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Made in us
Legendary Master of the Chapter





Chicago, Illinois

Yeah I have this done so far and Am Wondering what I could use for a codex. Its stuck between either Blood Angels or Vanillia Marines. But this force will soon be followed by the Emperor's Shields who use the Blood Angels Codex. And the Dusk Guard who are the terminators are descended from the blood angels... Pics will posted of the Strike Force of what I have done so far.

Captain Keltizifiel (will get librarian stats when I make the rules >.<
Power Weapon, Bolter,

unbuilt Librarian. (plastic of my own making.)
Planned on getting Force Weapon + Storm Bolter.

I could replace the Librarian with Captain Agro who is an actual Captain to lead the Emperor's Shields portion of the force. (which is still unbought but it is planned out)

Wanderer's SternGuard 5 man
Powerweapon, 2x Melta Guns, 1x Combi-Plasma

Wanderer's Tactical Squad 10 man
Plasma Gun, Lascannon, Power Weapon, Bolt Pistol

Wanderer's Tactical Squad 10 Man
Plasma Gun, Rocket Launcher, Power Weapon, Plasma Pistol,

Wanderer's Tactical Squad (unbuilt) 10 Man (needs suggestions...)
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Dusk Guard Attached Force
(space hulk terminators below)
Terminator Squad 5 man
Assualt Cannon,

Terimantor Squad 5 man
Heavy Flamer,

These are following a fluffy tale of the Battle of Merainis. And all characters like Keltizfiel and and Agro cannot be changed.
Captain Agro has a massive Axe which is the Sanguinary guard's Power Axe.

Lore Behind Captain Keltizfiel.
A little backstory on him. Sorry if it sounds kind of kiddish. But this is what I had to write for World Lit. So I thought hey it could be Keltizfiel's Background. Needless to say I got a C+ in that my teacher didn't understand any of it. Sorry for it being confusing. If you would like to help me reedit it. That would be great.
The Birth of a Hero

Varrcan walked amongst the park. His youthful features, and his golden like eyes mimicked that of a statue of Greece. He looked at the redden sky above him. For him it felt like morning to him. The rays of sun started to fade upon his face. He watched the trees as they settled to the new environment ahead of him. He had never drifted this far out of apartment. But the city seemed to be falling apart around him. Reports of so called Massive Armored Soldiers breaking through the Marines of the City with no pause. Everyday 20 men dissappeared without any trace, no powder, no bullets, nothing. Like they had just disappeared.
From the brush came the shadow pouncing up and down like a rabbit. Varrcan rolled his eyes. “Bloody Dog, scared the life out of me!” He breathed; a slight sigh of relief came from him. The dog was a Retriever and a shade of a brown along its back
Varrcan was use to being this suspicious as he was near the busiest city in the country. He always stared at the stars at this time. That was his entire idea of fun, looking at the stars. Varrcan smiled at the thought of being alone for his entire life. The dog licked Varrcan’s hand as he had a moment of nostalgia. Shaking the feeling away he petted that dog and walked away from it but whistled for it to follow the dog happily ran towards it’s master without a moments hesitation.
He walked for an hour through the almost deserted streets. It was usual for something like that to happen. His faithful companion followed behind him, deciding that his master knew exactly where he was going. Varrcan saw a nearby bench and walked towards it and sat on it. He’s eyes were low. It had been a tiring month for him.
He then saw the skies redden even though it was still night. He then saw several military trucks pull out immediately leaving towards the perimeters of the city. He thought to himself, if only he had taken that warning seriously, that month ago.

It was a different night, calm and the two moons that bloomed across the darkened sky were all but shimmering lights. As the City bustled with activity. Varrcan stared out the window, not a single scar across his face and his eyes were well rested. He was standing in his new office, the sign across the door read CEO’s office. A boring and undramatic life, nothing good, nothing bad, just existence as a being. What he thought should have been a incredible promotion just seemed like more work, his funds were exhausted as he payed for all the companies problems and he hated the idea of working another day at his office. He shook his head intent on getting home. A manager walked into the room, boldly walking in to disturb the already busy CEO. The Manager was short but had a grin across his face that could annoy the likes of a Comedian.
“Uhh, Sir, I see that you are unaware of the time. It seems that it is nine thirty may I leave now?”

Varrcan rolled his eyes. “Gorgis, please do not remind me of that, but why are else are you here?”
Gorgis laughed hardly he leaned against the wall patiently. “ I Got all night, unlike you my friend. Theres a well I have no Idea how what to call them. But theres a Robed guy on the second floor, hes been asking for you.”
Varrcan laughed, suspecting Gorgis of making a joke like this. “Ha! Good one Gorgis, but I am not going to fall for that again.”
Gorgis looked offended. “Do you really think I would lie about this? I am serious there is a Robed guy in the second floor, he has been asking for you!”
Varrcan got up off his chair, towering over Gorgis. “Ok I shall met this Robed Person and put this straight.”
Gorgis nodded. “He’s in conference room 124.”
Varrcan nudged past Gorgis. Who still stood leaning against the wall.
Varrcan walked into the stairway seeing that the elevator was closed due a malinfunction. He walked down the steps each trodding.
He arrived to see a Man poking through some books in the conference room. Varrcan quietly closed the Door. The Man seemed aware of this and turned around to see him.
Varrcans eyes met the Man. The Man was 8 feet tall, not even humanly possible, massively built, a coil of whiten hair and his blue eyes met Varrcans.
Varrcans spoke looking at the ground not trying to look into the eyes of the Giant. “What do you want? I have no idea who you are.”
The Giant hit his chest and bowed. “My name is Aleutian, I am here to deliver you a warning.”
Varrcan confused looked at the giant before him. He spoke up. “A warning you say? Why in He-“ the giant stomped his foot the entire ground shook.
“You shall not swear around me or else I will break your spinal cord. The reason why I am here is to tell you, this city is doomed, and you will have great misfortune within this month.”
Varrcan laughed. “Yeah right and the world will be glassed over by a giant robot.”
Varrcan laughed as he walked out the door. He pressed a call button and several security guards came into to greet the new comer.
Varrcan did not feel a single ounce of guilt of the dark deed he had just done. He walked up to the door of his house. Knocking on the door. Immedately the door was opened and there stood his wife. She bowed her head. “Your late If I don’t see you- Varrcan was use to his wife jabbering on for hours on end. In fact the entire reason why he married her was because it was the only way to stop her from talking.
Varrcan spoke in yes’s an no’s. Trying to ignore the subject of what he did today for work.
He did this everyday for 1 week. Then something changed.
His wife seemed more distant the entire city seemed more distant. He Pondered at this for a while. Then it happened….
Varrcan took a step outside and the skys above him It was redden but that of a ruby.
He chuckled. Remembering what the Giant had said to him. Repeating through his head like a CD.
He narrowed his vision down. His eyes grew unstable. He didn’t know what was happening. All around him he saw images of the city turned to ruin. He didn’t know what was happening if he was going insane or this was true.
A sudden striking pain hit him even more embolding into him one word. ‘Witch’.
He moved through the sidewalk his hands on his head. What is happening? He thought to himself.
He was soon flushed with images.
Each containing codes and dates. He had to wait.

-Current Time-
“Its been so long. Finnaly glad to see it is over.” He looked up as the giant Aleutian walked up to him. He finally asked. “What are here for?”
Aleutian grinned his metallic face. “For you my brother. You will come back with me in the end. As We are wanderers of the Gaxaly lets leave this dreaded rock my friend.”
Varrcan looked at Aleutian. “But I don’t even have a brother.”
Aleutian shook his head. “No, you are bond by honor. You are selected to come with us. Or you shall stay on this planet as it meets oblivion.”
Varrcan looked at his new found friend and looked at his humanity and spoke up. “Lets get off this Rock.”

Aleutian smiled faded. “You shall be called a new name Keltzifiel. ‘The Seeker’.”
Varrcan looked at the sky as they were wisped away as the city behind them ended in fire as massive bolts of energy struck the ground tearing the city apart.

Writers Note- I kinda had to reedit parts of this but. Anyway hopefully you guys either understood it or got lost. Don't worry, alot of non-40k players did too. Please point out the mistakes of the story and reedit it. Thank you all!

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Renegade Inquisitor de Marche






Elephant Graveyard

Not sure what a Gaxaly is but your fluff could be worse...

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Made in us
Legendary Master of the Chapter





Chicago, Illinois

purplefood wrote:Not sure what a Gaxaly is but your fluff could be worse...

Meh. It sucked. It was mean't to be bad. Wasn't really proud of it. I wrote it in 1 hour.

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Made in bn
Mutilatin' Mad Dok





Not shabby for the timeframe you claimed you wrote it in.
I see lots of written fluff by you, which proves your intent.
Your chapters all have fairly involved storylines, so well done!


S'all fun and games until some no life troll master debates all over your space manz & ruins it for you  
   
Made in us
Legendary Master of the Chapter





Chicago, Illinois

Ok heres a little joke that I wrote.
Bahram sprinted towards the cover as the lance tore the walls and buildings. His squad ducked into cover. From Behind him a tactical marine stared intently over his covered postion, The wave serpent stopped into its position. He clicked his grenade and threw it at the Wave serpent. Instead of hitting the Wave Serpent the Grenade bounced off the wall of the cover and headed straight back to the Tactical Marines Position.
The Tactical Marine jumped out of the way. And swore. "EMPEROR BE PRAISED!"
A huge explosion thundered in the courtyard. Bahram shook his head at the tactical Marine. He spoke into the vox. "That happens to be the third worst throw ever, of all time, Brother Taldo."
-BAD END-

Anyway thats what I wrote in a few minutes. It was attended to be a joke, and this is actual lore. That and it is a RVB mentioning, anyway the Model for Brother Taldo has been made and all I can say is he looks badass but I won't trust his throw.

This message was edited 1 time. Last update was at 2011/01/23 17:28:36


From whom are unforgiven we bring the mercy of war. 
   
Made in us
Legendary Master of the Chapter





Chicago, Illinois

My Models and my camera have been found so here you lads go! This is all the things I have done criticism is allowed.
Keltizfiel





Sergeant



Tactical Squad



and yes they do have all custom made bolters with different types of clips and they all have combat knives.

and parts of my bits box.

This message was edited 3 times. Last update was at 2011/02/05 22:50:14


From whom are unforgiven we bring the mercy of war. 
   
Made in us
Legendary Master of the Chapter





Chicago, Illinois

Heya guys heres an update. I finally got my Ravenwing! Of course I need some ideas to put into my army like plasma vs melta.
Should I get melta to compensate for the plasma weaponry I have? Or should I just get plasma and become another anti armor army.

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