I'm about to reiterate what other peeps have said, but just to prove that it's good stuff
nidsrule wrote:Lords:
Doombull w Sword of Strife, Armour of Destiny, Enchanted Shield, Luck Stone...335 pts
You have a lot of ways to deal with that illegal double magic armor, with the simplest being drop the luck stone and change armor of destiny to talisman of preservation + heavy armor (or make the enchanted shield a normal shield). You could also go for heavy armor + shield + ramhorn helm + dawnstone for rerollable 3+ armor that gives extra attaks, or slap gnarled hide on there for rerollable 1+ armor of extra attaks. Also, consider the sword of swift slaying, rerolled attaks are better than +1 attak.
Heroes:
Bray-shaman w Feedback Scroll, Lvl 2 wizard...160 pts
Wargor (Army Standard Bearer) w Heavy Armour, The Beast Banner, Ad. Hand Weapon...193 pts
Seconded on dispel scroll being more useful than feedback. I would also give your
BSB gnarled hide over anybody else, keeping that dude alive is key (sorry doombull

)
Core:
20 Gors w ad. hand weapons, full command...185 pts
20 Ungors w spears, full command, Ungrol Four-horn... 204 pts
10 Ungor Raiders w musician, Halfhorn...69 pts
Tuskgor Chariot...80 pts
10 Warhounds w Poisoned Attacks, Scaly Skin (6+)...100 pts
Do you really like Ungrol? Cause I'd love to grind up his points and invest it into more gors (30+) and more ungors (30+) in both of those units. And I'd split those warhounds into 2x 5 pups with no upgrades, saving another load of points to invest in troops.
Special:
5 Minotaurs w ad. hand weapons, full command (Bloodkine has Gambler's armour)...349 pts
10 Bestigors w full command (Gouge-horn has Gnarled Hide)...165 pts
3 Razorgors...165 pts
If you're taking a bloodkine, I'd give him blackened plate at the drop of a hat. 4+ fire ward is amazing, against dwarf shooting but also all those flaming deathstars out there. That or ironcurse icon if you're feeling frugal. I agree that the bestigors need at least 5-8 more troopers (and they don't need gnarled hide on their champ!). On the razorgors, have you considered running them solo? 1 pig can get up to a lot of mischief, whether redirecting or going for artillery, and doesn't get scared when 25% of its friends are blasted away. I'd say go with 2x 1 razorgor and use the extra points for more gors / ungors / bestigors.
Hope that helps, I think the points will work out with the above trimming. Good luck out there.
- Salvage