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HQ
Chaplain Vaerra
Plate heraldry: chaos black
Jump pack, plasma pistol melta bombs
135 points

Troop
10-man tactical squad
Dedicated rhino (Aemons’ steed)
Plate heraldry: blazing orange
registered sergeant: Verruke
Sergeant has: bolt pistol, bolter
Special: Plasma rifle
Heavy: Plasma cannon
220 points

10-man tactical squad
Dedicated rhino (Leviticus’ steed)
Plate heraldry: Regal blue
registered sergeant: Malokhai
Sergeant has: Bolt pistol, bolter
Special: Plasma rifle
Heavy: Plasma cannon
220 points

10-man tactical squad
Dedicated razorback (Aemons’ standard)
Plate heraldry: kommando khaki
registered sergeant: Malladeef
Sergeant has: Bolt pistol and Powersword
Special: Melta gun
Heavy: Lascannon
Razorback has lascannons
1st combat squad sergeant, three troopers, specialist
2nd combat squad four troopers, heavy specialist
275 points

10-man tactical squad
Dedicated razorback (Leviticus’ standard)
Plate heraldry: Iyanden darksun
Registered sergeant: Edirtien
Sergeant has: Plasma pistol and chainsword
Special: melta gun
Heavy: lascannon
Razorback has lascannons
1st combat squad sergeant, three troopers, specialist
2nd combat squad, four troopers heavy specialist* Epistolary is attached to this squad.
275 points

5 man scout squad + telion [dubbed Marchiae]
Plate heraldry: Desert yellow
4x sniper rifles Heavy bolter Torias telion
148 points

10 man scout squad
Plate heraldry: Camo green
9 shotguns
Sergeant has: power fist, shotgun and melta bombs
170 points

Elites:
Venerable dreadnought (Leviticus Aminos)
Dreadnought close combat weapon with heavy flamer
Assault cannon
185 points

10-man terminator squad
Dedicated land-raider god-hammer (Orions might)
Registered sergeant: Malokhai
Plate heraldry: Gretchen green
2 cyclone missile launchers
Land raider with Brother-sergeant Chronus
780 points

Tech marine Taerrai
Plate heraldry: Mordian blue
Servo harness
Storm bolter
Power sword
93 points

Servitor Gr34T1TM14 and Gr34T2TM14
Strain heraldry: Mordian blue stripes over skin
Programmer: Taerrai [TM14]
Servo arm
25

Fast attack:

10-man assault marine squad
Lead by Chaplain Vaerra
Registered sergeant: Gerron
Plate heraldry: Fenris grey
Plasma pistol, power sword
2x plasma pistols
260 points

Heavy support
Vindicator with siege shield (Leviticus’ revenge)
125 points

Whirlwind (Angel’s song)
85 points

obviously, first thing, how to improove this list?
secondly, is it written up comfortably to read? [does is it difficult to read, if that doesn't make sense?]

Consider that to fire those meltaguns you need to get out putting your 5 man squad at risk. The point of Razorbacks is to not get out as you have fire power. Take Rhinos instead or Razorbacks with combi weap sgt only.

No point in Telion with snipers.

You don't need melta bombs with power fist, 3 attacks power fist or one attack melta bomb I know what I go for..

Terminators in Land Raider cannot fire so cyclone is pointless.

Assault Squads should be in pairs for redundancy.

Tanks come in pairs for redunancy, ditch the Whirlwind.

I'm not sure what you mean by redundancy... As for it's meaning, it means to make another obselete, so it's kind of a stupid thing to say [a redundant one if you will.]

Terminator squad is in two. the first one has a powerfist and CML combo [5 SB/PF, 2 CML]
and then the termie squad remaining is in the LR, ready to pop out and lay down some tank crushing [they had chainfists...]


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and, meltas: they're 90 points. if it takes out a land raider, has it not just made up it's points, almost threefold?

the snipers are there to pick off large squads think about it. thats 7 chances to pin, not to mention a large blasts worth of 2+ wounds.

okay, the average is 5 hits with megablasta bolter.
thats about 4 wounds, and no armour save.

the snipers average 5 hits, and do around 4 wounds, and thats a pinning test.

What I mean is what happens when that single Assault Squad gets blown up? It's wasted that's what. But with two you have redundancy because when one becomes obselete you still have another

You still don't have Terminators on foot and ones in a transport which can shoot, wasting fire power. Deep strike them in, get teleporter homers.

What meltas are 90 points?

You don't pin hardly anything with high leadership tests and fearless and you counting on scoring a wound to pin and the game being 7 turns long. Scouts need 4+ to hit then 4+ to wound not very good. And Telion adds nothing, as already mentioned.

What's a megablaster bolter when it's a home? You mean heavy bolter? And if you do then still get armour saves, only wounds on a 2+

How can you average 5 sniper hits when you have 4 sniper rifles? Will never do 4 wounds at all as you don't get all to hit, they need 4+ to and must fail saves. You need to know the rules first and actually how Scouts work, because you'll find they don't.

Captain Solon wrote:I'm not sure what you mean by redundancy... As for it's meaning, it means to make another obselete, so it's kind of a stupid thing to say [a redundant one if you will.]

Redundancy atleast in this instance meens to have more then one of the same unit. Incase one of the units dies you have another one that can do the same thing as the first, it lets you make your stratagey alittle more robust.

Captain Solon wrote:Terminator squad is in two. the first one has a powerfist and CML combo [5 SB/PF, 2 CML]
and then the termie squad remaining is in the LR, ready to pop out and lay down some tank crushing [they had chainfists...]

This doesnt work the way you think it works. A Land Raider has a maxiumum transport capacity of 16 models, and models in terminator armor count as two models for the purposes of transport capacity. The most you can put into a land raider is 8 models. Assult terminators are better then normal terminators in close combat, consider going to TH/SS instead of chainfists.

Captain Solon wrote:and, meltas: they're 90 points. if it takes out a land raider, has it not just made up it's points, almost threefold?

And if its destroyed by anything..... It just doesnt fit into this list, thats all the guy before me is trying to say.

Captain Solon wrote:the snipers are there to pick off large squads think about it. thats 7 chances to pin, not to mention a large blasts worth of 2+ wounds.

Not sure where your getting the large blast from, I'm going to assume your getting it from Hellfire Shells from the heavy bolter? If so, its only a small blast template. When something uses a large template it either says large blast i.e. deathwind launcher or Ordanance.

captain Solon wrote:okay, the average is 5 hits with megablasta bolter.
thats about 4 wounds, and no armour save.

the snipers average 5 hits, and do around 4 wounds, and thats a pinning test.

Im not sure where you are getting no armor saves from, but poisned weapons still allow you to take an armor save...