Alright, a few things with your list.
First off, it's not legal. Now, if you are doing a house rules thing, that's fine, but you can't take LotD or the Ironclad in a real game. SW's don't have access to the vanilla codex.
Baring those two things, on your rune priest, drop the WTT, because it is a waste of points. The staff that the RP carries nulls psyker attacks on a 4+ stock.
You scored your lone wolf wrong, if he dies, you DO NOT concede a kill point, per his special rules. If he lives, you concede the point for not fulfilling his oaths. Aside from that, next time, either put some more points into your lone wolf, or don't take one at all. As he stands right now, he is rather underwhelming, not a true threat, and not really an asset.
On your long fang squad, drop the power weapon from the squad leader. He should not be in close combat, so that is a waste of points.
Your TWC are also the wrong point cost. A TH is a 30 point upgrade, not 15. A SS is also a 30 point upgrade, not 15.
Honestly, you really need to read the codex again, cause you pretty much cheated to stay in the fight as long as you did. A few personal suggestions as well, I would drop Canis, as I feel he is not really worth the points (due to lack of an invul save). Make a Wolf Lord w/ a TH/SS and a WTN for 215 points and tack him onto your TWC squad for some real devastation. (S10 TH shots ftw).
Again, reread your codex, your list has potential and a solid core, but needs some serious legalization.
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