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lol hey guys I started a short stop motion episodes of "Abaddon and friends" its only short becayse it takes HOURS just to make like 1min worth of time D:

I did all the voices/ animation/ editing etc. tell me what you think! I plan on making more.
if you can please rate and comment ^.^ keep in mind this is the first thing I have ever done like this lol but I tried


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XgzjGAT7Jqc

For a first attempt, it wasn't really that bad. I'd pay a lot more attention to the scenery, and tighten up the scenes a little bit. The dialogue could use a rewrite as well, and the scene with the plague marine started off funny "How many times do you think you could be shot in the face..." but then kind of lost steam for me.

I will admit that I laughed when Kharn showed up and killed all of the Berserkers though.

Just keep at it and refine your work. I see potential here.

Excellent thanks you for the constructive criticism! i'll def keep working on it. and try and add some more scenery next time.

I think the jokes are kinda bland, but i really appreciate how much time it takes to do stop-motion animation. Idk if this is just me being anal but the painting on some of the figures leaves something to be desired.don't let me discourage you this could really go somewhere!

Mukkin'About wrote:I think the jokes are kinda bland, but i really appreciate how much time it takes to do stop-motion animation. Idk if this is just me being anal but the painting on some of the figures leaves something to be desired.don't let me discourage you this could really go somewhere!

haha i'll guess mainly the poop nurgle marine? I actually found him in a box with a missing hand and figures "eh hes disgusting enough"

thanks for the feed back. if you can tell me what you guys would like to see ;D

Omg this made me laugh so hard! I sub'd!

I loved it.


loved when that Slannesh marine showed up

"ooo, you're a cutie" "Stay away from me" "oo i like it rough"

Subscribed but not for the Emperor

Thank you for the feedback and subs =D glad you guys enjoyed

REally really funny.... STAY AWAY!!!!

When's the next episode?

Black Corsair wrote:REally really funny.... STAY AWAY!!!!

Thank you

Grey Templar wrote:When's the next episode?

I'll try and get another episode out sometime this week. that 2min episode took me about 5 hours 0.0 since i did everything xP.

Pretty funny.
It was funniest up to the Nurgle interview after then it was okay funny.
Hope to see the next one.

I quite liked it. I was watching it expecting something lame and I was quite impressed. Some of the slapstick jokes, including the recurring Kharn gag was pretty good. Your interpretation of Abaddon is definitely a good character to work with and I recommend you continue to use him in future episodes.

My only criticism was that some of the jokes were pretty hit or miss (such as the plague marine). I suggest spending some more time on the script before reaching the production stage when working on your next piece.