First of all, welcome to Dakka
There is no need to place how much every upgrade is, if you don't do that, it's more readable.
dakka farta wrote:
CCS-50
bolt pistol-2
power sword-10
Vox-5
plasma gun-15
astropath-30
Regimental standard-15
total-127
Can be written as:
CCS:
boltpistol, Power Sword, Vox, plasmagun, astropath, Regimental standard.
This squad is overcosted and unfocused. I would advice to drop the astropath, Bolt pistol and Regimental Standard. Try taking more plasmaguns and perhaps a Chimera. If possible, try taking two
CCS.
lord commisar-70
If you really want it, you can keep him, if you drop him get another
CCS, if you don't give him a
PW.
priest-35
The priest is 45 points. Try taking an eviscator on him. He is quite good in
CC and very good in a blob squad.
Elites
Ratlings-50
I don't like these guys. Try dropping them to get more points.
storm troopers
power sword
2 plasma guns
total-190
Stromtroopers aren't 190 points, they are 125 points (
PW and plamsa included.)
I would drop the
PW, you don't need it. It's a suicide squad and most likely it will die. Why waste points on something that dies?
PCS-30
plasma pistol-10
Vox-5
2 grenade launchers-10
2 chainswords
total-55
The plasma pistol is quite risky. It can blow up you officer and that is not what you want.
The vox is good. Try swapping the other guys for flamers?
Infantry squad combined-100
power fists-30
attached commisar-35
grenade launchers-10
vox-5
total-180
Try making 3 squads of out them. Perhaps attach the squad below?
I wouldn't advice powerfists, but rather
PW's. It can be quite useful to give the Commissar a
PW too.
Try swapping the
GL's for meltaguns.
infantry squad-50
plasma gun-15
vox-5
total-70
Drop the vox and plasma and then let them join the other squad.
Special Weapons squad-35
3 flamers-15
total-50
Looks good.
Special weapons squad-35
snipers_15
total-50
Maybe more flamers?
Heavy Weapons squad-60
heavy bolters-5
total-65
One
HWS isn't going to make your day. Try to get both of them with the same weapons. (I would advice
AC's.)
Heavy Weapons squad-60
missle launchers-10
total-70
See above.
Conscripts-80
Conscripts... Try getting a lot of them and then squeeze the lord commissar with
PW in them.
Penal legion-80
Have them outflank, sounds ok.
Veteran Squad-70
3 meltaguns-30
plasma pistol-10
Chimera-55
stubber-10
hunter killer missle-10
total-210
Overcosted and unfocused. Try dropping the plasma pistol, Stubber and HKM and getting 1 more of these squads.
Veteran squad-70
meltagun-10
Chimera-55
storm bolter-10
hunter killer-10
total-155pts
Drop the HKM and Storm Bolter, get meltaguns for those points.
2 scout sentinals-70
autocannon-5
total-75
Give both of the sentinels
AC's, not one... THey can harass the backfield.
basilisk-125
Try dropping this one in favor of the
LRBT
Leman russ battle tank-150
heavy bolters-30
total-180
No need for the sponsons.
Leman Russ Demolisher-165
heavy bolters-30
total-195
No need for the sponsons again.
All 'n' all you made some beginners mistakes, but with the advice form here, you can make quite a good list.
