander lead Syrath and his body guards in to the conference room , Syrath then handed Alexander the Contract and then called in two black daemon creatures each completely black , with horn and to bright yellow eyes , one holding a Quill , the other ink , they both handed each to the Guvnor Alexander .
Syrath handed the contract.
“Sign hear please.”
As Guvnor Alexander signed he felt a chill through his spine.
“Captain ,kill all non Syrath’s warriors on the planet.”
“Yes my lord.”
“What’s going on hear Syrath! We had a deal!”
“We did Guvnor, I protect the planet and give it resources but I said nothing of the civilians or you!”
Syrath lifted his Combi weapon and shot Guvnor Alexander, soon every citizen on the planet would follow. Clasoc became a factory world producing millions of weapons, tanks and walkers.



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Thank you Gathering Storm for the edits to the story , but tell me what do you think of it?
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Ranking

Lord Comandant :Leader of army groups and war legions .

Forge commander :Leader of tech marines and armourded divisions, normaly formare Iron warriors .

War sorrcerer :Sorcerrer of Syraths warriors , can lead battle groups and army legion. Comandant :Leader of battle groups .

Major :Leader of Squads , armourded units and specialits .

Lance corpral :Carrys heavy weapons .

Corpral :Basic marine .

War legion: 1000-1500 marines
Army group: 500-800
battle group: 50-480

Search http://warhammer40kfanon.wikia.com/wiki/Syrath%27s_warriors for my wiki page , this is just showing ranking and the groups that chaos marnies of Syraths warriors go to war in.
And a anothere thanks to Gathering Storm for ALL the work he helpded me with in writeing this

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2010/08/07 19:28:57


 
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The Council of Syrath are his 130 chosen folowers , each are allies and leaders of Syraths warriors , disscsing invasions and weapons deals .There are the 7 great members , Coraks , Arrius , Farseer Syees , Kar shriack , Blood reaper and the Plauge lord . Guarded by the Elite Black guard Bloodletters , the first daemons to swear themselves to Syrath , each carying great hell blades , axes and pikes.

This is just the start of the story of the Council of Syrath , if there are any qustions about any of the members just ask.
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I will make it 13 , cuase it is Syraths sacreded number plus cheak out the Syrath artical on 40k fanon wiki , i added a eldar miyth , plus wat do you think of my Elite Bloodletters?

This message was edited 2 times. Last update was at 2010/08/22 13:27:32


 
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I dont no about Bloodthirsters , cuase i think imho , i think Bloodletters are cooler , the Black guard are "elite" Bloodletters , but Syrath "does" have 2 Great Bloodthiersters , but wat do you think of my eldar mith and next sunday will Lord of change be there next sunday?
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SYRATHS GOD HOOD will not bring destruction to the ELDAR GODS! THE BLACK GUARD HAVE BLACK IORN AND BRASS ARMOUR
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Ok im sorry stress is geting to me agien , cheak PM for new messege , i will put a bloodthister as the black guards commander.
 
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